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>>3933713
Ah fair enough, didn't see that anon. And I think I see where you're coming from, but I still feel you could've used a bit of crosshatching to imply that shadow instead of a heavy line, like the one you did for the throat, otherwise it looks like her jawbone continues way past the chin and curves towards the throat.
Maybe the rest of what I said is the hairs fault, but that's on anime hair, shit doesn't really make sense It's okay, I'm a beginner so I'm probably way off and you can take with a big, fat rock of salt.