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MAIN TOPIC: CN City finale - Return to Fantastic Island

Stand Suggestions are OPEN!

>What's this?
Collab /co/ project of JJBA-based stories made out of /co/ stuff.

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>Canon Stand Info
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>Stands Doc
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>Every part, in order
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7 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SDhmnLrv5dtVAZx2ewx1JKTsZVoXkE8LRw-8rK2gyhQ
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>Sidestories
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>Phantom Scare: Chapter 1
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>> No.2

Let's see, the last thing in the previous thread was Chameleon's assassination, after that we focus on Strickland recovering the robot's remains and calling a meeting to discuss the series of incidents that happened during the race, then it comes this >>91011622

>> No.3

>>2
Is Bobby going to be part of the Strickland briefing?

>> No.4

Bump.

>> No.5
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>The scene opens in the ocean; a large shadow is seen moving in the surface
>The object that is projecting the shadow is revealed: A massive flying machine, its bow shaped like a bird’s head
(A narration box for the Iron Vulture could go here)
>Cut to the inside of the ship, several pirates are walking around the vessel’s corridors, going about their business
>One of the pirates run to a cabin and knocks the door “Captain”, there is no response "Captain?"
>Captain: “Come in”
>The pirate enters the dim-litted cabin; there's a person sitting behind a desk holding a glass of wine “This better be important, I’m preparing for a big occasion”
>Pirate: “Aye, about that…Captain, we are approaching to CN City”
>The Captain gets up “Excellent! I was starting to lose my patience” He walks toward the door “C’mon; I want to see that metropolis with my own eyes”
>Pirate: By the way, sir, the ar…
>Captain: Nope, no time for that, kid. Let’s go to the bridge posthaste!
>Inside a military base, all the alarms are sounding. General Julius Steel (Sym-bionic Titan) arrives to the command center
>Steel: In the name of Uncle Sam, what the hell is going on? Why all this noise?
>Soldier: Sir, an unidentified aircraft was detected entering national waters, seems to be in route to CN City
>Steel: “What!? Let me see” He gets close to one of the monitors “Sweet Jesus, that thing’s size…it’s a goddamn battleship!”
>Soldier: A battleship, sir?
>Steel: “You heard me, boys! A flying fortress is approaching US soil without identifying itself” He gets close to one of the soldiers “Any attempt to contact the crew?”
>Soldier: Sir, yes sir, several in fact
>Steel: and?
>Soldier: No replies so far
>Steel: Well, if they aren't answering the phone, let’s knock on their door. Dispatch Squadron Bravo and intercept the intruder!
>Soldier: Right away, sir!

>> No.6

>>5
>Steel: I want to take a look at that bastard’s ship. In the meantime, try to contact the airship again
>Back to the Iron Vulture, the captain and pirate arrived to the ship’s bridge
>Captain: Ah CN City; the big apple, THE metropolis, the so-called center of the modern world. How many times I wished to be this close to you and plunder you
>Pirate: Eh captain, there was something I forgot to mention
>Captain: You forgot? It better be something unimportant
>Pirate: Uh…S-someone tried to contact the Vulture several times
>Captain: Someone?
>“The army of the United States” says the helmsman “and they are calling again”
>The Captain stares angrily at the pirate then looks at his helmsman “Where are our manners? Put them on the line”
>Back to the base, “We made contact!” says one soldier
>Steel: About time…
>Captain: Greetings, gentlemen!
>Steel: Who the hell do you think you are!?
>Captain: Oh my...
>Steel: If you haven’t noticed yet, you and your ship have trespassed American territory and you...
>Captain: And they say that we pirates don't have manners
>Steel: "Pirates!?" Everyone in the room starts murmuring "You are a pirate ship?"
>Captain: "We are? Are we pirates, boys?" laughter can be hear from the other side of the line "Oh, who have thought...We are pirates!"
>Steel: Smug bastard, What are your intentions?
>Captain: We are paying a visit to an old friend in CN City...
>Steel: CN City...Son of a bitch, the president is there!
>Captain: Any more questions?
>Steel: You bastard! You are going after the president, don't you?
>Captain: Our business is ours and ours alone, understood?
>Steel: Listen, scumbag, You are talking with General Julius Steel, and if you think that your band of lowlifes can attack an american city and threaten the president, get ready for the mother of all beatings, did you hear me?
>Captain: Of course, my ears are in perfect state. Now, if you excuse me, I have an important meeting to attend, Good day.

>> No.7

>>91011622
>One of the Dadaists appear inside the base and informs the officer in charge about Nobody's order of not atacking the Iron Vulture
Who should be the dadaist that appears in the command post? Mirror Master or Doctor Destiny?

>> No.8

>>6
>Steel: Such arrogance, who they think they are?
>Pilot: General, we made visual contact with the unidentified vessel
>Steel: Excellent, send us an image of the enemy ship
>Pilot: Understood
>The image of the Iron Vulture appears in one of the screens of the command center. Some of the soldiers gasp in awe
>Steel: Mother of mercy…It’s the Iron Vulture. Bravo Squad, get ready for combat, you can’t allow that monstrosity to get any closer
>Pilot: Yes sir. Alright boys, get in formation, they won't know what hit them
>Steel: And just when the president decided to announce the next stage of his dumb race. Someone warn the White House already! Get him out of there!

And that's where I'm currently at

>> No.9

>>3
He could be there, or when Navis sees a corpse part for the first time in Voya Nui and relays the information to Strickland through her car's computer.

If Top Cat is still around he should be part of the meeting.

>> No.10

>>9
Membrane too, since they are dealing with the electric robot and the tech stolen in Aberdale

>> No.11

>>9
How old was Top Cat in part 3? Unless he died or retired from Strickland, he should be still around

>> No.12

>>8
Cool, someone else is writing it.

I still need to do the scene before that with Navis getting the briefing.

>>7
Mirror Master seems to be the errand boy who can get in and out of places quickly.

>>11
Older than Tom, but not by that much. He'd be in his 50s by now I guess.

>> No.13

>>12
Ok, it's mirror master then. How should the Iron Vulture destroy the jets?

>> No.14

>>13
I think they should get called off before any fighting breaks out.

That would be inexcusable on Nobody's part if any of the jets got blown up since one of the things he's working to weaponize is karma.

>> No.15

>>12
Is she going to the meeting in person or it's a teleconference?

>> No.16

>6 hours
>15 posts
This project is dead get over it pls

>> No.17

>>15
I'm working on the scene now. She's there in person and complaining that they might make her miss the announcement Nobody is going to make to the racers soon.

Top Cat will be there in person with her, I'm not sure if Bobby makes a personal appearance or not.

>> No.18

>>1
About time.

>>16
not until we finish part 7 at least. fuck you

>> No.19

>We cut to a meeting room with Navis sitting impatiently in one of the chairs at their conference table
>Navis: “look, the next leg of the race is about to begin, if I’m not there then I can’t continue with the mission you gave me.”
>Beside her is a blonde cat wearing a purple suit, black tie, and matching purple hat, he has some noticeable gray hairs
>A narration box appears reading ‘Top Cat – Senior Strickland Representative’
>Top Cat: “Now Navis, you know these big wigs always gotta keep us waiting, even if the regime changes, that’s always stayed the same.”
>One of the monitors on one of the chairs clicks on, first it just shows an image of the sky, then a big top circus tent, then finally on an aging man
>We cut to his location and a narration box appears reading ‘Bobby Hill – Strickland Foundation Leader’
>Bobby: “Sorry to keep you waiting, Springfield is still a mess and I couldn’t resist getting right into the thick of it. We found another animated skeleton!”
>Bobby pulls on the camera and points it over to a group of Strickland specialists surrounding a skull on the ground; it’s Big Skeleton buried up to his neck
>He’s smiling as much as a skeleton can “Looks like I'm in quite a pickle.”
>Back to Bobby “And you wouldn’t believe the stuff he’s told us. Seems Loki was a demon who was high up on the ladder of the WB!”
>Back to Navis “Any connection to the skeletons in Nowhere or the Hero’s Corpse?”
>Bobby: “Nothing so far.”
>Another monitor turns on with a man wearing tinted goggles and a lab coat appearing on it “That’s just the beginning, that stolen decommissioned Chane era Electric Nightmare turned up here in CN City,”
cont.

>> No.20

>>19
>We cut to the tall lab coat wearing man standing the wreckage of the casino “and it’s been blown to pieces. No sign of Willy though.”
>A narration box appears reading ‘Professor Membrane – Head of Strickland R&D’
>Back to Navis “I’ve got my hands full just trying to survive in the race. Seems it’s attracted a number of stand users.”
Top Cat is filing his nails “I’ve just received word from our old pal, Tom. Seems he’s caught a stand user who ‘talks to himself’ and speaks with a very familiar accent. He should be arriving here soon for questioning.”
>Bobby: “It's like everything big from the past 50 years is cropping up again all at once.”
>The doors open suddenly and a guard appears saying “I have an urgent report!”

>Cut to outside the facility
>The Strickland transport finally arrives at its destination and is surrounded by Strickland guards and Propane Nightmares
>Guard: “Attention everyone, prisoner inbound! Alright, let’s see what we got… What the fuck?”
>When the door opens they find Chameleon motionless on the floor with foam coming out of his mouth
>Dmitri Smerdyakov “Chameleon”. Stand: 「ELEANOR RIGBY」 Status: Deceased

>Back to the conference room, Navis and Top Cat are both on their feet
>Before they have time to process this report, an alarm goes off
>Navis: “What now?”
>Top Cat sits back down “Oh, what a day...”

Then it goes into >>5

>> No.21

>>14
So, they retreat just as the Iron Vulture readies its guns? Will the ship have any armament before it gets repaired in south america?

