/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1441658
it was the other guy who said that, not me the anonyman.
I am the guy from the red girl, that got the dat neck comment.

Generally i hardly get any comments at all, and when i do get any, there are not very helpful.
Not sure what to think of that, no news is good news or something?

>>1441655
then they shouldnt respond.
They dont have to be kind, but at least done be rude.

>>1441652
thanks, thats helpfull, because saying you dont really know, means the fixes dont have to be big either.

I could try widening it, or change the collar bones if that is what you mean with sloping.

Btw, how do the colors look?
Do they look awkward, or does it look aesthetic? or somewhere inbetween?

Like i said, dat neck is not pointing in the right direction.

That like saying, dat face, to the guy who fixed the eyes.

>>1441642
google a skull, youl see the position of the eye sockets compared to the cheek bones, they are pretty close to each other.

>>1441633
well, the reason i dont think its usefull is because the neck consists of countless bones, tendons and muscles.

Also the neck runs from the lower face, all the way down to the collar bones, theres over a 100 things that can be wrong with it.

Saying , dat neck, is no more helpful then error guessing, and shows a very poor nature in criticizing.

>>1441626
Now if someone is goin to explain to me whats wrong with the neck of my Chimeara, Vays. :)

Unless that personw as talking out of his ass, i always learned that collar bones of woman point downward, and since i like to exaggerate like they do in Comics and anime, i pointed them downwards harder.

Or are there other area's that dont look aesthetic?

>>1441615
Additional info, eyesockets need to start above the cheekbones, however in your pic theres an empty space between the eyes and the cheekbones, which causes the eyes to look off, just position them above the cheekbones, which is halfway down the ears.

>>1441615
Dont you hate critique like that?
The pic i posted (the red girl) got me the response, dat neck...

How useful...

Anyway, personally i think they are perfect if you just lower the eyes, till halfway her ears.

>>1441603
I personally think the eyes need to be a bit lower.
They seem to be too high.

Il just post this one here,
Is probably a better idea then starting a thread of my own.

>>1441588
And when you say, learn anatomy, you make it sound like the entire picture is wrong, or did you mean i should learn the anatomy of the neck only?

>>1441590
I meant to ask, is the area around her chin wrong, or the area around her collar bone?

>>1441588
Is the the area below her chin, or the are around her collar bones?
And is only the neck wrong, or is there more?

And what about the colors?

>>1441570
What about the way its colored btw?
I only had a week practice with it, so i pretty new to coloring, and am wondering how it looks to others.

>>1441570
that doesnt change my perspective, i try to style my work a bit, and measure by people's reaction if its aesthetic or not.

bump

>>1441510
what should i do with it? shorter, slimmer ,wider?

Criticize my work to your liking.