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Old thread >>9754947

>All J-fashion styles (lolita, mori, otome, gyaru, deco, etc.) are welcome!
>Please provide your best photos.
>Artists: It's encouraged that you sign your work.
>Self-posters: When giving credit, refer to the art as a freebie -- NOT fan art.
>Artists and self-posters: Commissions for money are welcomed, but negotiate the terms in private.
>Helpful critique is acceptable; insults and taunts are not.
>Have fun!

Questions for artists:
>Do you prefer to draw prints, patterns, solids, etc.? Which one(s) are you more likely to draw ITT?
>Do appealing backgrounds increase your desire to draw someone?
>What do you look for in a request when deciding to draw?
>Is there anything specific that turns you off a request?
>Do you think there's anything missing from these threads?

>> No.9795611
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9795611

Here is more Ita-Patrick! Please post coords, I wanna draw something besides memes.

>> No.9795665
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>> No.9795970

Artist here. If there's any mori or shironuri girls browsing, I love drawing mori and shironuri.

>> No.9797159
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9797159

I guess I’ll contribute since no one else is. I’m trying to get into old school, but I wish I had some utks with thick lace and chunky shoes with this coord. I still thought it was cute though, so if anyone feels like drawing me I’d appreciate it!

>> No.9797260
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9797260

Hi could you please draw my fiancé and I? Thank you in advance!!!

>> No.9797261
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9797261

I would really love it if anyone draws me! I was really nervous about wearing this dress but I ended up very happy with this look.

>>9797159
What do you use for your stickers? Is it line? So cute!

>> No.9797273
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>>9797159
This is so cute! Here's a drawing for you :)

>> No.9797274

>>9797273
Wow I am so sorry, I did not realize this was going to be so big. I need to learn to re-size

>> No.9797279

>>9797260
Aw, you two are so cute!!

>> No.9797306

>>9797261
Yeah I always use line, it’s great o make my own stickers!

>> No.9797308

>>9797273
Thank you so much this is adorable!!

>> No.9798363
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>>9797261
Hi I’m the anon who posted this coord>>9797159 I saw your coord on the cof thread and fell in love with it, so when I saw it here I had to draw it! You look so lovely, I hope the art does it justice!

>> No.9798366

>>9798363
Sorry it’s sideways! I hate posting on mobile.

>> No.9798387
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9798387

If anyone's up for it I'd really love a drawing of my recent coordinate!

>> No.9798393

>>9798363
Was this made with pastels? I like it.

>> No.9798394

>>9798393
Nayrt but it looks like crayon with pen/marker for the lines.

>> No.9798397

>>9798387
You look soooo cute!

>> No.9798407
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9798407

If possible, I'd love a drawing, I'll be drawing some gulls too later today!

>> No.9798415

>>9798393
I used a brush pen for the lines and prismacolor pencils for the colors!

>> No.9798463
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This is one of my favorite recent coords and I would love a drawing! I'll also try to draw other anons as well

>> No.9798506
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Hi everyone! I wore wrapping cherry to a swap meet recently, I'd love a drawing TIA!! (not pictured is my trusty Usakumya rucksack!)

>> No.9798519

>>9798506
Those socks are meant to go over your knees. Couldn't you even be bothered to pull them up for a picture?

>> No.9798540

>>9798519
can you chill out, she's obviously tall

>> No.9798547

>>9798506
why did you get your bangs cut like that

>> No.9798548 [DELETED] 

>>9798540
Nah she's prob just fat. Look at the bodice

>> No.9798616
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>>9798547
>>9798548
>>9798519
For the love of fucking god can we PLEASE get some mods in this thread so it doesn't get shit-canned to oblivion like the last one? This is the third draw thread we've had that's been infested with Mean Girls(tm) and it's getting really tiresome.

>> No.9798618 [DELETED] 

>>9798616
Fuck off to tumblr if you have such an issue with people speaking their minds. She's clearly fat and is stretching the bodice like crazy

>> No.9798619

>>9798407
This dress again? Dont you own anything else?

>> No.9798621

>>9798506
What's with the random colored bracelets and cheapo necklace?

>> No.9798677

Gulls, can we please just draw? If you don’t like the coord wait for one that you do you like, we just want one thread without bitching, you can do it literally anywhere else

>> No.9798802

>>9798619
Sorry to disappoint you, but the last time I wore this dress was back in May. Fyi it’s my dream dress, I believe I have the right to wear it daily if I want to.

>> No.9798852
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>>9798506
You look really cute! It's in black and white because I didn't have the right colors for your dress, and I screwed up trying to improvise. Sorry about that. Also sorry that it's sideways.

>> No.9798853

>>9798852
Oh. It's not sideways. Huh.

>> No.9799113

>>9798677
Unfortunately people bitching about outfits has always been a part of these threads. Honestly some are pretty bad and I'm not sure why people think they should post here, of all places, with subpar coords. If you don't want to do anything with your face/hair, at least put a sticker over it, and always be prepared for crit if you're self posting on /cgl/

>> No.9799328
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>>9797261

>> No.9799634

>>9795543
is this drawing on tumblr anywhere? i want to reblog it to my blog

>> No.9799635 [DELETED] 

>>9799634
>>>/tumblr/

>> No.9799650

>>9799634
Anon, the artist's name is right in the file name. Her tumblr is Yasahime.

>> No.9799685
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>>9798387
Here ya go!

>> No.9799716
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I really liked this recent coord, and would be very grateful to get art of it!

>> No.9799778

>>9799685
You can't even see her ears in the photo.

