/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1818095
i have one

>>1813807
It must have been a long day.

>>1809128
thank you vm. It seems i have too thick lines then.

anyone can tell me how do i make the lineart 'blend" like this with color and values ?

>>1808126
you broke her arm bro.

>>1806411
i think hes doing the "i cut my thumb" thing.

>>1805146
yes, sorry, typed too fast.

>>1805079
the rythm of the body is wrong. In the profile there are lots of curvature showing. if you think of the torso as an egg it would be slightly titlted as a torso. Baiscly body follows the rythm of a spine wchic is kind of "S" shape. your spine is as straing as "I". the upper legs would have this rythm "(" while lower opposite "(". the neck also dosent come straight but in some angle. its all wrong go study hampton.

>>1804318
something in this direction ?

>>1804302
i jsut dont know mane. Its one of those pose i just dont understand. Thers not much reference for it and no direct one at all.

i need help with this one. Im clueless about the girl pose, how much of the back would be shown etc. plz help for real.

>>1801650
break the problems you see in this page and work a lot on them one by one.

>>1800973
dayumn thats too good.

I asume the rendered ones are very hard referenced right ?

>>1800827
anon dont be silly i need another 300 years to be teal. I did read some of his redlines recently tho.

working on it, today gonna nail the maids (hue). any mistakes on them ?

>>1799703
nope, nothing was timed. The bottom middle one was a torso construction practise.

was practising line quality and poses and cloths recently.

>>1798958
I realy realy like the face but the vagina is totaly wrong.

>>1796801
zoom in close when doing lineart and use your arm. Use layers per stroke if neccesary, use marquee tool if neccesery for elipses.

>>1791713
why not showing.

>>1791691
lower arm is too short
keep in mind you can and should make a variaty of line thickness ( i can see you tried some but its too little)
the face is unapealing
I think the feets should be placed differently on the ground, also the lower legs are too short.

all I can say is that it is nicely clean.

>>1787379
thanks ! i understand. Im trying to do this "2 value rendering" that i saw in steave hutson video but i guss i keep on loosing this clear light and shadow separation. will do this harsh lighting next time .

mfw this happened to this thread just because i posted some schoolgirls.

>>1787238
i love the lineweight.