/fa/ - Fashion

>>12112732
>>12112742
Individual critique is too much effort, so I will keep it abstract. What is fashion about? Is it about looking good? What is "looking good"? Fashion is about fashioning oneself into something else, into oneself, into another - whatever one wills. Is that what you have done? You certainly haven't created anything good-looking. You have created something perfectly neutral - The look of a child not knowing what [s]he is doing - Perfectly neutral - It is not that your fits are good or bad, it is that they are hardly fits, there being neither standout items nor any kind of coherence in them that isn't completely incidental. There seems to be no goal. no ambition, no intention to what you have shown us. Your "fits" look like random assortments of clothes one would pick from first some random store's rack then one's wardrobe thinking "yeah, that looks good" and "this might look good together, I like that" - Naively and passively - You have not yet become the person behind the clothes, masterminding them to serve a purpose, to realize yourself in them, for you are still the person behind the clothes, hidden from view, hidden behind layers of textile, letting your whims dictate the clothes that dictate your life, dictate the way people see you, the way you see yourself. You have not yet become a person, not yet of agency. Literal children who do not know what they're doing. You have let yourself be fashioned into nothing by your clothes. You have fashioned yourself into nothing. What you are doing is not fashion.

Therefore: Read up and try to improve (and learn how to photograph yourself) and you will not be the cancer that kills /fa/ any longer.

>>12112803
You don't think that's old, do you?
Given your age, I have hope that you will soon be mature enough to appreciate my advice.