>> No.9799781 [DELETED] 

>>9799778
Was in the middle of typing this too.

>> No.9799800

>>9799778
>>9799781

Is cookiebunny salty she got drawn with big ears lmao

>> No.9799801 [DELETED] 

>>9799800
No, don't even know who she is. It's just weird to draw someone with ears so big they look like a monkey. She has plenty of other features to pick on.

>> No.9799803

>>9799685
This is adorable, thank you so much! Your art style is so cute. Do you have an insta or Tumblr where I can credit you?

>>9799800
I actually really like how anon draws ears, I think it's cute!

>> No.9799807

>>9799778
>>9799781
Sorry, I'm so used to drawing big ears on my character, regardless if they show or not. When I get home from work I'll fix it

>> No.9799810

>>9799803
Thank you :) my Tumblr is pastelfairygirl I really appreciate it

>> No.9799899

>>9799778
>>9799801
Who fucking cares? It's just an art style, I see it often.

>>9799328
I love his anon!! Love how you actually drew the perfume bottles too!

>>9798363
Cute! I love your style! The eyes are my favourite partlol.

>> No.9799924

>>9799899
Because people like to shit on this gull for her aparently enormous ears. No hate if that's just her artstyle, but it's pretty common for some people to just fuck up these threads.

>> No.9799930

>>9799924
I can't imagine someone putting effort into making something actually cute and then just adding giant ears to be a dick tho

Like that's a sad, pathetic waste of time.

>> No.9799935

>>9799930
I think it's just her art style, anon. Like how chibis are a style of drawing people with tiny bodies and enormous heads, I don't think it's to pick on her.

Calm down.

>> No.9799937
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Hey gulls, hoping for a drawing of this coord (on the left).

I wasn't feeling well that day and I ended up going home without any outfit shots, a friend took this candid but that's all I got of it. The wig and makeup are the same / very similar to the photos on the right from another day! (the blouse is also the same, you can sort of almost see it, but it's just a plain peter pan collar button down).

I know it's not a lot to work with though, if anyone feels like it I'd be very appreciative!

>> No.9799939

>>9799810
Awesome, thank you! Please don't let anyone get you down about your art style, I really like how recognizable it is!

>>9799930
I don't think anon is adding ears to be spiteful anon, especially since my own ears were obscured in the coord above (plus they're small in general), it's just anon's art style.

>> No.9799941

>>9799935
I was arguing against it being a mockery , anon. Like nobody would put time into a cute drawing and then try to annoy someone with the ears is what I'm saying, I understand that that's her style.

>> No.9799945
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>>9799801
>>9799930
uncultured swine

>> No.9799947

>>9799945
>>9799939
Do u need some help with reading comprehension

>>9799941

>> No.9799952

>>9799947
Your response was posted after mine ( >>9799941), anon.

I appreciate that you're aware she's not trying to mock anyone's features with her art style, since she's clearly not, but it's just how she's used to drawing from what she said earlier. It's not your coord being drawn anyway so I don't feel there's any reason for you to feel so bothered by it.

>> No.9799961

>>9799952
I don't feel bothered by it at all holy fuck y'all

I was saying that it makes zero sense for her to have done such a thing

because the art is cute so it must have taken effort

As in, why would someone waste their time to make cute art and add anything to spite someone, that's definitely just her style.

I even called it cute in my first post.

>> No.9800291
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>>9798407
That dress is beautiful. Please excuse the lack of colors, I can't find my pencils.

>> No.9801020

>>9799961
How does it make zero sense if it's her art style? You're creating problems that aren't even there. The person she made the drawing for isn't mad so why are you?

>>being offended when nobody else is<<

>> No.9801033

>>9801020
I think you're still misreading >>9799961.
They're not being very clear, so I'll restate it.
Anon was saying that >>9799685 clearly wasn't intended to offend the anon who was drawn and isn't offensive because someone who was just doing it to offend the person probably wouldn't have put in so much effort.
Please stop arguing with each other now, or exchange contact information if you'd like to continue arguing, in private.

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>>9799716
May I ask, which dress/skirt are you wearing? At first look I thought it was Elizabeth OP

>>9800291
Thank you so much!!! I love it!!!

>> No.9801405
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>>9799937
Cute!

>> No.9801487

>>9801321
Thank you for drawing me! The dress is Baby's Little Princess Velveteen OP, I actually bought it from an anon here in the old school thread.

>> No.9801788

>>9801405
Thank you so much! it's adorable!!

>> No.9801960

Artists, where do I find cute egl girls who want commissions of themselves wearing their coords?
I love drawing frilly lolita dresses but I never get commissioned to draw them and I have so little time to draw what I want these days.

>> No.9801963

>>9801960
You can shill yourself here.

>> No.9801964

>>9801960
Post your handle, if people like your art they'll commission you.

>> No.9801978
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>>9801960
>>9801963
>>9801964
Then shill I shall.

Twitter/Instagram/Facebook are @RedBardIsCool (I respond fastest on Twitter).
Commission info is on my Twitter.
I like drawing cute, fluffy dresses and I need money for Anime Boston and PAX East since they're coming up, so I'd greatly appreciate it if you let me draw your coord <3

>> No.9802011

>>9801978
I;m going to follow you, I have a photoshoot planned for the near future and I might want some art of that coord! Your style is super cute.

>> No.9802015

>>9802011
Thank you!

>> No.9802525

>>9799937
It would make it easier if I could figure out what you're wearing. Maybe some links?

>> No.9802689
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>>9802525
I made a collage while I was planning. I guess I should have thought to post it with my OP in the first place.

