/diy/ - Do It Yourself

>>300690
It's not a critique of your idea, it's a critique of your writing style. It *sounded* like this thread was going to be a scam until the 4th post. And the way threads are displayed, the 4th post will quickly be hidden on the main page leaving only the vague potentially-scam-like first post. A more to-the-point first post sounds more honest and works better on this board.