/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2618022
random edit here. made an alternate without the darker line at all on the sword. I think the reason the dark was distracting in the first place was because it was maybe too much contrast on what was more of a "background object." Dunno if this works better or not though.

>>2618112
not real pixel art get out of this thread reeeeeeeee

kidding aside, I think the animation on that ...thing... would look better if it didn't have the smear on the teeth. Not only is the animation not quick enough for a smear to work, the smear itself doesn't even make sense. That is, the smear suggests the teeth are coming down from a higher spot, but the teeth never reach that height outside of the smear.