>> No.9803159
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9803159

Hello again, I am back with a sleek new name and a link for everyone.
Booru and imgur were both busts, Booru's mass upload is a shit, and imgur hates me or something.

More will be uploaded, but the most recent contributions are there.

If you don't see your art and you want it in the archive, email me.
If I messed up and have the same picture in there 5 times, email me.
If you want to spam my inbox with cats, feel free.

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Prjc-2TcS6n--TRkSu7VHOdxHLKL7iej?usp=sharing

>> No.9803208
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>>9797260
Practicing some traditional chibi examples before a con( And what better way then drawing cute lolitas). Experimenting with copics and chibi styles.

I hope you like it!

>> No.9803222

>>9803208
Yo this is so fucking cute

>> No.9803227

>>9803159
Thank u!!

>>9803208
Ah ... so cute!

>> No.9803242

>>9803159

Love this, so much adorable art in one place. Thanks anon.

>> No.9803286
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>>9797260
You guys are really cute! Have a lazy doodle.

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>>9803242
>>9803227
You're welcome

>> No.9803810
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>>9799716
You pull it off so well.
Here's an inked sketch.

>> No.9803855

>>9803159
Why has no one thought of this yet... the draw threads on the 18+ boards all have their own danbooru

thank u anon

>> No.9803916

>>9803208
>>9803286
Thank you so much this is beautiful!!!! Hope the con goes well!

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>>9799716
couldn't resist

>> No.9804231
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>>9799716
I really love all the old school being posted lately! Also as a side note, I really really love your hair! :)

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>>9798463
Another chibi style attempt.

Not sure how I feel about this type but I hope you like it anon!

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>>9798463

>> No.9804607

>>9803810
Thank you so much, anon, this is really cute!
>>9804155
Ah, I love how soft it looks and the way you drew the face.
>>9804231
Thank you! This is adorable
>>9804527
Not me obviously, but this is a super cool style! I'd love to be able to draw like you.

>> No.9804800
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9804800

I made a new thing for your reaction image needs. I might do a few more today and maybe draw some anons

>> No.9804802

>>9804800
Bless you, anon.

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Got commissioned recently for this though U guys would like

>> No.9804815 [DELETED] 

>>9804814
Sorry my phone posted sideways or something???

>> No.9804817

>>9804814
What do I have to do to get commissions with art like this

>> No.9804818
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Recently got commissioned for this magnetic paper doll thought you guys would like

>> No.9804821 [DELETED] 

>>9804817
Kik me, bambisbum ;0

>> No.9804835

>>9804818
Actually I guess email me @ irklarer7@gmail.com if anyone's interested in paper dolls???

>> No.9804868

>>9804818
yikes

>> No.9804876

>>9804868
Sorry you don't like it? Lol

>> No.9804910
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>>9804876
work on your anatomy (particularly hands, feet, and whatever is going on with her collarbones), draw her some cute lingerie, actually look at a lolita dress for inspiration instead of creating a lurid generic 'kawaii bunny print', tone your fucking colors down. also please make her hair interchangeable so it doesn't have to be pepto-bismol-90s-anime-waifu-pink all the time, pic related.

>> No.9804911

>>9804910
>implying I can't do anatomy
>this isn't a chibi or a commission was it

Anon your stupid as fuck if you think I can't draw, this was a 20 dollar *commission* and colors/outfits were by request

Do the math

>> No.9804914

>>9804818
1. This is a blue board. Your post violates the rules.
2. I hope you didn't charge more than $5 for this.
3.>>9804835 This is also against the rules. If someone asks you for a commission you are welcome to provide contact info, but advertising of any sort is against golbal rules.

Fuck off.

>> No.9804916

>>9804911
even as a chibi the anatomy is disgusting.

>> No.9804919

>>9804916
This. Something being chibi isn't an excuse to make it look like all her bones are broken and she's some sort of mutant anatomy wise.

>> No.9804921

>>9804911
You're*

As in, you're stupid as fuck and you can't draw.

>> No.9804925 [DELETED] 

>>9804914
New 2 4chan idk what blueboard is
Also was asked, deleted first pic bc sideways

also y'all are mad asf about a cheap ass piece of art, I've got other shit that's not shit tier ita

Go choke on a wig

>> No.9804926

>>9804925
Lurk more newfag. Your art is bad and so is your attitude.

>> No.9804927

>>9804925
calm down. and if you have better art, why not post that?

>> No.9804928

>>9804927
Because she doesn't actually have anything better

>> No.9804930

>>9804916
It's not even a chibi. What part of that is the anatomy of a chibi?

>> No.9804931

>>9804926
I take crits not insults

Can't expect everyone to like my art but also shit talk =\= crit

>> No.9804933

>>9804927
I don't have a lot of lolita/ita art ;^)

>> No.9804934

>>9804931
You were given crit, you just chose to bitch about it instead of gracefully accepting it. You need to lurk more, your post violates multiple rules.

People only started "shit talking" after you proved to be an insufferable cunt who can't take crit.

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>>9804931
yikes

>> No.9804938

>>9804936
>3 year old art

How about something not old anon

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>>9804938
woof

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>>9804938
Are you still fat or have you not changed your DA avatar in a while? Also you were astoundingly shit at anatomy 3 years ago and by what you posted in this thread that hasn't changed.

>> No.9804945

>>9804938
>mfw you're a cam whore who cuts herself

sounds about right.

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>>9804938
Still fat I see.