>> No.22

>>21
Maybe they break off just as Don Karnage's fly boys are about to start a dogfight.

I don't see it going through any major overhauls until after they repel the big guy.

>> No.23

>>8
>In the Iron Vulture, all the sirens are blaring and the pirates are running to their battle stations and the planes in the ship's hangar
>Helmsman: Incoming hostiles, captain!
>Captain: “Ah, the welcoming committee” He rises from his chair and walks toward the exit “Follow me, kid”
>Pirate: Where are we going, captain?
>Captain: Isn't it obvious? To meet our new friends, of course!
>Cut to the roof of the ship, the captain and the pirate are standing on top of the prow watching the squadron in the distance
>Captain: Now this is entertainment!
>Pirate: We shouldn't be here, sir. What if they shoot at us?
>Captain: Nonsense, and what if they do? The Iron Vulture will draw faster and shoot first
>Pirate: I-I don't know sir...
>Captain: You doubt my ship's firepower? I should toss you into the ocean! Ha! just kidding, calm down
>Back in the base, a soldier irrupts into the room "Sir, a direct order from the White House has arrived"
>Steel: “An order from Nobody? Give me that!” He reads the missive “This is a joke, is it?”
>Soldier: No sir, the president's signature is right there
>Steel: There is a battleship wanted all across the globe approaching CN City, and Nobody wants me to just let it come. Do you really expect me to follow that nonsensical order!?
>“Oh, you will” Mirror Master appears in the command room “It’s an order from the Commander-in-Chief after all”
>Steel: First, Who the hell are you? Second, how did you managed to enter here? And third…
>Mirror Master: In that order; Samuel Scudder, aide of president Nobody. It’s not relevant. And you have to recall the attack unless you want a tragedy
>Steel: A tragedy? The only tragedy will happen if we don’t stop that motherless pirate ship. It's flying to CN City, where the president is currently located!
>Mirror Master: Yes, we know, it was expected. That’s why you must call back your planes right now

cont.

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>>23
>Steel: I must be going deaf; you were expecting this pirate ship?
>Mirror Master: Man, you are really deaf…Yes! We are waiting for that ship’s arrival. Now, this is your last warning: call back those planes unless you want to spend the rest of the week giving the bad news to the families of those pilots
>Pilot: General, we are ready to make contact with the enemy vessel
>Mirror Master: Stop right now!
>The front of the ship’s balloons open, revealing a pair of massive cannons. The “beak” also opens, the pirate fleet inside the hangar is ready to take off
>Pilot: General, the enemy ship is preparing to attack!
>Steel: Damn, that thing can outrange my boys?
>Helmsman: Ready for action, sir!
>Pirate: captain!
>The Captain unsheathes the saber in his belt and points it at the squadron “C’mon, give me your worst, mongrels!”
>Soldier: Sir, awaiting orders
>Steel: I…
>Pilot: Several enemy aircraft are being deployed from inside the main vessel!
>Mirror Master: Obey Nobody’s orders, dammit!
>Steel: Fall back, men!
>Pilot: Retreat! Retreat!
>Steel: Very well…we’ll follows the president’s order, do not dispatch anymore aircrafts against the enemy vessel
>Mirror Master: You were a rational bunch after all. Have a good day, general
>Mirror Master leaves the scene. The room remains silent for a while
>Soldier: Sir?
>Steel: Alright gentlemen, we’ll obey the order of Nobody. We won’t send anyone else after the Iron Vulture… We’ll wait for that motherfucker and give him a welcome that he’ll never forget! Follow me!
>Back in the ocean, the squad formation breaks up and they return to the continent. The captain sheathes his saber.
>Captain: “Bloody hell, what a disappointment! Let’s hope the party in the landing zone is more adequate for a guest of my stature”

And then Steel's men flood the streets

>> No.25

>>24
How are we keeping Don Karnage's face obscured?

>> No.26

>>25
While he was inside the ship, his face could be outside the frame or only the back of his seat was visible. When he was outside, the sun could have shone behind him, obscuring his features.

>> No.27

>>26
We'll need to add that into the greentext then.

So I assume there's a big dramatic reveal of his face later once he's docked, but in what way is it dramatic?

>> No.28

>>27
Maybe Steel and Nobody have a heated discussion when the latter orders the soldiers to not fire at the ship, then Karnage interrupts the conversation and introduces himself in a bombastic way, giving himself titles and shit like that, which clashes with the idea that Steel had about the ship's captain.

>> No.29

>>28
And then Mr. Nobody greets him with the double cheek kissing thing.

Though I'm still not sure why we'd wait so long to reveal his face.

>> No.30

>>20
How should Strickland react to the apparition of the Vulture in the city? Is Tom still making a cameo in the docking area?

>> No.31

>>30
Strickland isn't doing anything, that's the army's problem.

Yes, Tom is still making a cameo in the crowd to see the racers off, he's there with his kids since it's a big event.

>> No.32

>>31
>The Iron Vulture finally lands somewhere in the city
>Either him or one of his kids makes a comment about how Tom once fought against a flying ship

Who are his kids anyway?

>> No.33

>>32
There were kittens at some point or another in the Tom and Jerry cartoons who Tom had to look after, right?

>> No.34

>>24
>The sounds of air raid sirens fill the city. It the blink of an eye, the army and their vehicles swarm the streets. General Steel is in a jeep leading a convoy
>Steel: ‘If Mohammed won't come to the mountain, the mountain must go to Mohammed’ you know what that means, son?
>Driver: Sir, it’s the other way around and it means that…
>Steel: It means that if we can't go and blast that motherfucking mountain out of the sky, that motherfucking mountain will come to us and we will stomp it so hard it will be nothing but gravel!
>The general grabs the comm device of the vehicle “I need an update of the bastard, now!”
>Soldier: Coast Guard just confirmed that the ship reached the mainland. The ship retracted its guns
>Steel: Any other pirate plane around?
>Soldier: No sir, just the main ship
>Steel: What the hell are they planning? Keep me up to date!
>Soldier: Sir, yes sir!
>Steel: I don’t care what Nobody says, if that damn pirate fires a single shot in the city, I will turn his ship into swiss cheese
>Driver: Sir, is too dangerous to destroy a ship of that size while is inside the city, the wreckage…
>Steel: It would be worse if we let that madman unload his guns on the city unopposed. Damn Nobody! This is all his fault!
>The radio starts buzzing again “General Steel”
>Steel picks the device again “This is Steel, what happened?”
>Soldier: The ship is decelerating
>Steel: What? Is slowing down?
>Soldier: Yes sir, and its speed keeps decreasing as we speak. The altitude of the ship is also decreasing
>Steel: The bastard is preparing itself to land…Can you guys pinpoint its landing site?
>Soldier: Affirmative sir, we are on it
>Steel: Transmit the coordinates to all the troops in the city once you are done
>Soldier: Right away, sir
>Steel: Gentlemen, prepare for action. It’s hammer time!

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>>34
So the Iron Vulture lands at the docs, that's where Nobody is.

They should freak out over that probably.

Who is vice president in this again?

>> No.36

>>35
>They should freak out over that probably
Someone should ask why the hell the president hasn't been escorted to a safe place yet.

>Who is vice president in this again?
I don't know, we never decided that. Was it Killinger?

>> No.37

>>36
No, Killinger is an aide.

We never did fill in the cabinet since it wasn't relevant to the story. They all have their own shit to do to run the country while Nobody goofs off.

Well if the VP in this ever becomes relevant, I guess we'll figure it out then.

>> No.38

Damn, I almost forgot, glad that thread was still up since the archives have been spotty lately.
I went and found the stuff between Goofy and Doctor Destiny.

So after Nobody and Don Karnage meet and greet, the racers board the Iron Vulture.

Then the incident at Daffy's villa happens with the Front Men.

Then we cut back to the Iron Vulture where Pym gets a bag of stand jawbreakers from Mirror Master.

Goofy is still dodging Jack and Vince without them noticing him.

Pym eats a stand jawbreaker while tinkering with some extra Varrick capsules that he bought and he begins to develop his stand, whatever that entails happens here.

Then we go to Goofy who passes out in a guest room. By then it should be night. That's when his conversation with Doctor Destiny happens.
When he kicks the clock with his leg at the end of the dream, it should be morning and they're landing on Fantastic Island, that's when the arc of "Whispering Pretty Stories I Long to Hear Once More" should end.

>> No.39

>>29
Nobody could threaten Steel with knocking a couple of stars out of his uniform if he does something against Karnage.

>>37
One idea was that the vice president is actually an alt-Nobody (Mr. Men's Nobody) that stays after the main Nobody is killed.

>> No.40

>>38
Do we need to make any changes to the encounter between Bugs and the Front men?

>> No.41

>>40
Only if you want to get into details about what Snake-Eyes' stand looks like.

Other than that, I'd say it's great as is.

>>39
I feel Nobody would only make a real threat if someone pissed him off, legitimately pissed him off.
Otherwise it's all whizzbangs and loop-de-loops with that guy.

>> No.42

>>41
We didn't detailed how his Stand looks or what it does, right? Hell, it doesn't even have a name yet.

Should it mutate in the same way that his user after he's tricked to absorb Daffy's identity?

>> No.43

>>42
I like it better with his stand just being confused over what its owner wants it to do.

I feel that's funnier.

>> No.44

And maybe the thread will still be up when I wake up.

>> No.45

>>43
What should be the stand's ability? is still a stand that the Front Men can share between each other?

>> No.46

>>45
It was suggested that his Stand was the one responsible for his gang's malformations.

>> No.47

>>43
So, the stand retains its ability (whatever it is) but due to his user's state is reduced to a mere punchghost?

>> No.48

Was there any consensus about using Metalhead DK? I liked the ideas for his potential role.

