The boots are too clumsy. You could try combat boots as they have a slimmer shaft while still being chunky enough.
If you want that slp-esque metal look you'll have to get slimmer denim.
You could also swap out the tee for a white one, make sure it has deep enough collar. and jeans for light washed ones. And white basketball hi-tops.
pic semi-related. The dude on the right is super attractive