/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

finished image.
Threw in some bs filtered background, ik ik...

>>6669024
>>6669011
Yeah I get you, and that was my inital ideal but I ended up going with a more stiff pose as it was more fitting for the pinup, since she would be a maid who's not happy about her job, so she has to look disciplined, rigid, uncomfortable and displeased . The head tilt would make her look too inviting and "sweet" if that makes sense.
Thank you for your input lads :)

>>6669063
looks good, have you tried some thiccer outlines? I think it might buff up the whole thing.