/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1670450
It seems unclear as to where the midsection meats the lower section and just where the lower might be. Perhaps try a little more under sketch to map out how the spine and hips work?I also feel that the leg dosen't look like it was layered over well enough here's an example. The arms seem a bit too long but may be your going for a lanky look? I would also suggest moving the wall like where it meets the floor up a little higher in the picture plane to better add some depth. Hopefully this helps.