/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4715172
the thing is, the story doesn't really follow any single character, it's multiple characters that have to be accounted for in a 50 page space.

>line-weight
I'm aware that I don't have much variation is line weight but that's mostly due to not having the right equipment necessary to pull it off.

>Page 8
The driver was going to be drawn but was cut out due to it not being necessary for the character to interact with. If he was in an extended convo, I'd consider drawing him

>skating ring
It does get a 2-page spread due to character going back to it after dropping off his items.

>paneling
the first couple of pages are to more focus on the action of skateboarding more than anything. One issue I generally have with a lot of manga is how badly some place full body pictures of their characters. I wanna focus on the characters face and upper body to create more attractive panels.

My artwork generally isn't made for comics but illustrations. image is related to this topic. My later pages are much more detailed in terms of artwork because I had more confidence in myself as an artist.