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C L A S S Y

>> No.9804952

>>9804946
Y'all r fuckin hilarious keep it up lmfao >>9804951
What can I say? Weeb boys give me their cash, it's more than what you're doing

>> No.9804953

>>9804952
>it's more than what you're doing

You don't know me, or my life. And I'm happy to report that I'm far better off than having to be a literal whore like you.

>> No.9804954

>>9804953
>implying it's my whole life

>> No.9804955

>>9804954
Even if being a literal whore isn't your "whole life" you are still just a whore.

>> No.9804957

>>9804946
>6 measly notes
LOL

>> No.9804958

>>9804955
>2018
>can't be a whore

What are you, 60 years old who cares

>>9804941
Yeah I'm still barely chubby anon and I don't keep up my accts, but good job posting only cringe art to prove a point

>> No.9804959

>>9804800
Omg I love you, your art is divine

>> No.9804961

>>9804957
Yeah who cares 90% of my customers don't even leave a note

>> No.9804963

>>9804958
>barely chubby

nah you're fat as FUCK and a withered up whore.

>> No.9804968

man i don't even care that the thread is getting derailed, this is the funniest thing to happen here in a while.

>> No.9804970

>>9804961
>having to whore yourself out to get weeb boys to give you money
>tfw I'm actually pretty so they buy me stuff for free and interact with all my posts because they love me

>>9804968
same anon

>> No.9804973

>>9804968
Honestly I agree
>>9804963
Okay you bulemic ho bag go rot your teeth out of your head for "fashion"

Oh and you probs won't be happy with the chronic IBS you'll get later on in life, not fun trust me

>> No.9804974

>>9804951
Imagine being so sad and pathetic that you can't provide for yourself and rely on neckbeard cash and money from tumblr trash art :^)

>> No.9804976
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>>9804973
y-yeah, i'm just laughing at all these ana-chans, they're just jealous of the 5 bucks i got for showing my fupa on tumblr

>> No.9804978

>>9804973
Shut up you fat cow

>> No.9804984

I usually hide the draw thread cause I'm jealous that I can't draw but I had no idea the drama was so juicy here.
Imma read this thread from now on.

>> No.9804986

>>9804978
>implying being toothless is cute

At least cows can be cute

>> No.9804987

>>9804818
GET OUT with your shitty art and your disdain for this community. If you can't even be arsed to learn our rules, we don't want you here.
Also "pretending to be an ita" just makes you look stupid.

Mods, please get in here and clean this up.

>> No.9804989

>barely chubby

Sweetie, by 4chan standards you’re a hamplanet

>> No.9804991

>>9804986
>anyone who thinks my gelatinous blob of a body is gross must have an ED

shut. up. fatty.

>> No.9804992

>>9804986
Cows are cute, but you ain’t

>> No.9804994

>>9804984
It's usually not this milky, we just happened to have a cow show up.

For future reference to anyone who might want to post in this thread, it's against 4chan's global rules to advertise yourself. If you want to commission someone or be commissioned, you need to discuss that elsewhere. This is why it's good for artists to put their signature; then you can go find them on twitter/tumblr/da.
Also, don't post here unless you're prepared for crit, no matter how harsh. Acting like a whiny pissbaby when someone criticizes your coord or art skills is a good way to make enemies; if you just let it go and accept things gracefully, 9 times out of 10 the drama will stop.
By acting like moo moo over here, you fuck yourself over.

>> No.9805004

>>9804930
well that's what she called it here >>9804911 so

>> No.9805011

>>9804974
I mean clearly she's not making enough if she has to make begging posts

>> No.9805033
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9805033

idk
first time trying gothic.

>> No.9805148

Can you all please just go elsewhere to have your whore pissing contest? I just want to draw some lolitas and see some nice art

>> No.9805152

>>9805148
shut the fuck up

>> No.9805157

>>9805033
>still posting art in the face of derailment
This thread is entertaining but I still love you anon

>> No.9805162

I can't draw for shit but is embroidery art of coordinates allow? If anyone lurking has any chocolate or forest themed coords I'd love to embroider them!

>> No.9805257

>>9797261
I may or may not come back to draw you (gotta knock out school drawings first), but I want you to know I saved this coord to my inspiration folder. You look so wonderful.

>> No.9805270

>>9805162
Fellow fiber artist here, I'd love to see embroidery art!

>> No.9805278

>>9805162
Yeah that would be really cute, but if I were you I’d wait until the next thread since a tumblr cow ruined this one

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First time in draw thread... would someone maybe draw this coord for me?
sorry for potato quality phone..

>> No.9805782

>>9805278
ruined? the party is only just getting started now.

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>>9804940
I was wondering why you draw such sad grandma tits but after seeing your pics on tumblr it all makes sense now.

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>>9797261
I hope you like it! Your coord really cause my eye~

>> No.9806495

>>9806491
oh shit i did not see the shit storm above, should have refreshed before posting art

>> No.9806515

>>9806495
No worries anon, drama happens all the time.
I never really understood the 'omg we got off topic one time now let's wait for the next thread'
Like, that girl that posted her coordinate and deleted yesterday, I would have drawn her if I didn't have to now dig through a broken archive to find it.

>> No.9806532

>>9804952
why do you cut yourself? that's sad to see you need to have better self esteem dude

>> No.9806534

>>9804288
Wow, this is super cute! Thank you so much, anon!

>>9804527
I love your style, especially how you draw hair! Thank you so much, anon!

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>> No.9806536

>>9806535
Who is this of?

>> No.9806537

>>9806535
this is a place for people to post art they drew, not a place to post random bad art you find, despite the above drama. Take it to the cringe thread.

