/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5149658
Not much of a cunny fan but I feel like your construction method isn't being used as it should. In your box example, you're twisting her in a completely different angle. Either that Or the guidelines you're putting down are just wrong.

Box construction requires actually being able to draw boxes, which admittedly doesn't seem to be your forte yet. Your doodle on the right, while having better and easier to use shapes, have a bit of proportion issues-- the torso is way to short.

For the sketch itself, the legs are fantastic looking, but the way she's twisting and the angles just don't make much sense. Her left arm looks like it disappeared, and there's no way she's using her hand as support when she looks more like she's slipping on it. The neck is way too long from where it should be (the middle of the shoulders) and makes everything look dislocated.

I redrew your faces a bit. I've seen a lot of your work in the past, and it seems you're still missing a bit of the 3D aspect anime faces have.

I also changed the pose a bit to make it a bit more dynamic, but kept the legs intact. It isn't much of a redline, but I hope you get my points better. I don't know if my handwriting is readable though.