/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6161589
I think you went too far with the feet angle, I see you are trying to make them point inwards, also the legs are bending too much imo.
As for the line of action as you mention, I think basically it's fine.
I'm looking at the green line on the left and I think it's balanced, not a huge fan of the way the dress goes along with it, I feel like with her movement it should have a more dynamic shape.
All things considered this is a pretty hard drawing so it's nice to see you pushing yourself.
And yeah I think she looks kinda tall, see picrel, tho these proportions may make sense on a more realistic style.