/fa/ - Fashion

>>15214698
really boring way to use these overly edgy pieces
>>15214825
very good, might be even better with fuller trousers
>>15214856
not a fan of the accessories, but you look good
>>15214935
good colors, might want to try a heavier/more textured shirt
>>15214938
i cant see anything from this pic
>>15214941
shoes let this down
>>15215105
this would be good if not for the logo on the pants
>>15215208
get opaque socks
>>15215394
none of these items go together
>>15215219
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>>15217762
solid fits
>>15216579
bad as is - if the shirt was really fitted or really loose it might work. I think socks showing over the top of the shoes would help too
>>15216684
i think the shirt kills this. maybe try one thats more oversized/a shaped. hat doesn't work either
>>15216927
this is not quite working - try with loafers or more formal sneakers, slimmer shirt in a linen or seersucker, darker shorts and more texture overall ( i think the lack of texture is the big issue). I also think there's too much contrast between the jacket and everything else.
>>15218017
acceptable
>>15218683
try the white socks with the loafers and/or uncuffing the pants. as is neither pic is working well, although i like the shirt/belt/pants
>>15221930
not working - try fitted t shirt or big pants
>>15221947
ok, but badly needs higher rise pants
>>15221967
good overall, but i dont like the grapic on the tee
>>15223401
awful - only thing worth keeping is the long sleeve shirt