Fit is bad(actual fit.) unroll sleeves and get better fitting shirt. Get darker jeans that fit without rolling.
Cut Hair. Don't Tuck in shirt. Jeans and shoes are okay. So Is over-shirt. Just be Original.
you aren't Bad looking, but you have a feminine Jaw. Get shaved sides and a clean cut top for most masculine Look.
Can Barely Tell fit. But maybe darker jeans unless you're skinny as a whip.
Like I said, Get a drop fade on the sides and cut maybe 1, 1/2 inches off the top. Will look much more masculine.
Not bad for a newfag! you have a solid understanding of layering. Choose a darker shirt to hide your slight gut and shave your face as your beard isn't full. It's a great start. Try a charcoal grey shirt, the same hoodie, black jeans, and a black leather or black denimn jacket (over your hoodie)