/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5014961
Another /beg/s attempt at this. I could have fixed more things, but I was bored by it already.
Drawing smiling people when you can't draw faces good is setting yourself up for a failure - there's too many things that go into smile and even good artists sometimes fail to make it look convincing. You're still drawing eyes and nose without thinking about their construction. You're drawing a mouth as a symbol, without thinking about lips or the curvature of the mouth... And so on.
Start by drawing people with neutral face expression, with good lighting that shows face structure and preferably with males as their face structure is more defined and easier to study. There's a reason Loomis starts with them.