>> No.49

bump

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>>31
I wasn't asking if they would take a course of action, but rather what would be their reaction (or of any other racer for that matter) to a huge aircraft flying over the city.

Also, turns out that the Iron Vulture once had a lightning cannon, should it have it here? would it be connected to the previous Strickland administration?

>> No.51

>>47
I guess.

He keeps trying to use it as if it were [La Cucaracha] and his stand can't do any of that.

>>48
Who?

>>50
Their reaction is necessary to the plot, they might send some people out there, but they're not going to get in the army's way.

That lightning cannon can be what they come back with during the Tulio arcs to lay waste to his remaining forces.

>> No.52

>>51
>Who?
This guy https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R9-g7zRpayw..
It was suggested tha he could either be a resident of the robot town that Jane and Cliff casually insult, or part of Tulio's army.

>> No.53

>>51
>Karnage reappears with the Iron Vulture, now armed with the lightning gun
>He starts blasting Tulio's land forces with it
>Tulio is angered for a brief moment, then starts laughing like a madman
>He praises the gun's destructive power and orders his men to bring it to him
>cue the fight between the two fleets

>> No.54

>>52
Huh, a robot with an actual toaster for a head.

>>53
He might return after Tulio is already decapitated.
That whole arc still needs a lot of polish just to get the outline right.

>> No.55

>>54
Who was going to kill Tulio?

>> No.56

>>55
Jack cuts his head off in battle is the current working idea.

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Morning Bump

>> No.58

>>46
>「SMOOTH CRIMINAL」 (Michael Jackson song) or 「BEATIFUL PEOPLE」 (Marilyn Manson song)
>Appearance: TBA
>Ability: The Stand can break down both organic and inorganic objects (it can’t break down living organisms) into a solution carrying their genetic composition (or an equivalent in the case of inorganic matter) and store it into a series of syringes. When a target is injected with these solutions, he will develop a mutation that makes him resemble the original object. Said mutations can be either beneficial or detrimental; the user can exert a degree of control on the development of these mutations. The mutations will reverse once the user is killed or an antidote produced by the Stand is administered.
>As an additional ability, the user can keep track of anyone mutated by the Stand
>Stats:
>Power: C
>Speed: C
>Durability: B
>Range: B
>Precision: B
>Potential: C

>> No.59

>>56
I think there was the outline of a scene about that in a previous thread.

>> No.60

>>58
That works.

The stand could have syringes for fingers and a cube shaped head.

>>59
Yeah, something about how he was worthy of Tulio's perfect world.

>> No.61

>>51
Speaking about La Cucaracha, are we still using the idea of the Wizard's stand evolving into Cuban Pete?

>> No.62

>>60
Found it: https://desuarchive.org/co/thread/90052303/#90142851

>A group of rebels board Tulio's flagship
>All smug as fuck, they go after Tulio
>He brutally slaughter them without effort
>Enter Old Jack, he is the first opponent to ever wound him
>Tulio's starts fighting seriously; a swordman vs a bare-fisted colossus
>When he is beheaded, Tulio says "You are worthy...of my Handsome World..." with his last breath

>> No.63

>>61
I guess we are? I've always been unclear on where that's going.

>>62
As his head flies off, the skull falls out if it like if it were in a sock and Tulio's head reverts to normal, then to the pilot version.

>> No.64

>>63
His current Stand, Pinball Masquerade, seems to be growing each time the Wizard absorbs a fragment of Daffy's identity. Perhaps it matures into a Cucaracha-like Stand once he is in the Absolution and finally transforms into Cuban Pete when Nobody uses Paint it Black and erases the last traces of the Wizard's original self.

>> No.65

>>64
So we need to show off what it does during the fight in the villa with Snake-Eyes, then we need to show afterwards how it has become different after he's absorbed the fragments.

>> No.66
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>>65
It first look like a bug-like embryo/fetus inside a ball, then it grows each time he gains a new portion of Daffy's identity and looks like pic related. It eventually reaches a second stage (the equivalent of la Cucaracha act 2) where it looks like a knock off version of La Cucaracha, and it becomes a near perfect replica of La Cucaracha when the Wizard is hit with Paint it Black.

Should it break out of his ball and become a humanoid stand before they reach space?

>> No.67

>>66
How does The Wizard having a piece of the hero's corpse effect his stand?

>> No.68

>>54
>The toast is actually a memory cartridge with a copy of the original DK's memories

>>67
I think it gains an ability that helps him in the french manor. No idea what ability it grants to the Wizard himself.

>> No.69

>>38
Besides what is already in the doc, what else should happen in Fantastic Island?

>> No.70

>>68
So it lets him explore lingering memories.

Like walking into a photograph.

>>69
I'm trying to take things one arc at a time, and I'm just not there yet.

>> No.71

>>70
It was described as psychometry several threads ago, is what allows him to read a replica of LeTerally's journal. The whole thing could involve more than his Stand if we are using the idea that the Wizard is an actual sorcerer.

>> No.72

>>71
I'm not talking about him using psychometry, I'm talking about him being at the site of a destroyed old mansion and holding up his crystal ball or a photo of what it used to look like and going into that recreation of its likeness as if the building still existed.

>> No.73

>>72
So he's actually absorbing a made-up portion of Daffy's identity, that could play a part during the climax when he becomes the end boss and explain why his Stand didn't became the real Cucaracha.

What was Figment supposed to be? An independent Stand or some sort of familiar that belonged to Daffy's ancestors?

>> No.74

>>73
He's using wizardry to recreate the manner's past so he can find the history that was once there.

So it's not made up fragments, it's the real deal, just acquired with the help of magic.

>> No.75

bump

>> No.76

>>70
Just an idea: before the Iron Vulture leaves the island, Karnage could be seen acquiring Snoopy's original plane from the locals or an abandoned hangar.

>> No.77

>>76
How did that go so long without someone else finding it?

>> No.78

>>77
Snoopy probably kept it hidden in the island as a memento from the war (don't know which war) and because he didn't need it after obtaining Aces in Exile. When the locals returned to normal, someone found the plane and took care of it, not knowing its history.

>> No.79

Has the ability of [Cuban Pete] been suggested already?

>> No.80

>>78
So a tourist attraction like the flower hill?

>>79
If it has, I haven't looked at it.

>> No.81

>>80
>So a tourist attraction like the flower hill?
And they either steal it or buy it at a fraction of its real value, perhaps only Karnage knows the identity of the plane's original owner.

>> No.82

>>80
Nope, only his first stand

>> No.83

>>81
They're pirates, of course they steal it.

I don't know how to work that into the story though.

>>82
Then we'll need to figure that out.

Not much progress today, I was waiting to see if that other anon was going to keep going with the army scene.
I'll try to get more progress going tomorrow.

>> No.84

I'll give it a bump before bed and hopefully this time someone else will keep it from dying.

>> No.85

>>83
>「CUBAN PETE」
>Appearance: Greatly resembles「 La Cucaracha」 Act 2 wearing the Mask’s suit and hat, his face also bears similitude with The Mask: It has a wooden texture and there is a metallic band over his nose, the flesh on his cheeks is missing, giving him a wide grin.
>Abilities: 「CUBAN PETE」 retains the first ability of 「PINBALL MASQUERADE」 and allows the Wizard to infuse any sphere he strikes with a high amount of energy which forms a replica of 「 La Cucaracha」 around the sphere, these replicas are identical to the original 「 La Cucaracha」 in terms of stats and appearance, but they lack his abilities. The replicas can be destroyed if they sustain enough damage or the sphere that was charged with energy is forced out of their bodies.

>> No.86

>>83
>I don't know how to work that into the story though
Maybe as a small scene during Fantastic Island, then someone asks Karnage why he was so interested in obtaining a plain old plane

>> No.87

>>62
Will Jack get a power boost once he is stripped down to a loincloth during their duel?

>> No.88

>>38
>Pym secludes himself in his cabin and tries to reverse engineer the capsules
>He eats a jawbreaker while working. At first it looks like he was poisoned by it, he catches a fever and his vision becomes blurred
>Pym spots an insect (an ant? a fly?) inside the room, the bug seems to get bigger
>He dismiss it as a fever-induced hallucination, but the enlarged bug attacks him
After that, he either manages to fend off the bug by himself or someone else helps him to beat the bug. If it's a fly, it could attempt to dissolve Pym with its digestive juices (like in that scene of The Fly)

>> No.89

>>88
I don't think Pym would get the sickness that sometimes happens with the things.

He'd be totally focused on his work to the point where that focus is what prevents him from getting the Holly Kujo sickness.

>> No.90

How long has this project been running? Part is the most fleshed out one? Is there an estimate on how many of you are collaborating on this?

I'd have two more questions, but I'm afraid they'll just jinx it too much.

>> No.91

>>90
>How long has this project been running?
Almost a year for now, I think.

Which part is the most fleshed out one?
Part 1 and Part 3 are prolly the best ones, as some past anons said.

Is there an estimate on how many of you are collaborating on this?
Back then it was more or less 20-40 anons collaborating or so and it has varied since. Now it's more or less 6 anons including me. We just want to finish part 7 at this point so this doesn't end like the other abandoned /co/ projects.

>> No.92

>>91
Part 2 is the one that is 100% done, part 1 and 5 are close to completion. I think the most incomplete is 4 since anons were only focused in the parts that interested them.

>> No.93

>>91
I think it's been over a year now.

And getting through part 8 would be the end of it, though we still need to do patch ups on earlier parts.

>> No.94

>>93
>>92
>>91
So what's the endgame? Is the text written in the docs just a draft, or complete stories?

>> No.95

>>93
Yeah, it was in march when the first threads popped out.