>> No.9806539

>>9806535
This bitch is a mess

>> No.9806591
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>>9797261
Just a headshot, but you are so cute and I love your coord!

>> No.9806602

>>9806591
Super cute sketch anon!

>> No.9806616

>>9806491
Amazing! You made her even prettier, anon

>> No.9806619

This thread is fucking amazing and i love you all (except cow)

>> No.9806829
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9806829

I hope this inspires anyone to draw something!

>> No.9806833

>>9806491
Fucking gorgeous work anon

>> No.9807111

>>9804946
I think that's pretty cute, but what do I know? I'm just a guy.

>> No.9807163

>>9806616
>>9806833
Thank you so much!!

>> No.9807173

>>9804910
I know this was drawn in response to that other idiot, but this is very cute anon!

>> No.9807251

>>9807111
Men would literally fuck two pieces of expired salami.
Also we know it's you, cow

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>>9805257
Aw thank you so much!

>>9806491
This is amazing and detailed! I love how you drew everything and oh man my face looks so pretty ahaha. I'm so happy!

>>9806591
Oh my gosh you're so talented! Even though it's just a sketch it's so beautiful! I love your style so much, my face looks so good lol

>> No.9807279

wow. I really wish that mess would have ended at the paper doll garbage.

I will say I don't think bringing up her camming itt was very nice at all. y'all went pretty overkill when the mods already did their job and you could have ignored her and not derailed.

that's some heavy bad energy, gulls.

>>9803208
saving this because this is what I want in life.

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>>9807279
Nobody cares about your morals, nor about the other anon's lack thereof.

>> No.9807394

>>9807279
newfag

>> No.9807570

>>9807388
More like angelic petty

>> No.9807571

>>9807279
Honestly, I have my doubts that this girl was ever here and if this was just some troll who took pictures from a random, embarrassing tumblr to derail the thread

>> No.9807576

>>9807571
You must be pretty new if you think incidents with cows don't pop up here.

>> No.9807881

>>9807576
You keep saying cow like you're on the farm, why don't you just go back there if you want to stir the shit?

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>> No.9807924

>>9806616
Bruh

>> No.9807961

>>9807881
So op of that paper doll here (aka cow) I can actually admit that I haven't been back here since ppl started posting my cringe stuff and I shouldn't have to defend myself or anything but I can say that I am sorry for stirring shit and I should have taken crits better but I also think y'all take crits to the next level. My shitty doodle chibis aren't meant to be wonderful, I get commissioned for cringe art and I actually enjoy working with bright, psychedelic colors because I'm trying to find my own style. I didn't know the rules proper and I'm lurking to learn now. So pls for the love of God drop it and draw cuz we're all here to draw and get practice in. Like i get it we're all shit heads w/e, no one should care at this point bc I don't

>> No.9807964

>>9807961
And now you're saying this, after derailing the whole thread. Good fucking grief.

>> No.9807972

>>9807964
Ppl get heated and make mistakes I'm trying to at least let y'all get back on track bc it keeps coming up lmao I'm dropping it

>> No.9808214

>>9807251
Do I have to post timestamped dick or something?

>> No.9808227

>>9808214
What

>> No.9808230

>>9808214
>not cow
>is instead a salami-fucking cgl boyfag
Should have just kept quiet and let cow take the fall

>> No.9808233

>>9808214
Do it. Also post a facepic + social media urls so we know who u are

>> No.9808234

>>9807571
underrated post
Let this thread burn and bring the undrawn here

>> No.9808251

>>9808233
>>9808230
If I hated someone enough, this would be the perfect time to post their face and links and hope a personal army comes through.

>> No.9808324

>>9808234
Fucking seriously

>> No.9808327

>>9807898
I feel attacked.

>> No.9808341

>>9807961
shut up you fat whore

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>>9798506
MY DUDE. It was an honor and a pleasure. I was waiting for photoshop to download so this is in ms paint which was both a struggle and a release, anyway I hope you see/enjoy this.

>> No.9809010

>>9797261
where is your wig from ?? you're so cute !!!

>> No.9809014

>>9807111
>being this deluded

>> No.9809319

>>9808341
Wanna say thanks to whoever posted me in /cuck cuz I'm getting more customers from it lmao

>> No.9809352

>>9809319
>says she's sorry for stirring shit
>comes back to stir more shit

Kill yourself you fat whale

>> No.9809355

>>9809352
What I just came back to say thx

>> No.9809356

>>9809355
I hope one day you cut yourself too deep and you bleed out.

>> No.9809371

>>9809356
I hope I do too! Thank u!

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>>9809371
like we don't see through your transparent attempts to be like 'lol the fact that everyone thinks i'm a trashy degenerate whore with no talent doesn't bother me at aLL! look at how attractive desperate 1/10 neckbeards think i am!'
if you weren't butthurt in the first place you never would have come back. you would have just been like 'idgaf what strangers on the internet think' and departed free from sin instead of trying to prove to us how little you care and making a total fool of yourself in the process.
tl;dr, because your typing style reveals yourself to be an illiterate and also possibly retarded: learn to love urself~

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Can y'all just let this damn thread die already? If you gotta keep circling back to the same old shit at least sage.

>> No.9812457
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>>9806829
Sorry I didn't draw the print, anon!

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Hello gulls!

I would be so grateful and happy if someone would find it delightful to draw this coord. Sorry for the uninteresting background scenery. I see it as a chance to be creative with the background.

>> No.9813067
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I'd appreciate art for this old coord pic.

