/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2680777
Your lines are very unsure. It's not full-on chicken-scratching, but it looks pretty messy. Try thinking before you move your pencil, and focus on drawing smooth lines in one go.
A lot of the of the construction is wonky; I can't tell if the line through the torso on the two top right sketches are abs or the ribcage, since they're too far down to be abs and they're not V-shaped enough to be the ribcage. On some of your drawings it also looks like you drew the upper body as a thin rectangular prism (second to left and second to right on the top) with no distinction between the ribcage and the stomach. You should show some difference between the two sections (pic related) if you're going to construct.
Hope this helped, keep it up anon. You're getting it.