/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

trash I'll be re-doing tomorrow without skiping drawing :/
trying to do mononoke as artorias kek

no refs used, inspired in ruan jia uncanny faces from memory I guess, didnt stress on this one

dunno if worth pushing further anymore

>>2686296
messing around with lighting/effects

first time seeing with my own eyes a miracle of this kind on ic

any cc welcome before polishing

>>2686146
do two rounds more of redrawings your step 2/3 to get it accurate

there are some pretty obvious mistakes, you've not measured a lot of things

overal shapes are not too far away, but proportions are missplaced and legs/arms end like she's going hollow

better if you avoid shading like that

deform tool / liquify might help you correct your mistakes faster

so solid fundies previous posts
>>2680490
her head is small and her face is too, so it looks even smaller
you canget away duplicating it and try using deform tool+liquify

it's not real ink

>>2679033
if you overlay to compare previous-after edit, you won't miss anything

right forearm is short, does not increase in size due to foresortening, forearm is too long,
left hand is gigantic now, forearm is broken

face is worse now

you can't fix without underdrawing (understanding)
btw do you trace/grid hands or what

propper shadowing

>>2677834
when asking for critiques show the underdrawing too, there are the weak fundies afterall

>>2677607
just like I did here, no fundies = fial
>>2677839
lmao

>>2676794
you need to draw more and paint less, the bg/ground needs to read with perspective, those bg trees too

>>2677790
yeh, it looks like before and after memes kek
I know, it happened because I started doodling left starting at the eyes pretty brainless, first did face, then decided to do priscilla, then did hair, then body (recipe for disaster obv), and to make right I did with proper technique (gesture+shape design+construction)

still, I think relying a bit on left turd helped to draw from imagination better, just because ideas are already settled, knowing this shit i'll start to ref previous step/sketches to draw better without ref :S

>>2677693
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is that everything you've done or you've erased the sketch, or it's occult on other layer?
did you do that lineart directly?
is that all you've drawn?

you seem to be trying to get finished edges/shapes/outlines straight on a single run, at first attemtp
and you're forgeting form/construction so everything looks flat

set your brush line weight to pressure for lineart

>>2677671
isn't accusing kyle of trazing a meme already?

>>2677609
not too good, came back and it's too stiff/symbolic as it used no ref to rely on
tried to redo relying on the wonky drawing and it seems to be improving a lot
wtf

feels wonky

>>2675354
wat

>>2675290
the key you're missing is that everything on that sketch is not definitive, it's not intended to be accurate, it's the ground to settle a more accurate drawing over it, and after that the line art

>>2673142
personally I struggled a lot to use a tablet as I felt a downgrade in hand-eye control, couldn't enjoy drawing on tablets until years later I tried a screen-tablet, should have pushed trought instead of fleeing away tho

use the tablet every day, yet,use the most natural/efficient tools you have available to study, you might be more productive with analogic

if you're not doing traditional, you should be already doing

don't get sketchbooks, print paper is way cheaper, don't get either copics or expensive materials, like, ever, all of it will be a waste of money, save da money

people who spend the money without getting real value back don't make it

>>2672728
welcome to ic I guess
that's symbold drawing, best thing you can do, if you want to start learning to draw as an adult, is reading the sticky (loomis is early for you right now, drawabox.com too
literally, you gotta learn to measure shapes and angles with modules to be able to copy (see), drawing with the left part of the brain might helps you in that regard

doing stuff with your hands won't get you anywhere, you won't learn stuff on your own unless you plan to invent the wheel every step ahead, which you're not gonna do

at any approach, keep in mind you have to delay gratification, don't seek to reach finished results from every scrach (unlike you're already doing).

pic attached is an example of starting bricks to reach this shit >>2672320
drawing is like building, don't forget the ground

starting from the roof leads to nothing gud

>>2672332
picked her because of liking / really easy outfit to draw quickly

really bad pick to get attention probably but w/e

leaving this for now, tried "le pixiv artist" painting style instead of my usual renders, looking more like copics

any feedback apreciated

>>2672284
if you're not using colorpicker, your color tastes are ahead of your drawing skills
don't make final lineart so soon, if you want to progress, instead, post your sketch here and don't step up until you get what you're missing from feedback and apply it to your sketch, it's too flat

>>2672007
yeh it feels a bit weird but I don't really understand it too much

feet and hands next
lighting seems to be going alright

that furry's right arm reads like it's foreshortening in the opposite direction it should

>>2672007
It should read like going out, but it seems like it goes in

>>2671934
mikufag dot com

>>2671401
ugg

this threads are getting really salty flavours

this is exactly why I started to namefag

drawing b-hestia

>>2671730
excelent forms senpai