/fa/ - Fashion

>>13340672
I'm not qualified to comment, honestly. Icanonly point out patterns I've noticed in a certain sphere of comic art.

Your technique is fine, But you need to add clearer outer lines and perhaps a bit of shading. In my opinion. Adding outlines will make the character's pose much easier to recognize and a bit of shading will make it pop in a nice way.

See Edna Krabappel for examples of what I mean. Good cartoons are processed very smoothly and quickly by our brains. Specificity in facial features and such takes a back seat to form, pose, silhouettes and so on, because our brains embellish all that shit with out us even think about it.

Certain graphic novels have this quality - they just slip through your fingers and the story is so bright in your mind.... Because you can process the visuals without any possible suspension of your engagement.

I'm a long time artist, myself, so I'm not JUST talkin out my ass