>> No.9813284
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>>9813011

>> No.9813640
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>>9799716
your coord kinda made me want to wear lolita again. Hope you like it!

>> No.9813759

>>9813284
Omg anon thank you <3 You have an awesome style! Wish I could buy your art or support you in some way as a thanks! If you are comfortable with exchanging contact info it would be possible ^^

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>>9799716
Your hair is so nice and I really love the all black coord

>> No.9813767

>>9813762
Do you have an Instagram or something to follow? Love your style.

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>>9813067
Really loved drawing this coord, the red accents go with it so well!

>> No.9813822
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>>9813067
I love this coord so much, the red accents are a really nice touch! Had fun drawing this

>> No.9813837
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Archive updated.
>https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Prjc-2TcS6n--TRkSu7VHOdxHLKL7iej?usp=sharing

>> No.9813873

>>9813762
I'm working on making an art insta but, for now, I can share my tumblr?
http://ravibunart.tumblr.com/

I don't post super often but it is something I am trying to fix

>> No.9813878

>>9813767
whoops quoted myself instead of you, my bad!

>> No.9813886

>>9813873
This is not a place for self promotion.
Contribute to the thread, have your insta username on your image so people can find you later on, that's the acceptable way to go about it.

>> No.9813888

>>9813886
nayrt but read the thread before you get pissy. Anon was responding to someone who asked for their social links.

>> No.9813890

>>9813886
they’re replying to someone asking about their art account, chill

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>>9813888
Whoops

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I feel like this one would be fun to draw.
I would love if someone drew me <3
I might draw some if I'm inspired.

>> No.9814114

>>9813762
This is so polished and nice, thank you so much, anon!

>>9813640
That's a great compliment, I love how badass you made me look and your style is really cool for lolita art.

>> No.9814804
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I'm not entirely sure if this could be classed as Uchuu? But I gave it a shot.
I would love to get some feedback as well as a drawing if Anons are up for it.

>> No.9814809

>>9814804
Girl, that shoop. Just no. I really hope this is a vendetta post.

>> No.9814812

>>9814809
I'll take that on board but I can see what you mean about the overshooping. Thank you though.

>> No.9814817
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9814817

made my lolita debut today, would love a drawing to remember it by~

>> No.9814826

>>9814817
Pretty good for a beginner coord.

What’s your favorite animal?

>> No.9814840

>>9814812
If you don't mind a bit of constructive criticism, your eyebrows could stand to be a bit more defined, they kind of get lost in your full body pic

>> No.9814865

>>9814840
Eyebrows are something I'm still working on perfecting but I do appreciate the feedback :)

>> No.9814971

>>9814804
ThIs is awful. Your hair is disgusting.

>> No.9815073

>>9813822
This is adorable! I can't even imagine how you did the print. I love it !!

>> No.9815077

>>9814804
yikes

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>>9814804

>> No.9815161
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>>9814804
This is disgusting

>> No.9815169

>>9814865
>> :)
If you just came on cgl for the draw thread please leave.

>> No.9815172

>>9814804
Sorry I'm here to crit not draw.

The outfit itself is meh. There really isnt anything wrong with it but it reminds me more of the alt western scene than jfashion. More like dollskill/tumblr style.

Your hair color is really cute but girrrrrl those glitter roots. I've never been a fan of glitter roots myself because it looks like dandruff. But that isnt even the problem here. They are so slick from what I'm assuming is too much hair gel. As another anon pointed out your eyebrows could use a stronger color because they become really lost on your face.

>> No.9815178

>>9815172
I agree with you but...
“I’m here to crit not draw”

Then make a crit thread????? Why come here to crit? Nobody is looking for that. Doesn’t mean it’s entirely unwelcome but it tends to shit up these threads.

>> No.9815181

>>9815178
She asked for concrit anon.

>> No.9815182

>>9815181
No I know but why come to thread at al just to crit? Maybe they glanced and saw it but interpreted it as “I com here to crit often but not draw”

Don’t mind me, it’s the coffee kicking back in

>> No.9815287

>>9803208
Oh my gosh, do you have any commission info? I absolutely love your art style!

>> No.9815991

>>9815182
I think, they meant just that post. Not the whole thread.

>> No.9816005

>>9815287
Thank you!

I'm in the process of making an Instagram for my traditional stuff ( need my micro sd card to come in first) where I'll have an official commission info page.

I'll be sticking doing more requests until then!

>> No.9816016

>>9806829
>Prime example of a coord that would look better with a face sticker

>> No.9816052

>>9808995
oh my goodness i love this!! thank you so much anon, I made it my phone wallpaper.

>> No.9816106

>>9815991
Yeah thanks anon, this is what I meant. I'm >>9815172

I actually have already been drawing in the thread which is why I was coming here in the first place. I just meant I didnt feel like drawing galaxy-chan but wanted to give her a crit because she asked

>> No.9816151

>>9814804
Nightmare fuel.

>> No.9816203
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Would love if someone could draw my dolly kei coord I wore recently! I was trying to wear something that wasn’t a dark green or tan and brown like I always wear, but I still think it came out cute and comfy.

>> No.9816347
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9816347

Would anyone like to draw this look? To be honest I’m not even sure if it’s jfashion, despite it being an obvious jfash dress and shibori haori. I wear my collection of haori a lot and take inspo from Japanese artfag fashion but idk I’m sorry if it doesn’t fit the thread. Also sorry for the bare toenails.

It would be a fun and different topheavy, straight silhouette for an anon to try drawing if they wanted.

