/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>7141766
Your drawing too messily and destroying any kind of readability, which you kinda want to be able to clearly see what mistakes need fixing. You can't do that if you can't even tell what is a genuine mistake vs just shit smear. Two, your kinda over exaggerating everything. Her leg doesn't need to be that wavy to get down the core forms, and whether or not you want that kinda exaggeration as your "style" you can more easily refine those shapes later after the core forms are down. And lastly, i think you're too focused and tunnel visioned about all the exact forms the subject is built of but neglecting to think about the basic proportions of those shapes and forms. A hammer is a box and a cylinder but if the box is smaller then the cylinder it's not gonna read as a hammer.