/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6736703
I never would have found your post asking for help in that other thread. So, that's the reason this thread exist. There are two or three redliners here, we check this thread, when it bumps, then, maybe, someone is asking for help, easy.
We are high-beg/intermediate, so we just do a quick redline good enough to help, if it helps it helps. That's it. No over-kill critique, no bashing, no crabbing, we do it because we love drawing. What I want to say, is that I have no idea how to help you with that inner thought you have about your work, LOL.
All I can say is what I like about your drawing, and, what it makes it hard for me to read from it. Like i.e: the clothes are not clear, I don't understand what she's wearing, I know she's holding a pant and a shirt. I do understand she's choosing clothes to get dress. What I like, I like her design, face and head, body proportions are appealing.

I think you need to keep drawing to build a visual library big enough to tackle any composition. You're almost there. The problem lot of artists have at the beginning is that they don't like what they draw, it looks ugly, so they don't feel motivated to draw a lot of that. But your work looks nice, at the core you have this, just keep drawing. Don't worry about rendering, just draw till drawing becomes second nature.