>> No.9816357

>>9816203
>>9816347
yikes

>> No.9816358

>>9816357
Crit me then (haori)

>> No.9816362

>>9816358
nayrt get rid of your shoes
get legwear
get hair accessories

>> No.9816365

>>9816362
I agree with hair accessories but what legwear are you imagining? I wanted a free and breezy, top heavy spring look and light tights would clutter that, don’t you think?

>> No.9816368

>>9816358
it looks like you shoved on whatever was in the back of your closet. The haori looks stupid with the dress, the shoes are dumb, your hair looks like you just rolled out of bed. Stop trying to shoehorn stuff together.

>> No.9816376

>>9816368
Thanks for your opinions and I accept them as valid except for
>hair
wat? It’s not messy or greasy, in fact there’s barely anything to say about it with it being so short. I get saying I need a longer style or a wig but...

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Id love to see someone draw this coord. Bad angle makes me look stumpy....

>> No.9816882

>>9816856
it’s not the angle, it’s your position

>> No.9816947

>>9816882
Fair enough. Still, I look hella stumpy. I'm short, but not that short.

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>>9816347
the sandals just look random and cheap, get better shoes and some legwear. the middle of your outfit is very bright and a lot going on, i would prefer to see something on your head as well. maybe an elegant updo and some flower pins?

>> No.9816970

>>9816856
Don't let tall people take your picture unless they're willing to get at eye level with you.

Also ditch the heinous wig.

>> No.9816985

>>9816964
Even when it’s at it’s normal length, my hair is too short for anything but an ugly baby banana-like ponytail. I don’t think a nice looking updo is possible. But I’ll look for a tree peony kanzashi-like clip as an alternative.

>legwear
Again this is so vague and I’d really like to know what anons picture in their minds when they say this, because I can’t see it. Sheer white? Sheer pink? I’d look like a monochromatic blob I feel.

>> No.9817082

>>9816970
"Get at eye level" that requires some stooping on most people's part.
Also what is wrong with the wig so I know what to avoid.

>> No.9817398

>>9817082
Not that anon but I think your dark roots are showing right where your temples are. I think that it would look much better if you styled it a little more and got it properly fit on your head. Also, not sure if you're wearing one, but get a wig cap in a light color for this wig

>> No.9817440

>>9816347
I actually like this a lot!

I'm not a huge fan of the shoes simply because of how dark they are, but as far as people bringing up the tights--

I actually like the idea of bringing in traditional shoes + tights like with kimonos, only keeping the fabric light. I think it would bring the haori together with the coord way more.

I wouldn't go with such a dark brown though, maybe a cream or even something to match that color of red(?) on the sleeve.

>> No.9817457

>>9816347
>>9816203
>>9814804

If you ever have a bad day on /cgl/, just remember these are the people who might be nitpicking your coord on CoF.

>> No.9817472
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>>9817440
Thank you for actually being helpful. I have some casual light-colored geta that would match but I wonder if that’d be too weeby. I didnt know they existed but I searched and there is such a thing as long tabi, which is awesome - maybe they exist in lighter fabric and I can wear them with geta? If not I’ll find some other shoes. I used the brown wedges initially because I’m picky about light coords being topped with dark hair but it seems that’s not an issue with most people so I shouldn’t care as much.
This was supposed to be a more normie-friendly casual outfit but thats gonna change with these additions. Oh well lol.

>>9817457
Oh shut the fuck up and post your own casual coord if you’re gonna shit up the thread with your try-hard jab.

>> No.9817483

>>9817472

Oh I must have touched a nerve.

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>>9816347
>>9816358

The reason anons are saying legwear is because the balance is off. This thing looks like a heat trap because there’s so much fabric, the haori looks thick and the dress is high-necked. So the viewer thinks the weather is probably cold and you need all that fabric. But then bare legs with sandals, and now everyone is just confused and annoyed. Is it cold or not? Even if you dressed like this solely for insta at least make it a believable fantasy. If you’re going to cosplay drowning in a fabric tent, at least be consistent and choose an ankle-length dress. If it’s cold, at least be consistent and show it by wearing thick socks. If it’s actually so warm that you’re wearing sandals, match it with a skimpier dress and a summer haori, not some winter jacket.

imo, what you really suffer from is putting things together thoughtlessly. What was the image you wanted to convey (other than “let’s mush a haori on top of casual lolita with fug non-jfash sandals, these are three things cgl argues over so I’m sure they will love me”). Is it warm, is it cold? Are you dainty and drowning? Are you sexy and skimpy? What silhoutte are you going for, is it one that works or is it fugly? If you were going for East meets West, how do fugly weird sandals work with traditional East and traditional West? If you were going for East meets modern, how does a frumpy petticoatless fussy lolita dress work with spartan modern sandals?

Go in with one concept you want to convey and actually design your outfit instead of throwing on random things. Then look over your outfits with a critical eye and see if it clearly states your vision. Don't just look in the mirror and go "my hair is nice today, I'm cute so my outfit must be too". No, no it isn't. Your outfit is only three items and still should have been aborted the instant you combined any of the two items together.

>> No.9817651
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>>9817527
I mean...the dress (which is not lolita at all - it's sticking to the inside of the haori in that picture so it looks like it could be a lolita silhouette, but it wouldn't take a petti) is chiffon so I don't think it looks like part of a heat trap nor does it feel like one. The haori is silk with wide open sleeves and not for winter weather. Breezy, yes. Pictures must not convey any of this.

I don't think about "concepts" with such casual go-to-class outfits. Props to you for doing so, but I don't. I'll take it into account when I upgrade this to a proper coord, though.
I didn't throw things on randomly. I picked the chiffon dress because I thought a difference in fabrics would make a neat juxtaposition, same with the bare legs. I know now to get legwear and different shoes but I'm keeping the silhouette.

