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I'm working on a sick back design for a hoodie. Its street wear, what do you think? What to remove/add?

Thanks.

>> No.7895078

>>7895068
Too much going on, too many different styles.

>> No.7895086

>>7895068

see
>>7895078

>> No.7895114

>>7895068
Get rid of your nasty writing at the bottom keeep the chinese one up top the moon and get rid of that slavic flag and the letters A and P. Put the nippon flag on the elbows or shoulders or something

>> No.7895116

>>7895068
itd be pretty nice but the text at the bottom doesnt fit with the style

>> No.7895117
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7895117

>>7895078
Thats kinda the point, I should have posted the fornt.. It looks really clean, I think, because the front is so simple.

>> No.7895121

>>7895117
Are you a nippon

>> No.7895125

>>7895121
nah im norwegian

>> No.7895135

>>7895125
are you a nipple

>> No.7895138

>>7895135
yes

>> No.7895139

>>7895117
I still don't get the point.
It doesn't look really good.
There are other ways to create something messy while still looking good, like a nice graphic.

>> No.7895140

>>7895068
leave on the top and AP get rid of everything else

>> No.7895148

holy shit, this better be a joke. this looks like shit. also -- "super clean" -- op are you dumb?

>> No.7895154
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7895154

idk tho

>> No.7895162

>>7895154
Well this looks less like you're a formula 1 driver.

>> No.7895163

>>7895068
black heart is some really cheesy shit
too much stuff going on, get rid of the bottom letters at least they look tacky

>> No.7895165

>>7895148
did i say super clean?

>> No.7895166

>>7895154
i still wouldnt wear it but better

>> No.7895199
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7895199

Me and the dude who posted the hoodie from before and i are working together, and this is one of our other projects. We're trying to keep it jersey-like and really simple and smooth. Tell me what you think. (Saying "BLACK" in japanese, in front)

>> No.7895214

>>7895199
that's pretty decent.

>>7895068
>>7895154

these are just too much

>> No.7895217

>>7895199
What is this, a parody of a parody?

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7895233

you'll look like a wanker wearing any of those

cheers
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>> No.7895238

>>7895199
This looks like shit.

>> No.7895270

Don't add moon runes you can't even read to shit. It's embarrassing.

>> No.7895330

Gosha x Low expectations x akira x givecchy

>> No.7895355

>>7895270
this x 1000
what would make you think any of this looks good

>> No.7895360

No originality man. Go back to the drawing board.

>> No.7895508

>>7895199
this is so uninspired

like, youre just so late to the game dude. come back with something original. yawn

captcha- in cacmeme

>> No.7895538

>>7895199

the ship has sailed my man, ur not gonna be the next pyrex there are LITERALLY 50 "brands" doing the exact same shit as you since mid - late 2012

>> No.7895541

>>7895199
I'd get this if it didn't have all the shit on the back

PS u ripped off novus imperium

>> No.7895553

i dig it... but i feel if you got rid of the tears, keep the half moon, the flags, the japanese script and AP and it will look perfect

>> No.7895579

A dick, it will be post post ironic.

>> No.7895965

>>7895579
I honestly agree with this.

You're trying to make something based on a 2 year old trend. At least make it look like an ironic joke.

>> No.7895974

I'm getting really fucking sick of all this screen print shit, if you want to stand out in the streetware game you need to interesting cut and sews.

>> No.7895996

if you get rid of the flags and text it'd be pretty sick

>> No.7897467

>>7895068

OP Did you get the Chinese/Japanese Kanji Characters at the top through google translate?

The characters mean "black heart" literally, but they also mean corrupt (as in a corrupt politician) or dishonest (as in a dishonest business) so you probably don't want it on your design. It sounds dumb, honestly.

>> No.7897470

>>7895068
add the sprite logo