/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>7065950
>>7065988
>>7066080
i hope this can help you understand, i've traced over the silhouette and some of the major interior lines of your drawing and a drawing i found on pixiv. even with just these outlines, it's easy to imagine the 3d forms of the legs and arm in the pixiv picture, but it's harder for yours. why?
- the C curves in the line of the dress as it passes over her legs gives the impression of cylinders in perspective. this happens for the outline of the dress passing over the armpit too.
- the forearm is foreshortened properly.
- although the breast outlines seem reasonable, the overalls strap is drawn in a way that doesn't interact with the size and curvature of the breasts at all, it's flat.
- i cba to trace over the hair and face lines, but you'll find that the 3-dimensionality of your head and hair is also much lower.
you can try doing this for photos of boxes and spheres too, trace the outline and see if your mind can feel a 3d object that could have that outline.