/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I'm having a really hard time trying to visualize my second panel here--where the guy on the left is holding the guy on the right high up by the neck. Does anybody know of where I can find reference material for this.

>>4317600
>>4318110
Thanks fellas

>>4317570
Big improvements on last year and last chapter. Still taking too long, though. I don't have my fundamentals down, so I still spend way too much time on actually making things look right rather than spending that time on making things look really good. If that makes sense.

I'm always looking for help.
https://tapas.io/series/The-Concord-Initiative

>>4317569

>>4317568

Still workin.

>>4278938

Work continues.

>>4253169
Is this better? Went with some more blue on the actual dudes.

>>4252844
Now that's what I like to hear!

>>4252737
Going full color was definitely a good idea. I still have a lot of asymmetrical skill levels to balance.

>>4252734

>>4252733

Still working, now on Chapter 2.

>>4222726
6th page done for the month, then I'm free from this environment for a long time. Cappella Rosa is a pain in the neck to keep drawing as a background. I really need to figure out how to make this easier for myself. Easier and better looking, for sure, although I quite like how this page turned out.

>>4222725

>>4206147


Work continues. Chapter 2 updates start getting posted in December. i told myself I'd get at least 8 pages done in November. 5/8 of the way there. It's been slower going than before.

>>4203134
I don't like the first panel. I'll probably redesign it, but for now, Page 3 is done.

>>4197404

Two pages of Chapter 2 down.

>>4201608
1. Should have only been 2 panels. One of those panels doesn't need to be there, giving the other two more space to be worth the level of detail I may have wasted.
2. I didn't actually know what the basilica actually looked like in my drafts, so I panicked and went with a straight on shot that now looks like a cardboard cutout. The drafts had a much more dynamic angle, but, again, not deciding on what the full basilica looked like before hand was devastating.
3. I didn't consider what should be around the basilica to give it some sense of place other than the skyline behind it.
4. I didn't plan for any scale-conveying elements, so the basilica looks like a doll house.

This page was an absolute nightmare, and I only realized how flawed my approach was when it was far too late to start over. That said, I am quite pleased with the second panel.

The Concord Initiative Chapter 2 begins, at long last.

>>4161753
Day 14: Overgrown

>>4163088
Now we're cooking with gas.

>>4159824
Day 13: Ash

>>4158641
Day 12: Dragon

>>4158649
Thanks, I like to think so