/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2116966
I pause movie screens to get the angle I want and then I used my face for the eyes so unless unless you wanna see my sexy face...jk

>>2116735
well that goes for both painting hahahaha

I've been without internet I'm on open wifi in some dudes lawn LoL

And lineart for a painting I want to redo make her stupid small I comparison to the environment found out less you draw on the face the better it looks cool

Paint 2 got a face right for once with heavy ref woot normal comp is bigger but I liked the square crop makes it a bit more personal going to change the dragon thing so it moves inbetween her pointer and thumb I am aware she has Spiderman hands lol how is the color doing trying to make everything similar in value

Final mech pilot not sure if I'm going to spend the time rendering them.does the suit seem too over designed ?
No idea what I'm going to put outside its window screen thing

>>2116589
Uhh I see some promising color not much though you're mashing together hues of different temperatures making it muddy that and using blacks river into the moon is a bit boring Imo my advice would be to Wai for a full moon and look around at the colorsit would be even better to paint it take my advice loosely I know very little about color

>>2113964
Uhh honest critique is that it's from a photo and ita kinda pointless going out of your way to make something better when the I information is already set I just don't see the point my advice and take it loosely would be to draw from imagination and focus on making those drawings better than the last that way you gain something meaningful

>>2113944
I dunno man I think brushes radically change how you perceive your own painting or at least the way you handle painting it

Little experiment based on other mech man yields interesting result I need to play with it some more

To be fair drawing took 7 mins I love my spooks too much to spend only a nib of time

Revive this spooky ass thread
2spooky2spooky

Fuckin image is giving me a new strain of space aids


>>2112822
What the other guy said pretty much sums up the problems easy fix would be to turn the torso away from the pelvis push the arms back and refer the the paintover on the legs it's nice but your gesture is too tight loosening him up a bit would help all gl mang

Life paint trying to beef up color knowledge squinting seems to be helping alot

This one is problematic will most likely change flag to intersect with him give it some more flow

Aight got two paints and two sketches

Has anyone figured out how to shot web?

>>1877645
I love a good rivalry, competition keeps the blood hot.

The reason I started drawing in the first place was to get better than one of my close friends. She stopped drawing entirely, RIP.

>>1878442
That's Lefty right? I think you can take him down if you work hard enough.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=17lkdqoLt44
song loosely related

Dunno what im doing stuff I guess
more B&W work for meeeeeee

>>1856805
Like anon said try to push some of the values to define things. Really love your colors.

>>1856890
bees knees this one is

>>1857075
I like your values

for brushes finding a good mix between soft brushes and hard brushes is something to tinker around with. Or you can get a brush with a hard and soft round tip which is the tits imo. Brushes are cool try as many as you can!

>>1857067
bullshit rendering is a pain in the ass, its mostly time time and more time and learning new ways to approach things I think anyways, dunno.

toppest of keks

>>1802342

Woops forgot file

>>1802213
this looks neat gabe

>>1802194
agree with anon try to be a bit more conscious of value and form other than that keep at it

>>1801873

Srry for being spammy

do you guys have any critique on color or values so far? I'm looking at it in B&W looks bretty okay.

>>1801914
yea im gonna tighten it up I have like 5 more days to work on this before I start another paintan

painting from lineart is pretty interesting

its like a coloring book, I open up and shit everywhere.

>>1800680


k painttime

my hand hurts

>>1800691

Sorry for bad paintover
but for value separation you can just invent shit
there could be a bus with a stripe behind her anything really

Im bad at hair so I can say much but just simply everything first then you can go in with the bounce light smaller strokes and what not
big strokes bigbigbigstrokes

try to simplify and make more opaque strokes
dont take as law just ideas

>>1800683
I want everything down so when I go to paint I dont end up with some void where something should be and end up driving myself mad

>>1800688
I paint enough angry goblins as it is, haha.

>>1800702
yea I think im going to move both hands around flip the right one to some kind of clenching position its still a bit stuffy yea

but yea I really want to push myself so yea


thanks guys