>>94
The first docs were mostly drafts, since back then people was just listing ideas and moved to the next part (they were later expanded), the later ones are more complete.

>> No.96

>>94
End game for me is just getting it all written.

>> No.97

Was Snake-Eyes supposed to die after the fight in the villa or not?

>> No.98

>>97
He's defeated and has chunks missing from him, but he's still mostly alive when Hex turns him in for the bounty.

>> No.99

>>98
Very well, I was thinking that after he is drained from Daffy's identity, his dice eyes fall off and roll near Hex.

>> No.100

>>99
Does he even still have the dice eyes when he gets La Cucaracha'd?

>> No.101

>>100
Perhaps, or he has Daffy's regular eyes when transformed and they turn back into dices when they fall off.

>> No.102

Here's the climax for that encounter, edit as necessary (specially Daffy's accent):

>The Wizard bursts through a wall in the second floor and leaps at the Daffy abomination
>Wizard: You have something that belongs to me!
>Daffy: Who are you? CUCARACHA!!
>Snake-Eyes’ Stand appears, looks around confused and notices the falling wizard; it charges forward to tackle him.
>A greenish orb materializes from thin air and rams the Stand in its stomach; the Daffy abomination clutches his stomach in turn
>The Wizard lands on the abomination and grabs him by the shoulders, his eyes start to glow
>Wizard: And I want it back!
>White beams shoot from the Wizard’s eyes into the eyes of the abomination, which begins to panic
>Daffy: Vat are you doin? Vat are you doin!?...Uh, zis is bad….
>Hex walks away slowly “Looks like he has this under control”
>Pym: Wait, we don't know who is he and what he’s doing. He might be another enemy
>Hex: That doesn't matter, Hank, things are about to get ugly
>The abomination is trying to break away from the Wizard’s grip, but he can’t get rid of him and his eyes can’t look away from the Wizard’s gaze
>Wizard: You are literally me!...I am literally you!
>The different parts of the Abomination’s grotesque body expand and contract uncontrollably
>Daffy: Uh! Ah! Uh! Ah! Uh! AAAH!
>The duck parts of Snake Eyes cave-in, static builds up around them and the whole floor cracks
>Both: You…Me…We are…
>Pym: Ugly? What the fuck is going?
>Both the Wizard and the abomination are surrounded by light, the whole building begins to tremble
>Hex: TAKE COVER!
>Both: HOOOOOOOOO
>There is a blinding explosion that shatters the remaining windows of the villa
>Back in the interior of the building, everyone was knocked back by the explosion
>Hex gets back on his feet and sees a pair of dice rolling towards him
>Snake Eyes is lying in the floor motionless, the parts that were mutated into Daffy's are now missing. The Wizard is nowhere to be seen

>> No.103

>>102
I'm pretty sure they know who The Wizard is. He's been in the race the whole time and has been consistently placing well.

I'm going to try finishing up the rest of CN City now so we can move on to the next arc properly already.

>> No.104

>>34
>We cut to the docks of CN City where the racers have gathered, President Mr. Nobody’s blimp/bus hybrid it parked on top of a stage
>Mr. Nobody and Melusine are playing a round of jacks, and Doctor Destiny is checking his watch when Mirror Master enters the bus
>Mr. Nobody looks up from the game “Sam, there you are, everything going swimmingly?”
>Mirror Master: “More or less. They should be arriving soon, so get ready.”
>As he says this, there’s a rumbling coming from outside

>Cut to outside the bus and the army is pouring in, surrounding the docks
>The racers are caught in the encircling troops and are looking around with concern
>The Iron Vulture then appears in the horizon, it looms over the ocean as its approach slows and its altitude decreases
>The massive airship lands on top of the sea and comes to a quiet stop as it reaches the docks right behind Mr. Nobody’s stage
>The mouth of the ship opens and pirates come pouring out, they line up as a red carpet is rolled out like a tongue
>A figure emerges from within the depths walking down that carpet, he’s not minding the song of over a thousand guns being aimed at him as he walks
>The captain begins speaking “Good day to all of you, I am The Prince of Pirates, the Scurvy of the Skies, Captain of the Iron Vulture...”
>We get a pan of up him until finally arriving at his neck and see he’s a goofy looking fox man
>“the Dread Pirate, Don Karnage!”
>A narration box appears reading ‘Don Karnage – Air Pirate, What He Said’
>By the time he’s finished listing off his resume, he’s reached the docks where Mr. Nobody is already standing with his aides
>The two of them face off, staring at each other, letting the tension mount
>Until Mr. Nobody puts both his hands up to the sides of his head and exclaims “Don Karnage! So glad you could make it!” then grasps Karnage’s shoulders
cont.

>> No.105

>>104
>Karnage does the same as they kiss cheeks to greet, pretty much everyone in the audience has a dumb look of shock on their faces
>Mr. Nobody and then puts an arm around Don Karnage’s head and he does the same so they’re interlocked
>Mr. Nobody then announces happily “Every one, meet Don Karnage! The privateer who will be taking you all to the next staging location for the second phase of the race!”

>Pym and Hex exchange looks
>Pym gets a flash of Rorschach in his mind and Hex gets a flash of the Punisher in his mind
>Steel looks like he’s about to burst a blood vessel with how angry he is
>Navis is also in the crowd shot and is looking a little relived

>Mr. Nobody continues “Any racers who want to keep going with the race need to get on the Iron Vulture! Come on, don’t be shy!”
>As he says this, a ramp extends from his stage so the racers can get their vehicles up to the open mouth of the Iron Vulture

>The racers begin making their way into the Iron Vulture
>Pym and Hex are on edge looking around for more attackers
>Navis is just annoyed
>Goofy gets tangled in the carpet somehow and some of the pirates help him get free
>Vince and Jack walk up the ramp and pirates are giving Jack looks until he gives them the famous scowl, making them avert their gaze

>The interior of the airship is actually very nice, like a big fancy ball room with fountains and stuff, there are also cabins for all the racers
>One of the pirates mentions “We had the ship specially renovated recently to be able to host the president’s racers comfortably.”

>As the racers are looking around, Pym is called to a spare room by a man wearing a suit who was with the president
>Mirror Master is standing there
>Pym: “Need me for something?”
>Mirror Master pulls out a bag and hands it to him “Compliments of the Dada Party for placing first in the third leg of the race.”
>Pym opens the bag “Candy?”
>We see it’s filled with very familiar looking jawbreakers

>> No.106

>>105
>To be continued rolls by

Then we go into the whole thing that's already written about when Snake-Eye's get Lacucaracha'd.

Then we'll be back on the Iron Vulture.

>> No.107

>>104
A small correction: Karnage is a wolf, and here >>105
>Mr. Nobody and then puts an arm around Don Karnage’s head
There is either a missing word or the "and" is out of place

>> No.108

>>107
Oh, he's a wolf. That makes sense. I'm getting my mental images mixed up.

And yes, that and was an error on my part. Good catch.

>> No.109

>>106
What's the next thing that happens in the Iron Vulture? Pym eating the jawbreaker or something else?

>> No.110

>>109
Pym showing Hex the bag of them, Hex might know what they are or he might not.
Pym has no real idea what they are and starts sucking on one of them as he shows Hex the extra Varrick capsules he bought and is going to start studying while they have down time.

Hex goes and does his own thing.

Focus on Vince and Jack for a bit while Goofy gets into painful situations avoiding them.

Back to Pym who is focusing super hard on the capsules until his stand begins to manifest, then giant bugs he has to flee from until he and Hex fight them and Pym realizes he now has a stand.

Goofy should get caught in the crossfire somehow, then afterwards he retires to a cabin and has that dream.

Then we're on the island.

>> No.111

>>110
>Hex goes and does his own thing
He could spy on Karnage to see what's the deal between him and Nobody

>Goofy gets into painful situations avoiding them
>He nearly falls through the bomb bay, damages one of the pirates' planes and almost cause an explosion in the ammo dump

>> No.112

>>111
Is Mr. Nobody also riding aboard the Iron Vulture?

>> No.113

>>112
I think they are using a different transport, at least during the trip between Europe and South America.

>> No.114

>>103
Could be changed to Pym speculating that he's another hitman like Watt and Frank, though this would be the first time they meet face to face.

>> No.115

>>113
It would be irresponsible for the president to ride on a pirate's ship, even if said pirate is a good friend of his and also working for him.

The bureaucracy just won't allow it.

>>114
They've looked at the leader boards before, they know who he is and what he looks like.

>> No.116

So is there a full bar in the Iron Vulture?

>> No.117
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So, what should be the bug that attacks Pym, a fly, an ant, a wasp?

>>116
They are pirates so is very likely that they have booze, and in the series there was a mess hall onboard the ship.

>> No.118

>>117
Oh, a wasp, that way we can have Vince show off some moves.

A good opportunity to gauge his progress with his style.

>> No.119

i haven't looked/ contributed in months- is there any hope of both Jacks getting into a fight with anybody?

>> No.120

>>119
Right now, it's confirmed that Old Jack will duel Handsome Tulio in Chile. They could also participate in the siege of the robot town.

>> No.121

>>119
>>120
They're also going to be fighting the loser alliance (the racers with Fat Controller out to eliminate the point leaders) while on a train to the Old Country.

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>>121
>loser alliance
>not the Soul Express/Train

>> No.123

>>118
If is a wasp, Pym could have a hallucination about Janet and lose his shit.

>> No.124

>>122
Whatever you call them, Scud ends up using them to catch up to Pym and Hex.

Jack and Vince get caught in the crossfire.

>>123
Maybe that's when Hex snaps him out of it and he starts to get a hold of himself.

>> No.125

Thank you. You hate the signs that tell you not to hurt people.

Fine. They are gone. There is only me.

Why did you delete the Mandy thread.

