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>>1970797

imo I think the composition works better if the "camera" is moved slightly downwards so it shows less grass and gives more depth to the sky

maybe use cool shadows? desaturated blue for lines+shadows and subtly add a bit of saturation on the base colors. I think that this is a good way to make those soft colors pop out a bit more.
but I could be wrong, and not the greatest example too. but just my 2 cents