/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3178858
i think this is a great picture, reminds me a little of matt wagner and a little of bruce tim. that's some nice graphite

>>3181051
don't press down so hard when you draw. you can more easily fix things later if you draw lightly.

>>3179539
my body is ready

well /ic/?

>>3179288
my point is if you can't define your criticism with a piece of art then your opinion is invalidated by your own ignorance. just because you can't come up with a real argument as to why something is good or bad doesn't mean everyone else cant.

>Stop acting like your work is great, it is clearly near beginner level (not absolute beginner).

i've actually been very humble about my own work, its everyone else that seems to have a problem with it. unlike you i just don't give a shit if everyone else likes it or not and your misinterpreting that as a massive ego.

1. i was doing a study of how akira toriyama tells a story. he is one of the greats after all
2. personal opinion which has some merit but id mostly disagree with "terrible". like i said that page layout was a sketch i did for fun.
3. if you want to comment on my personal work i will be more than happy to share some more finished pieces.

im trying to help you, but your own stupid ego won't let you listen to me. stop thinking you know everything about art.

>>3178701
tl;dr: don't listen to /ic/

>>3178567
how aren't they substantive enough? they are drawings aren't they? you cant critique fan art? my goal is to draw things im proud of and move forward as an artist. if you think its so unimpressive i challenge you to draw >>3178402 (id use the source material for reference), but remember you should do it with a pen like me and see how easy it is.

i love to do original artwork too, but even if i didn't as an artist you should still be able to critique any still life or fan art of mine but so few of you are apparently capable of doing this

>>3178402
i never said i had a complete mastery over perspective, forms, rendering and composition. i just said i know how to do that which >>3173765 implies i can't do any of it based off of some fan art.

>>3176281
b-but how are you going to
learn to
1. Construct forms
2. Perspective
3. Render forms
4. Composition
5. Color
6. Clothing/drapery

if you don't cheat from real life?

>>3176858

correction* i want critique with substance. your problem with me is i probably have more experience than you.

>>3176563

i've been posting on 4chan for over 10 years now. so yes.

>>3176532
>>3176534

good work. ill post a response later.

>>3176838

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>>3176408
>why are you posting it here then?
for critique and the riveting discussion :P

ill post some more of my work for you guys to dissect.

>>3176361
ohhh lol. i just now made one. ill make it easy on you and ill be zoot allures

>>3176343
oh trust me, i've got a deviant art page as well. it doesn't get much attention but im not losing any sleep over it.

>>3176144
do you think i do art for anyone but myself? i don't give a fuck if you don't like it or think highly of an artist. it wasn't made for you.

>>3176338
>discord name?

/ic/?

>>3176040
tell me how its a good critique. i've already dismantled it twice in this thread. remember to use your own words

>>3176115

>if you think anything about your art posted in here is good, then I have some bad news for you.


im pleased with it. id also like to mention that these are sketch book sketches and not finished pieces.

>>3176115
>if you think anything about your art posted in here is good, then I have some bad news for you.

im please with it.

>>3176112

its not a big deal to critique my work lol. im not claiming to be the best but i've been around the block a time or two. i can take it. just please don't waste my time.

>>3176117

im 28 and i have been drawing more or less for my entire life

>>3175998
whats shitty about it?