>> No.126

>>124


!!SHOW ME YOUR MOVES.!!

>> No.127

>>116

There is an empty stomach.

>> No.128

>>112

There is no Mr. Nobody. In your mind. That means TV's Kyle's Dad. That's all.

>> No.129

>>109

You fucked up.

of course, You know exactly what a jawbreaker is. Break your Jaw.

>> No.130

>>124
>that's when Hex snaps him out of it
>Pym gives him one big slap while he's sperging

>> No.131

>>130
Well he could try to, and Hex could catch it.

Or do you mean Hex slaps Pym?

>> No.132

OK, the slow progress will continue tomorrow then.

Provided the thread is still up.

>> No.133

>>131
Pym slaps Hex. Hell, if Vince will be there to charm the bug, make him get one too. Whenever he suffers a meltdown, Pym should become a slapping machine.

>> No.134

Morning Bump

>> No.135

>>111
>Jack scares away a group of angry pirates that was about to beat Goofy
>Goofy runs away, thinking that Jack is after him

>> No.136

How will the Wizard obtain the Corpse Part? Should he get it before or after beating the abomination?

>> No.137

>>115
So Nobody isn't on the ship, just some of the members of the Dada Party. Hex could still spy a talk between Karnage and his officers, if Karnage caught him, he can rubs the clemency granted by the president in Hex' face.

>> No.138

>>136
Everyone in the villa is charmed or distracted by Dick Dastardly playing the piano. While the abomination is distracted by this, that's when the Wizard bursts in to absorb the identity fragments.
In the confusion/struggle, he steps on the corpse part and it merges with him.

>>137
Officially, Hex also has clemency, so criminals can't do anything to retaliate against Hex so long as he's not attacking anyone.

>> No.139

>>138
How Dick ended in the villa? Should he be contacted by the Dada Party to check Snake-Eyes' last location?

>> No.140

>>139
The notes in the doc for that part already say how and why.

The Front Men get taken out, the [Old Mountain Dew] stand contacts Dick saying they need a favor and he works his way up to the villa.

After it's all said and done, Dick tells the stand that the Wizard has the corpse part that was there.

He can't see the stand, but when it takes on the properties of something it touches, it becomes visible in a way.

>> No.141

>>140
Dick should be reluctant at first, since he was hired to spice up the race, not to be another of the party's thugs.

>> No.142

>>141
Yes, he might need some incentive, like a bonus, or some shiny new toy he can use later.

It actually is important that the Dada Party maintains a good relationship with Dick since he could single-handedly ruin the entire race if he wanted to just by not stopping to cheat.

>> No.143

>>133
Maybe we shouldn't oversell the power of the Pym hand.

>> No.144

>>143
We should start foreshadowing that Pym has issues, he already hit the disguised Chameleon without a second thought, is a matter of time until his wifebeating problem arise, and Vince getting bitch-slapped made me laugh.

>> No.145

>>144
If Vince gets slapped, there should be some form of retaliation, like Pym gets a face full of bees or something since he interrupted the posing that was keeping the stinging insects docile.

>> No.146

So who should tell Pym that he now has stand jawbreakers? He'll need to be informed before he OD's on the things.

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Okay, I've been away from this for a while and want to write stuff. What can I write?

>> No.148

>>147
Right now I'm working on the stuff happening aboard the Iron Vulture before they land on Fantastic Island.

So anything on Fantastic Island, the sea voyage part of the race through Voya Nui, and the not very well planned cruise ship checkpoint owned by Rockerduck are all in the near future.

>> No.149

>>145
I think there is a single bug in the scene, it probably goes berserk after Vince's posing is interrupted.

>>146
He could show the jawbreakers to Hex when they return to the Iron Vulture after fighting Snake Eyes.

>> No.150

>>105
>>106
OK, so this is all after the villa scene with Bugs on Fantastic Island that was already written a while ago.

>Back aboard the Iron Vulture, Pym is talking with Hex
>Hex: “Pym, what are you doing?”
>Pym shows Hex a handful of Varrick capsules “We have time to kill, so I’m gonna use it to figure out how these things work. I bought some extras before we left CN City.”
>While Hex is looking at the capsules, Pym holds up a bag of jawbreakers “Want one? Someone from the Dada Party gave them to me for coming in first at CN City. He said one is enough for anyone.”
>Hex looks at the candy and then scowls a little “I never much cared for hard candies.” before turning away, touching the side of his face where the hole in his cheek is
>Pym shrugs “Suit yourself.” and pops one in his mouth

>We pan over to Vince and Jack, Vince is striking a stupid pose “So, like this maybe?”
>Jack is watching him intently
>Goofy is half-way across the large room within the airship and turns at just the right moment to notice Jack’s intense stare
>Goofy begins to sweat and swallows hard
>He begins to run in a different direction without looking where he’s going and collides with one of the pirates’ planes, knocking it over because he’s still not used to the power of his corpse part infused leg
>Goofy also falls to the floor from the impact
>From the cockpit of the plane emerges a short, full bearded, aging dog man pilot who looks pissed
>He leaps from the plane and lands on his good leg in front of Goofy, he’s pounding a fist into an open palm
>He suddenly stops when he notices a shadow looming over them both and sees Jack standing there
>He smiles nervously, pulls Goofy to his feet, dusts him off and then runs away
>Goofy scratches his head “Grawsh, what was that about?”
>Jack is still standing behind Goofy before finally speaking “Excuse me, but I was wondering if...”
cont.

>> No.151

>>150
>Goofy nearly jumps out of his skin before falling to the floor again, then tripping on his shoe laces before rolling into a vent
>Jack is puzzled “What an odd fellow.”
>Vince is still in the background posing, a wasp flies by him, seemingly following his movements before flying up and into the hall ways leading to the cabins for the racers

>We’re still following the wasp, it enters a cabin door right when Pym is closing it
>Pym sets up a table and pulls out some tools, placing them around the Varrick capsules
>Pym: “Time to see how these things work.”

That's what I've got so far.

It might be best to cut away to Goofy again and have him land in the ammo dump, I'm not really sure what to do with his scenes, but I don't want to just focus on Pym since I want some time lapse to occur.

When we get back to Pym, his focusing so hard his sweating and not noting the sand power glow until he sees a huge wasp in the room with him.

>> No.152

I might not use the ammo dump idea, that seems to escalate too far so the next thing that happens to him will look unimpressive by comparison.

Maybe instead he falls somewhere else.

Once the wasp is huge and buzzing through the ship, he'll end up riding it before Vince directs it to leave using his style and it flies out through the bomb bay doors with Goofy still on it.
He uses his stand to just barely get back up onto the ship before retiring to his cabin.

>> No.153

Should Haddock react to the fact that he is now surrounded by pirates?

>>152
After Goofy is done with screwing around, maybe the pirates are the ones that tosses him into his cabin, so he can't continue endangering the ship and himself.

>> No.154

>>153
Maybe he's too drunk to notice.

Does he distinguish between pirates and privateers?

>> No.155

>>154
They are probably the same to him, and Karnage was a pirate right before the start of the race.

>> No.156

>>155
So... maybe Goofy comes out of a vent attached to the mess hall and lands right in the middle of Haddock having a brawl with the pirates?

Or Haddock being too drunk to notice they're pirates?

Can he even get drunk with the hero's liver in him?

>> No.157

>>156
>Can he even get drunk with the hero's liver in him?
The stand's description hints that he can
>The user is generally too drunk, or too angry, to realize that he is causing the effects of 「Storm In A Teacup」

>> No.158

>>157
OK, so he's getting positively smashed with the pirates, then Goofy stumbles in from wherever and lets slip that these are pirates.
Cue drunk fighting, cut back to Pym.

>> No.159

>>151
>He begins busying himself with his tools while the wasp clings to the ceiling

>Through the vents again we find Goofy inching his way to freedom
>He falls down an incline and rolls out of a vent into the mess hall
>He sits up, his head still spinning and looks around, he sees a big sailor looking man (Haddock) drinking heavily surrounded by some of the Iron Vulture’s crew, cheering him on
>They’re having a drinking contest
>Goofy gets up and relaxes a little “These pirates sure like to party, hyuck.”
>Haddock freezes “Pirates?”
>He flips the table without warning shouting “Pirates!” and punches one of them in the face
>A big ball of violence erupts and Goofy is dragged into it

>Back to Pym in his cabin, he’s now focusing super hard, to the point where he’s starting to sweat
>The jawbreaker he’s been sucking on is pretty much gone now
>He calmly puts his tools down on the table and then angrily slams down his fist “Damn! What the hell are these things made of? I can’t even tell what half the stuff inside of them is!”
>Pym is actually glowing faintly now, the wasp has taken flight again from the sudden outburst
>The glow from Pym extends outward from him and starts to take on shape, but there are no solid details, just a glowing mass
>The glow extends a thin portion of itself and touches the wasp
>Pym is holding his head in his hands, massaging his scalp when he hears buzzing that keeps getting louder and louder
>Pym finally looks behind himself and notices a now dresser sized wasp in the cabin with him
>He’s gripped with shock as he mumbles “Oh hell no...”

And that's where I'm at. Who should the focus go to next before Pym goes running by being chased by a huge wasp?

>> No.160

>>159
Hex looking for more clues about Frank's cryptic message? TOM doing his own research? Some other racer that hasn't appeared yet?

>> No.161

>>160
Is TOM on the Iron Vulture?

>> No.162

>>161
Probably, Serenity is onboard when the saboteur attacks in the Andes, there is no reason for them to travel in two different ships.

>> No.163

>>162
Is the smaller commentator aircraft also aboard the Iron Vulture?

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>>163
Well, it's a big ass air carrier

>> No.165

>>164
Good to know.

Bad to know how fast this ended up on page 10.

