/fa/ - Fashion

first off its ugly, but thats just a matter of taste, this isnt something you would sell to me imnot in your market. this is something to seel to people who wear osiris shoes, or old DCs or supras. essentially zumiez tier

that being said the leather looks good, the contrast stitching just brings more attention to the stitching so you need to be on TOP of that shit, the patterns also dont perfectly line up which is especially apparent where the black meets the white, until you master the substance of the construction id stick to all white or monochrome, something that wont show off the shitty construction

the design is cluttered, the weird shaped voids in the D arent bad but again u want cleanly cut patterns that make that shape look intentional not like a three yr old with those specialty scissors.

the little sliver cut out in the red looks like a mistake (i know its not, it just looks it)

i remember wearing shoes similar to these when i was like 12 or something and i really enjoyed having the tongue ove my pant leg, so maybe the nice bungee straps that make laces not totally necessary

another thing was a good interior tag, thirteen yr old love edgy meaningless shit so something on the inside of the tongue designed nicely w an edgy slogan or drawing or what have you