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Mori Kaoru
Kui Ryouko
Shirahama Kamome
Hayashida Q

Drawing the same cute girl doesnt make you btfo good japanese artists. Nor is the style looking any better, it just looks like it belongs to tumblr.

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You should really take note of the criticism for the lack of readability, you've got 2months which is plenty of time to redraw a spread and improve clarity. If this is something amateurs can see clear as day then it is an issue.

Consider reading Tongari Boushi no Atelier and look at how beautifully the panels flow while also being an absolute work of art at the same time. That and reading everything by Satoshi Mizukami, you're trying to do far too much.

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