>> No.166

Should Pym and Tony meet on the Island? Do they know each other here?

>> No.167

>>166
Tony is supposedly what Pym wants to be, no idea how to approach that or show that or anything.

I would rather someone else do some rapid fire spit balling because making it all up on the fly and having to fill in all these blanks myself got tiring 9 months ago.

>> No.168

>>167
He could bad-mouth Tony while he is giving his welcoming speech and Hex asks him if he knows that guy; if Tony spots him in the crowd, he could take jabs at him. I don't know if they should meet in person, that could end in punches.

>> No.169

Speaking of Tony, some time ago it was suggested that he makes a joke during his speech about not being responsible for getting rid of the natives several years ago, he could end it with "this time" (if he actually did something like that in the past is left unanswered)

>> No.170

>>58
What should be the name of the Stand? Smooth Criminal was listed in the earliest pastebin, but I don't think that we are going to use it

>> No.171

>>168
>>169
Honestly I don't know enough about either character and their history together to figure that out.

I seriously need someone else to step up and do something when we get to that scene if we're actually doing it.

I'm bullshitting non-stop when it comes to Pym because I have zero familiarity with Ant-Man aside from a passing knowledge that it exists and that he shrinks and that's it.

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>>171
We are using the Superior Iron Man version of Tony Stark, where he became a villain and enslaved people through an Extremis app. (after administering Extremis to the population of San Francisco, he charged $99.99 diary for its use)

>> No.173

>>172
If we are using that version then we'd need some long annoying side plot where he gets brought down and I'm not dealing with that.

I'd rather keep everything streamlined from here on out since we're over 150 pages in and we're on just over 1/3rd of the way through the part.

As far as I'm concerned, Stark is a one or two scene throw away character in this.

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>>173
Nah, using the same plot involving the Extremis is unnecessary. The idea of creating a perfect society and offering it to anyone who could afford it can be the reason he bought the island in the first place (a nod to Daffy's original plan).

>> No.175

>>174
Just make him come off as sleazy then without going into details.

>> No.176

Tony could finish his speech mocking the notion of the Wishing Star, suggesting that it doesn't exist, and claims that he can make wishes come true in his island, then he says that the racers are free to stay in there if the want.

>>173
>Stark is a one or two scene throw away character in this
That doesn't mean that he can't be used to delve into Hank's issues. If they meet after the ceremony, Stark should remind him that no matter how much he tries, people don't forgive Hank's mistakes, and finishes telling him to stay mediocre.

Maybe Stark is the current owner of Snoopy's plane and the pirates steal it from his residence.

>> No.177

>>176
It wouldn't be Tony if he weren't an asshole in some way or another.

So I guess he has a shitty futuristic house somewhere on the island with the plane hanging from the ceiling just because.

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>>177
>People keep asking me "Tony, why that old-ass plane is hanging from your ceiling?" And I keep answering "Because I want it to hang from the ceiling"
>I mean, they always think that it has a deep sentimental value for me or some bullshit. That's some comedy gold
>Maybe it was important for someone else, maybe, but that someone should have been more careful and not leave it up for grabs, don't you think?

>> No.179

>>178
I bet him saying that in earshot of Don Karnage is why he decides to steal it in the first place.

Man, my internet is being really shitty tonight.

>> No.180

Did Nobody choose the island for other purpose besides the corpse part? Improving the islanders living or something? Screwing Stark seems to have little repercussion in his karma.

>> No.181

Bump

>> No.182

>>179
And then he quotes Tony as he retreats with the stolen plane (maybe wrecking his manor) and boasts about being untouchable. The heist could take place in the middle of the night to masks his escape.

>> No.183

>>182
If the fight with the abomination also takes place in the night, Karnage's men could use the explosion caused by the Wizard as a distraction.

>> No.184

>>180
I think he just chose it because the corpse part was there.

He knew it was there before the racers arrived since the Front Men arrived early.

If they screw over Stark, then that's just an added bonus.

>>183
I was planning on it happening during the afternoon of the day they arrived on the island.

They arrive, Tony greets them, they get told the next leg is going to be over the ocean, they get shown a bunch of parts to use to modify their vehicles and told they have one day to do it.
Pym gets to work, while on a test drive Hex spots the Front Men in town and goes after them.
[OMD] contacts Dick and says all their guys are out of the picture and they need a favor from him, so Dick heads to the villa.
Hex rounds up the Front Men and they tell him their boss is at the villa so Hex and Pym head that way.
The Wizard is also exploring the island since he senses the strong connection with Daffy.

I'm not sure what order they arrive at the villa in aside from The Wizard arriving last.

>> No.185

>>184
Dick could arrive first to the villa and encounter Bugs and the abomination (not sure if he should actually face them or Bugs just sends the abomination after Dick), then Hex and Pym, and finally the Wizard.

>> No.186

>>185
The only reason why any of them survive against the abomination is because Dick plays the piano.

In doing so, his melody moved the remains of Daffy to the point where he stops attacking, thus giving the Wizard his opportunity to pounce.

>> No.187

>>186
But is he going to face the abomination before Hex and Pym arrive or the abomination will stalk him?

>> No.188

>>187
What? The first time The Wizard and the abomination meet is when the Wizard pounces on it.

I think what will happen is Pym and Hex go to the villa since Hex wants to capture Snake Eyes.
Snake Eyes is currently partly Daffy and so he's violently unstable and attacks them when they enter, Bugs can't do anything about this.

Dick arrives or has been watching from a far and announces that he is a pianist of some skill and offers to play to diffuse the situation.
While he's playing, the abomination clams down and that's when the Wizard leaps into action.

>> No.189

>>188
I was talking about Dick, but seems that he doesn't enter the building right away.

>> No.190

>>189
Yeah, Dick won't get involved with shit between races unless he has to or it's part of the set up for his next scheme.

Though stepping back, we're still on the ride to the island, so who are we focusing on next?

>> No.191

>>190
>so who are we focusing on next?
It was either Hex or TOM, both trying to figure out what's going on behind the race.

>> No.192

>>184
The karma scale of Killinger could appear at some point, hinting at the theft in Stark's tower

>> No.193

>>191
Maybe one overhears the other.

>>192
I don't think that would reflect on Mr. Nobody since Karnage is a third party.

>> No.194

>>193
Would Hex suspect that TOM is part of Nobody's plan? He is in the president's payroll after all.

>> No.195

Which racers will visit Clifford's tomb?

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>>194
I think right now Hex is still figuring out who in particular he should suspect.

At the top of the suspect list is Nobody, sure, but he still needs to figure out who else to be weary of.

>> No.197

>>196
Along with the members of the Dada Party, Hex should be wary of any racer that reveals himself as a supporter of Nobody. Jane was supposed to be one of them, but I think that she and Cliff will appear in the european stage.

>> No.198

>>197
So... we cut to Hex, who is watching some of the other racers and catching snippets of chatter. Maybe he overhears Jane and Cliff arguing about Nobody, maybe he hears TOM and Serenity talking as they go to the staff meeting place to discuss the race, then maybe he can't hear anything because of a very loud buzzing sound and Pym comes running by being chased by the now giant wasp.

>> No.199

>>198
At the same time that he makes his list of suspects, Hex could take the time to look around for the remaining criminals in the race.

>> No.200

>>199
So what things does he see happening? What are his future marks doing?

I'm just trying to get someone else to paint the scene since I feel exceptionally unmotivated today.

>> No.201

>>200
As we walks through the ship's corridor, he sees the racing staff gathering in a room and he searches for the door he saw. Mojo is probably locked in his room, tinkering with his equipment while talking to himself.

Who's the next target after Mojo? the other criminal is Mean Angel, but he appears in the second half of South America.

>> No.202

>>201
Hex doesn't exactly have time for bounty hunting once we get to Spain since he and Pym will be mercilessly targeted.

Also, we need to fill in the leader board for checkpoint 3 still since we didn't do that.

>> No.203

>>202
So he just spies on Mojo, Hex won't go after any other bounty after that since he will be busy with the assassins and uncovering Nobody's plot. Rather than hunting down Mean Angel in South America, they will be hunted by him, who wants the other Corpse Parts after merging with the skull.

>> No.204

>>203
Pretty much.

Well let's see if I can at least get us to the island tonight. Gonna start putting down more words soon and see where they take me.

>> No.205

It could use improvement.
>>159
>Cut to Hex, he’s standing on one of the walkways higher up in the large main hanger area looking down at the various things happening
>From his perch, he sees Mojo Jojo walking around shiftily as he makes his way to the cabins
>As Hex walks back down to the hangar floor, he hears some of the other racers talking
>“I dunno, Cliff, I just like the guy. He’s honest at least.”
>We see a woman with black hair and rosy cheeks, a narration box appears reading ‘Crazy Jane – A woman of many talents’
>A large bronze colored metal man wearing a leather jacket replies “The guy is crazy, disasters follow Nobody wherever he goes, why can’t anyone else see that?”
>A narration box appears reading ‘Clifford "Cliff" Steele – Pro race car driver, Robotman’
>Hex keeps walking, he’s not interested in a lover’s spat
>As Hex makes his way to the hallway that leads to the cabins, he sees another robot with another girl walking down a different hallway, it’s TOM and Serenity
>Serenity: “What non-sense do you think we’re in for this time?”
>TOM: “You can never tell with Nobody.”
>Serenity: “That guy still gives me the creeps. And he’s friends with air pirates? At least we’re getting hazard pay now.”
>TOM and Serenity disappear through a door to a staff room, Hex keeps walking
>As he continues down the hallway, he hears buzzing, loud buzzing, super loud buzzing
>Pym suddenly runs past Hex who then takes off after him without pause
>While running, Hex then looks back and sees a huge wasp flying after them “What did you do?!”
>Pym: “I don’t know!”
>The two of them run down into the mess hall where the big ball of violence is continuing
>Pym slaps the crap out of someone in their way
>The large wasp that follows dispels the ball of violence instantly leaving only Goofy standing in the middle of the way, dazed and confused
cont.

