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***PEOPLE I NEED YOUR HELP***

basically I performed at a charity concert in Portland (toys in the hood). Anyway I got to perform with guys who'd hype Tech Nine on his west coast tour, so that was cool, but...


This was my first time performing ever, and literally nobody on stage practiced for any song (it'll show in the video lel)


but that aside....I need 4chan's patented style of elitist criticism on my rapping. Any detailed reasons for why it was terribad would be fantastically appreciated.


PLEASE BROS I need you for this.
http://youtu.be/NNk5RFleNi8?t=16m
I start at 16:09

>> No.7452844

>>7452833
rap slower

>> No.7452853

>>7452833
>>7452833
It is obvious you are frobtin with your words because of the contrast between you aggressive stance and your high voice

>> No.7452861

ur fit suks

>> No.7452876

>>7452833
your voice makes you sound like will smith
this isn't good at all
i don't understand what the hell is supposed to be happening here, it looks like middle aged white guys dressed like they're in the 80's attempting horrid 2pac level gangster rap

>> No.7452885

>>7452844
fuck up cunt

>> No.7452893

>>7452833
gay

>> No.7452896

>>7452861
it suks balls

>> No.7452902
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7452902

>>7452833
>tfw you will never be lil ugly mane

>> No.7452910

hahahahahhahahahahahhahahahah

>> No.7452941

BUMP

PLEASE bros, I beg of you....Just, if I do suck, can I know exactly WHY I suck, or what I need to work on

>> No.7452982

>>7452941
bad flow, shite lyrics, bad voice. work on being smoother, it came off as very amateur and abbrasive. you seemed like you were the only one into it, and thats never a good thing.