/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3608073
>>3608073
these comics are all exposition and no payoff.
for example- look at this page. they cut her long, beautiful hair- a huge focal point of her character- and there's no MONEY SHOT. they just move on. i checked the next few pages just to be sure. they don't show off their characters, backgrounds, or other misc objects. even during big scenes, the panels stay tiny. there's almost no variation.

boring
boring
BORING

look at the page i put next to this garbage for comparison. character cuts her hair- a big deal for just about any girl in a comic- and bam! we get a panel taking up half the page showing off her new look. readers eat this up, so why did the comic on the left skip this? as far as i know, artists love drawing these kind of scenes too. it's not like it's a huge inconvenience. i really can't understand why tumblr artists go out of their way to be bland.