>> No.206

>>205
>As he spins and falls to the ground the wasp flies over him, part of his clothing gets hooked on the wasp and now he’s along for the ride
>Pym and Hex circle back into the hanger where they make a spectacle of themselves
>Jack jumps into action and signals Vince to do something
>Pym and Hex are running straight at Vince now who is doing a series of poses
>Pym looks like he’s about to slap him out of the way when Hex grabs Pym’s arm and pulls him to one side
>The wasp breaks off and is now circling Vince, but making no attempt to attack him, Goofy is still stuck on it
>Vince strikes another pose and the wasp flies straight up, then Jack pulls a lever opening a bomb drop door, Vince then pulls off another pose and the wasp flies straight down into the trap door
>Pym looks at Vince “How’d you do that?”
>Vince: “You tell me, Mr. Yellowjacket.”
>Pym begins to glow with stand power again, this time he notices it “What the hell is this?”

>Through the shoot and out the bottom of the Iron Vulture, the wasp is now expelled from the ship, but so is Goofy who looks down as his eyes widen and he lets out his iconic yell
>He begins to glow with stand power as his 「Under Pressure」 appears
>One of its patchwork quilt arms wraps around Goofy as another one grabs the bomb deployment shoot and pulls Goofy back up into the ship
>As Goofy climbs his way back up, he’s now in the ammo depot
>Two pirates grab him and pull him up “Nope, guests aren't allowed in here.”

And now we go into a part that was already written with some changes to accommodate for the location.

>Cut to a cabin door being opened and Goofy being tossed in
>“And stay in there!” exclaims one of the pirates
>Goofy looks around the cabin and drops into the bed, exhausted
>He stares silently at his leg for a while
>He turns on the radio next to his bed and falls asleep listening to it
cont.

>> No.207

>>206
>“…But let’s take a break from the race-related news, fellow listeners. Here in K-OLD, your oldies station, it's time for a walk down memory lane with your longtime host, me *static noises* Destiny.”
>The voice startles Goofy, who opens his eyes and gets up. He's no longer in the cabin, but in an outlandish landscape
>“I must say that this place is fascinating, there are hints everywhere that indicate it used to look very different until a certain… event.” Doctor Destiny appears before him flanked by an apparition that looks like it’s made of torn while pillow cases with a broken mirrors for fingers
>A narration box appears reading 「I Write The Songs」
>Goofy: “I don’t think yer here just to watch the scenery in my noggin. What do you want?”
>Dr. Destiny: “What do you think we want? It seems that you stumbled upon something, something very valuable to us.”
>Goofy: “Eeyup, I found a piece of the corpse in the desert.”
>Dr. Destiny: “And you didn't report it immediately. I wonder why…”
>Goofy: “You think I'll try to double-cross ya?”
>Dr. Destiny: “That’s not outside the realm of possibilities, some down on his luck chump finds an artifact of great power, decides that it should be his and no one else's and runs away with the artifact stuffed in his leg.”
>Goofy: “Listen pal, I made a deal with Nobody and I’ll uphold my part of it.”
>Dr. Destiny: …
>Goofy: “OK, I know it looks weird but…”
>Dr. Destiny: “Luckily for you, Mr. Nobody has decided that the Hero’s leg will remain in you possession until further notice, that way the hunt for the remaining corpse parts will be much easier for you.”
>Goofy: “Gwarsh, the president really said that?”
>Dr. Destiny: “Yes, you are quite fortunate. Who knows, maybe your family’s shitty luck is finally turning around.”
>Goofy’s expression changes to grimly serious at Destiny’s words and the muscles in his leg twitch
cont.

>> No.208

>>207
>Dr. Destiny: “Christ! That thing looks ridiculous!”
>Goofy walks toward Destiny with the clear intention of attacking him
>Dr. Destiny: “Oh please, that won’t work, not here.”
>Goofy kicks Destiny in the face with his super leg but as the kick connects with him, Goofy awakes. He smashed the radio with his leg
>He looks out the window, it’s morning and the ship is about to land on an island

Now we're on the island. I figure Pym won't see his stand for the first time until they're fighting Snake Eyes.

>> No.209

>>202
>we need to fill in the leader board for checkpoint 3
Here:

14)Tempo (Quake Woman)
15)Robotman
16)Crazy Jane
17)Tad Strange
18)Aunt May
19)Ding Dong Daddy
20)Molly
21)Jake Long
22)Gorthan
23)Krosh
24)Kovacs (Rorschach)
25)Dick Dastardly
26)Racer Dee
27)Mean Angel
28)Asterix
29)Obelix
30)Krokodil Gena
31)Sir Topham Hatt

>> No.210

bump

>> No.211

>>208
>I figure Pym won't see his stand for the first time until they're fighting Snake Eyes
Yeah, and while they explore the island they encounter bugs that Pym unconsciously enlarged with his Stand (not of the same size of the wasp, but still big enough to get their attention)

>> No.212

>>209
Alright. That'll work.

>>211
So Wander and Sylvia will see huge butterflies at Clifford's grave.

>> No.213

What will Jack and Vince do during their stay in the island?

>>212
And Pym and Hex, or some other racer, will almost crash with an oversized insect while doing a test drive to their car.

>> No.214

What else of interest is on the island again?

>> No.215

>>214
Let's see: There is the town that Tom and company explored in part 3, Clifford's grave, Stark's tower, and several touristics resorts. Daffy's villa is probably off-limits or the locals avoid it due to superstition.

>> No.216

>>213
What kind of bugs are native to the island?

>>215
The legend has it that the ghost of the previous owner still haunts the grounds, possessing anyone who dares to trespass.

>> No.217

Well here's hoping the thread stays up so the slow progress can continue tomorrow.

>> No.218

>>216
Perhaps beetles and the butterflies in Clifford's tomb. Whatever they are, they could dismiss their abnormal size saying that it must be like the bugs in Australia.

>> No.219

morning bump

>> No.220

>>216
Does the people in the island remember Daffy, or knew who he was in the first place?

>> No.221

>>218
It's not really a tomb, more like a burial mound.

>>220
I don't think so, if there were any natives who survived Daffy's time on the island, they probably left the island shortly thereafter.

>> No.222

>>221
So no one remembers what happened exactly on the island, just that the villa is haunted. Bugs is alone in the manor playing a piano, the locals may believe that he is the ghost of the owner.

>> No.223

>>222
The Strickland Foundation remembers, but their outpost on the island has very limited authority and doesn't bother correcting any of the misconceptions.

>> No.224

>>223
Should the outpost alert Strickland's HQ about someone breaking into LeTerally's manor and the following explosion?

>> No.225

>>224
Navis probably relays her findings through them.

>> No.226

>>225
Since she was outside the manor recording everything, Navis should arrive after Hex delivers Snake-Eyes in the outpost and alert the personnel (or the HQ directly) that he was turned into Daffy momentarily.

>> No.227

>>226
What's the reaction like? Do they try interrogating Snake Eyes and his gang? Do they even know anything they don't know already?

I'd image all they can do is confirm the existence of a corpse and how parts of it were in Aberdale and Springfield, giving a solid link the disasters.
Did the Front Men even know about the part in Nowhere?

>> No.228

>>227
>What's the reaction like?
The newer elements might don't recognize that name; the old guard, on the other hand, will freak out, that’s when the Wizard is put on their watch list.

>Do they try interrogating Snake Eyes and his gang?
Snake-Eyes is probably too traumatized by the ordeal to be of any help.

>Did the Front Men even know about the part in Nowhere?
I don't think so, otherwise they would have been dispatched to the farm

>> No.229

>>228
The other members of the Front Men might know enough to fill in some of the blanks.

But the real question is, what does Strickland do with this information?

>> No.230

>>229
>what does Strickland do with this information?
The info puts them on high alert and confirms their suspicions that Daffy returned in some way, Navis is tasked with keeping an eye on the Wizard and Strickland may intervene in the island.

>> No.231

>>230
But what does that amount to in the overall plot? What's the lasting impact?

>> No.232

>>231
Means that there could be more intervention from Strickland on the race as they try to figure out what the fuck is going on. Just like how Hex is building his list of suspects, Navis could do the same and attempt to take down any racer that seems to be involved in the apparent return of Daffy.

When should Interpol enter into scene?

>> No.233

>>227
>Do they even know anything they don't know already?
As far as I know, the Front Men were tasked to collect "the Corpse Parts", not other details like their purpose, backstory, etc. were given besides which part was located in each checkpoint (Snake-Eyes seemed to know that the organs were in Aberdale)

>>225
Now that I remember, Navis is also supposed to give an update after finding the Corpse's eyes in Voya Nui, should we condense both reports into one?

>> No.234

>>232
Navis is Interpol, she's just working for Strickland on this.

>>233
Can't put both reports into one, the eye hasn't been located yet, that happens after they leave Fantastic Island.

>> No.235

>>234
>Can't put both reports into one, the eye hasn't been located yet
That's why I was asking if the post-Voya Nui report should contain the info of what happened in the villa and in the archipelago.

>> No.236

>>235
There's a Strickland outpost on Fantastic Island due to the history the place has, that info is getting passed along almost immediately, there's no reason to not report it ASAP since Navis has more than 12 hours before the next leg of the race starts at that point in the story.

