/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4193065
1. i like the eye on our right. i feel the form, the colors and values are nice. the eye on our left though looks flat.

2. i like the overall painterly/watercolor like rendering. thats why i dont dig the way you rendered the hair, it looks out of place because its way more smooth and "shiny" compared to the rest. cover the hair up with your hand and youll see what im talking about, it looks like a completely different and more cohesive piece without the hair.

3. i like the sharp edge versus dark cast shadow on the hoodie, right under the neck. i would even put some more highliht (but a flat kind of highlight) on the hood.

4. i think the background isnt doing anything good here, it has a negative effect on your piece if anything.

5. i dont think the back of the hair should be so dark, some light could help here.

sorry for the fix, i just think youre cute and i wanted to fix just the background but your face kept me for a bit longer