/fa/ - Fashion

[Anonymous No.14670642]

give me critique, does this look good.

[Anonymous No.14670645]

>>14670642
Red

[Anonymous No.14670649]

>>14670642
Maybe if it was just the clouds and trees but the street and car are unaesthetic

[Anonymous No.14670659]

>>14670649
aight i'll keep that in mind
when i make another version.

[Anonymous No.14670661]

>>14670645
red

[Anonymous No.14671704]

>>14670642
I think if the background pic was the right amount pixelated it would look really cool

[Anonymous No.14671727]

I'd wear it if the print was a little smaller. About 2/3 the size I guess.

[Anonymous No.14671743]

>>14670642

looks like a generic a e s t h e t i c streetwear attempt

[Anonymous No.14672983]

>>14670642
>Fruit of the loom
Enjoy shit quality retard, they make gildan look high quality in comparison

[Anonymous No.14672985]

>>14670642
Looks like shit, you see these kind of prints in primark. The square isn't probably centred and could do with coming down a bit. Also the "RED" text looks dumb. Graphic tees are one thing, but graphic sweatshirts are rarely good

[Anonymous No.14673048]

>>14670659
no dont listen to him its fine you need to be 110% yourself if youre making a brand because people like him are going to desaturate you

[Anonymous No.14673080]

>>14672983
It's obviously just a mock-up anon. If you want to shit on him, do so because it looks uninspired and boring

[Anonymous No.14673122]

>>14670642
I don't like it anon.

You're not taking advantage of the options your chosen medium of art offers you. As it stands this looks more like you focused entirely on the picture without considering what you'd be putting it on.

I dislike the placement of the graphic too, I'm not a big fan of graphics that take up the entire front for starters because it often seems to be placed there thoughtlessly (which I suspect is true in this case) but if you're set on putting it on the front, make sure you leave enough room between the neck hole and the start of the graphic. And at least center it.

[Anonymous No.14673135]

It's not a good enough photo to put on anything my dude

[Anonymous No.14673186]

>>14671743
This

[Anonymous No.14673227]

>>14670642
graphic prints pretty much just suck

[Anonymous No.14673319]

>>14670642

Idk what kind of printing service you are going to use but they most likely won't be able to that much color grading. Also switch "red" to "Los Angeles" and you have a H&M sweater. Lol

[Anonymous No.14673346]

>>14670642
the text should be all the way at the bottom of the image so it doesn't block things and ruin the depth perspective

[Anonymous No.14673348]

>>14673346
also i would choose a different text font and color
that white text clashes to hard with the image

[Anonymous No.14673450]

Thank You Everyone i appreciate all the critique.
I'll work hard and make it better >:^D

[Anonymous No.14673544]

>>14673348
i wanted it to clash with the shirt because that would be the first thing your eyes would be drawn to.

[Anonymous No.14673554]

>>14673544
yeah i figured that, but its not working as well as it could. it just looks more awkward and poorly designed than it is eye catching.
you could move it down and change the color and text just enough so it makes it aesthetically presentable and still have the text pop out

[Anonymous No.14673564]

>>14673554
would something like this work

[Anonymous No.14673714]

>>14670642
The world does not need another shitty a e s t h e t i c streetwear brand. Just cause you listened to a Tyler the creator album and paid too much for a golfwang hoodie doesn’t make you a designer. It’s not hard to tell that you’ve been interested in fashion for only a few months, and it’s great that your diving in and enjoying fashion, but your taste right now is shit, it’s fine so is everyone’s when they first get into it, but just wait a few years before you start to try and design something original, you’ll find that right now you’re tastes are evolving very quickly, and if you keep really consuming fashion you’ll probably cringe at your own hoodie design within a few months. Stay on /fa/, read some books on fashion, observe the clothes on people around you closely, look at fashion shows, learn to sew simple stuff like a pair of pants, and you’ll develope some real taste and originality and maybe make some good clothes.

[Anonymous No.14673920]

>>14673714

thank you.

[Anonymous No.14674073]

>>14670642
freaked me out cuz I have a g35 parked on my street and it looks similar 2 my street :0

[Anonymous No.14674077]

Shamelessly gonna plug my shit in your thread

[Anonymous No.14674078]

>>14674077

[Anonymous No.14674080]

>>14674078

[Anonymous No.14674119]

>>14674077
i like this.
>>14674080
and this too, this is cool.

this is great.

[Anonymous No.14674124]

>>14674073
maybe we live close to each other.

[Anonymous No.14674131]

>>14674119
link in pic related

[Anonymous No.14674241]

>>14674077
>>14674078
I would totally wear these.

[Anonymous No.14674244]

>>14674241
Please do! The link is in this post. Open to critiques as well
>>14674131

[Anonymous No.14674263]

>>14670642
oh my god thanks im gonna come out to my mom now im a gay retard and i shit on myself as clothes cause all my clothes ar e to small cause im fat i sjust shit on my self im gay!!!!!!!!!!!! i wear shit as clothes and its cool!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Anonymous No.14674266]

>>14674263
based

[Anonymous No.14674615]

>>14673564
yes i think that's much better honestly

[Anonymous No.14674618]

>>14674078
you misspelled weeb

[Anonymous No.14675149]

>>14674618
It's not supposed to say weeb

[Anonymous No.14675475]

>>14674073
I mean its my old car, and I live in ny. Doesn't look like ny

[Anonymous No.14676611]

>>14670642
>clothing with graphics
no

[Anonymous No.14676679]

>>14670642
I'd wear it

[Anonymous No.14677041]

the RED looks lame