>> No.237

>>176
>then he says that the racers are free to stay in there if the want

>Tony: So I don’t blame you if you decide to stay, I mean, look around, isn’t this place true perfection?
>Pym: Not with you on helm…
>Tony: Don’t you believe that I can grant you any wish you have?
>Pym: Can you get rid of yourself? you insufferable…
>Tony: Go and ask the fellows behind me…or my good friend Mr. Hank Pym right there among the crowd
>Pym: ….piece of …what?
>The whole crowd turns to see Pym, who remains frozen in place
>Tony: What do you say, Hank? I’m telling the truth or not?
>Pym: Well…you, uh…
>Tony: There it is, speechless before the wonders of Stark!
>The crowd burst into laughter and claps for Tony

>> No.238

>>237
So how do they know each other in this setting?

>> No.239

>>238
Both are inventors, they could have met in the past, and while Pym faded into obscurity, Tony became the owner of a whole island.

>> No.240

>>239
Personal or impersonal connection?

Were they just working on the same projects interdependently?
Old college rivals?
From competing businesses?

>> No.241

>>240
I'll say personal, perhaps the Avengers were a short-lived initiative in this setting, and Pym has done nothing since then.

>> No.242

>>241
Maybe they were both on a task force commissioned to design and build something to deal with all the wired shit happening.

I doubt I'll make any progress today, I really just need a break from this.

>> No.243

>>242
>they were both on a task force commissioned to design and build something to deal with all the wired shit happening
>Pym never saw a single cent from it
>Stark used the leftover tech to jump start his island resort

>> No.244

After Karnage burns down Stark's tower, would he try to stop the Iron Vulture or demand an explanation from Nobody?

>> No.245

>>244
I thought he was just stealing a plane, not burning it down.

That's a rather extreme jump.

I wasn't even planning on going into details about it. The next day Strickland can't act on the Daffy news because Stark is all up in their business over a break in at his tower or island home or whatever.

>> No.246

>>245
Well, given the size of a plane, I don't think that it would be just sneaking into the tower and steal it without no one noticing. Burning down the tower is an exaggeration, though it probably gets damaged by the pirate intrusion.

>> No.247

>>246
Blowing a hole in the side of the building of breaking one of his fuck huge windows would be sufficient.

Also, how much a drunk is Tony this time around?

>> No.248

>>213
>Hex: Stop!
>Pym: What did you see this time?
>Hex: We will crash with a bug!
>Pym: Dont' want to be rude, but looks like your Pacing trick is broken
>Hex: Look! (He points forward)
>Pym: What I'm supposed to...Holy crap!
>A beetle the size of a cow appears in the middle of the road
>Pym stomps the brake and the car stop right before the beetle, which calmly cross the street
>Pym: I'll be damned, it's was huge ass bug after all
>Hex: I told ya
>Pym: And is the second time that we see one of those, must be like that giant spider in Australia
>Hex: This ain't normal, I can feel it
>Pym: You think something is making them grow?
>Hex: Or someone...
>Pym: Huh?
>Hex: Think about it, someone should have noticed a giant wasp entering and flying inside the ship
>Pym: Don't remind me of that, fucker appeared all of a sudden inside my room
>Hex: And that's the other thing, you said that you locked your room. Now we have another bug appearing right in front of us
>Pym: You are saying that someone is sending them after us?
>Hex: I won't scratch that possibility. We already got visited by two weirdos trying to cut our necks

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>>247
He started to drink again in Superior Iron Man, He could go full alcoholism after the attack on his tower and all the damage that the race's passing caused on the island.

>> No.250

>>248
Now how do we shift to the town where the rest of the Front Men are?

Or is this while they are on their way to the villa after Hex has already caught the other members of the gang?

>> No.251

>>250
I was thinking that after that exchange, they drive near Clifford's grave, causing a butterfly to grow. They could have been driving to the town near the villa, and the Front men are currently hiding in that town.

>> No.252

>>251
It might work better if this is after they've already caught the other Front Men and are heading to the villa.

Before they catch the other Front Men they're doing a test drive, but this is a test drive for Rover on the ocean, so they'd be on water.
From the water they could spot the other members of the Front Men at the docks (there was a port town) trying to steal a boat to escape the island.

>> No.253

>>252
There are two encounters with the Front men?

>> No.254

>>253
Hex captures the gang (Neon Noodle, Hammerhead, etc.) in town and learns from them that their leader, Snake Eyes, it at the villa, which is why he and Pym go there in the first place.

>> No.255

>>208
What should be next? The racers disembarking from the ship, or go straight the welcoming ceremony?

>> No.256

>>255
I'll post the notes I'm working with since they now differ from what's on the doc

>Racers arrive on Fantastic Island; they should be greeted by Stark, who owns the island, and a pile of parts to help them get their vehicles seaworthy
>Establish Stark as everything Pym wants to be, but also establish that Stark is an even bigger prick than Pym. Stark is just better at recovering after he stumbles
>he makes a joke during his speech about not being responsible for getting rid of the natives several years ago, he could end it with "this time" (if he actually did something like that in the past is left unanswered)
>Stark should remind him that no matter how much he tries, people don't forgive Hank's mistakes, and finishes telling him to stay mediocre
>finish his speech mocking the notion of the Wishing Star, suggesting that it doesn't exist, and claims that he can make wishes come true in his island, then he says that the racers are free to stay in there if the want… for a price
>>237

>They have a day to modify their modes of transport to move across the water

>There should be some tourist attractions on the island that distract some of the racers, like a large hill that's always covered in flowers that are in bloom (Clifford's grave).

>Some members of the Dada Party tour Stark’s futuristic house on the island
>He has Snoopy’s old biplane hanging from the ceiling
>>178
>Don Karnage resolves to steal it from Tony

Then we get into the test run on the water and then the harbor town Front Men encounter.

>> No.257

>>255
Though I guess the more precise answer is it goes right into the welcoming ceremony.

>> No.258

Right.

Maybe tomorrow I'll actually get some more progress done with this.

Though it's really wearing on me at this point.

>> No.259

>>258
like all /co/ projects, nothing happens

>> No.22082

>>1
First post of the board!

>> No.22145

autism won
I'm out

>> No.22213

Cock's Bizarre Adventure when

>> No.22498

WE'RE NUMBER >>1

>> No.22602

>>22082
>>22498
>Reply to Thread No.1
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y0LeVwGOuqU

Hold on, there two threads now: one in /co/ and one in /cock/

>> No.23718

>>256
>a pile of parts to help them get their vehicles seaworthy
Pym's car is already amphibious, what is he gonna do with all that stuff?

>> No.23758
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>>1
>this autistic shit is the first post on the new board
Disgusting

>> No.23796

>>1
>>1
>>1
>>1
>>1
QUOTING A FIRST POST
WOOOOOOO

you don't come across these every day

>> No.24849

>>254
Should he capture all the members of the gang or gun down some?

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>>23758
>It's a JoJo/cartoon/cooking episode
Give me more

>> No.25599

>>23718
Modify it even more?

I don't know if I'll get anything done today with this happening.

>> No.25943

>>25599
He might be reluctant to use something made by Stark, especially if he slapped his company's logo all over the spare parts.

>> No.26790

>>25943
He can just sandblast it off if it bothers him that much.

>> No.27849

>>9999

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>>26790
>Pym: Screw that, Rover is already amphibious; we don’t need something made by Stark
>Hex: Calm down, Pym, Don’t look a gift horse in the mouth
>Pym: No, you don't get it; nothing good can come from Tony
>Hex: What’s your deal with that guy? What the hell happened between you and…
>Pym: Stark!
>A limousine stops next to them and one of the windows lowers, Stark is in the back seat wearing sunglasses, he takes them off and smiles at the duo
>Stark: Look at that, it’s my old friend Hank Pym
>Pym: Don't you have an orgy to attend or something?
>Stark: Whoa, such hostility. Still mad at me for being a failure? Is not my fault that you are now trying to reunite the Village People for a living, no offense cowboy
>Hex: Leave me out of your discussion, gentlemen
>Stark: Damn! That’s a nasty scar you got on your face. We have a treatment in the island that can fix you in no time
>Pym: Don’t accept anything from him, who knows how many people he screwed over to build this place?
>Stark: Ah, there it is, you are mad at me because I went ahead with my life while you sunk into depression. Too bad that our little joint venture went nowhere, but that was ages ago. Time to move on, Hank
>Pym: Move on? After you left me in shambles and caused my labs to close?
>Stark: After WE were left in shambles, yet here I am. Some people can get up after they fall, Hank, You should follow my example
>Pym: Is easy for you when you have mountains of ill-earned money to stand on
>Stark: It’s easy for me because I do shit to get results, instead of sitting in a dilapidated lab wondering what went wrong. This conversation is over, stay mediocre Hank
>He puts on his glasses and motions his driver to leave the place

>> No.28815

>>1
man that post number is as tiny as my dick

>> No.28860

>>1
>can't even keep your autism general off for a day

/co/ was a mistake

>> No.29059

i didn't knew this was the first post of /cock/

>> No.29156

>>29059
It was copied from /co/, in fact the whole catalog was copied to make /cock/

>> No.29525

>>28682
He should also rub it in Pym's face how he's rubbing elbows with the president today.

>> No.29759

>>29525
Is Nobody going to attend to Stark's tower? Tony should finish the conversation telling Pym that he has a more important meeting to attend.

>> No.29889

>>29759
He might or might not.

Maybe better if not since that'd feel like a rehash of what happened in the first arc.

>> No.29889,1 [INTERNAL] 

Veronica Saori Wohlin Suger Som Godman/Förvaltare!!!

>> No.29889,3 [INTERNAL] 

>>1
Oh my fucking god, the first post on /ck/ ever. WOW FUCKING WOW. And so a insect hating thread was born.

>> No.29889,4 [INTERNAL] 

>>29889,3
sorry, *board not thread. Huge fucking ass gas release of the brain.