/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3372187
this redline is by no means perfect so don't take it as law, but I tried to flesh out your shapes more, the biggest issues I see are the fact that her left arm is too long and her shoulders aren't defined enough. I'd recommend drawing from reference a bit more, spending about a fourth of the time on any one pose as you did that one just to grind through a bunch and commit stuff to memory. some anon who's more competent with the nitty-gritty anatomy stuff can correct what I did here if they want