/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4062915
>>4062988
also im serious man. im joking about you training me but if you have any tips id love them...5,000 a month is insane, i live in a shitty little apartment and struggle to make grocery money. im pretty good at drawing but i dont know how to pipeline and market myself..if you have any advice i'd sincerely love it.

pic related, my art on left.

>>4042204
Hey. I made an overpaint. You got potential, I just want to help push you. I agree with what other people are saying, you tend to over detail too much and add high contrast evenly everywhere. Nothing wrong with rendering, but you can't hide mistakes with detail. I fixed some proportional issues, added points of interest in certain areas (composition by changing the arm and squeezing tits, and differentiating the eye from the face by replacing blue with yellow/gold)

I would say in your case, focus less on detail, because you can paint fine now. I would worry more about propotion and shape varaition, composition, gesture and storytelling (what -is going on, why -are they doing that, who -is that).
Keep it up. I took a peek at your twitter, I like some of your stuff.