>>9813894

>> No.9817653

>>9817527
Also, you're projecting a lot. I don't think about what cgl will like when I pick out my clothes lel.

>> No.9817676

>>9817651
>>9817653

lol anon, if your ego is so delicate, maybe keep quiet and don't pretend you wanted any con crit in the first place.

I don't know you. I don't know your wardrobe, and you never stated what you wore it for. If it's not a good outfit, why would you bother requesting someone spend their free time drawing a shitty sloppy outfit? Who's projecting? You who expect me to know all your shitty excuses ahead of making my comment, or me who told you directly "you look confused, like you just schlepped stuff together. Next time spend more time thinking about your outfit".

I'm not the anon who posted the first "yikes". I'm also not the other two anons, one of which also said you looked like you just shoved random things on from your closet. I just saw your photo in passing and it looked like you wanted someone to point out where you were failing. I stepped in and gave you your answer.

You can either take that answer and use it, or make a shitton of excuses and continue being a delicate snowflake.

>I don't think about "concepts"

Yes anon. I'm telling you we can see how you fail there.

>> No.9817682

>>9817676
I said earlier in the thread what the outfit was for. Maybe read before you waste your time then? Sounds like you’re the one with the ego.

>> No.9817686

>>9816376
I think anon was implying that you didn't do anything at all styling wise to your hair. It literally looks like you got up and walked out the door.

also unrelated nitpick but

>wearing street shoes in a dance studio

Get out

Aside from that, the dress looks so sad and pathetic under that haori. There's no shape to the dress at all, so you look like you just threw on an oversized shawl and your mom's shoes, like a kid playing dressup. Plus the dress itself doesn't fit with the haori, it's so plain and an awkward length. You need a better petti, you need shoes that aren't disgusting, and you need to do something with your hair or get a wig and style that. You are also wearing zero accessories so this there isn't anything at all to distract from the rest of what's wrong. It's very boring.

>> No.9817689

>>9817686
Also for legwear there are literally so many options, but a subtle floral print or even some sheer tights with a design on them or lace tights would do fine to add interest without being a huge distraction. I'd say even a pair of plain colored OTKs with geta if you want to make it more cohesive, have it match the pink color from the inside of the haori / the neck bow.

>> No.9817695

>>9817686
Again, it was a casual outfit for wearing to class that I happen to like a lot, there is no petti or accessories for that purpose, it stands out among classmates enough as it is.

I really do appreciate everyone’s opinions no matter how harsh but I don’t think anons are reading what I’m saying...

>dance studio
It’s kind of a multipurpose room on campus in the student union, everyone wears their street shoes. Except the dancers who aren’t in their official dance rooms in the dance building anyways.

>> No.9817697

>>9817695
Thing is, even for casual, it's not a good outfit. It doesn't have the requirements at all to be lolita or even really jfash. You look straight up like a white girl that bought a haori at some swap meet and decided to wear it with whatever you had laying around. Posting it here was your second mistake after wearing it, because it's not even really jfash to begin with, which makes it board irrelevant. But even for a normie outfit, it isn't good.

>> No.9817700
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>>9817697
Well, I drew something, so at least my sin is lessened. Have a good day all.

>> No.9817738

>>9817653

No? You just said it was a casual outfit in the reply before mine, not that it was for class. Casual can mean a lot of different purposes.

Regardless, it's still a pretty fug outfit.

But go ahead and argue whatever, it's not me that's being bashed here, anyway. The convo is nice way to pass a slow Thursday.

>> No.9817741

>>9817700
Another drawanon here sick of these threads getting filled with unnecessary crit. If you're not replying thank you to art, complimenting art, or posting art yourself, you shouldn't be posting on here. Would anybody else be interested in just doing art trades?

>> No.9817825

>>9817738
autism

>> No.9817906

>>9817651
OMG, that is so cool! Thank you! Do you have an art blog or an Instagram?

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>>9816856
Here you go. I love that print so much, gonna have to add it to my wish list. I still need a bit of practice when it comes to people (hence the derpy face) but I hope you like it.

>> No.9818027
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>>9816856
I love that print so much, I'll have to add it to my wish list! Anyways here you go, I still need a bit of practice with people (hence the derpy face) but I hope you like it anyways.

>> No.9818030

>>9818027
Oooh I love it so much! Its really cute.Thank you so much!!

>> No.9818066

>>9818030
I'm glad you like it! I'd be happy to send you it if you like? If so just message me through my fb or etsy shop page ~

>> No.9818071

>>9817906
Im just about to start and art insta so I don’t have any names or links yet unfortunately. Enjoy!

>>9817741
To be fair I asked for crit, but that was after the first shot was fired. But yeah this thread didn’t need the extra peanut gallery who is salty from being nitpicked >>9817457 and egoanon getting buttmad that I’m not 100% receptive to 100% of their snarky crit >>9817738

>>9818027
This is incredible.

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9818100

What's with all those animals here? just barking and whining and being edgy. I thought draw threads were for selfposters and artists, not for sad and grumpy animals with too much free time on their hands.
Oh well, I hope those tryhard shitposters don't scare selfposters out, I want to draw some cute coords.

>> No.9818141

>>9818071

Well thanks for the overreaction, that was mildly entertaining and the most I've seen in a while. Best of luck with your life!

>> No.9818199

We are here, gathered together in what is normally the best thread on /cgl/ depending on the week.
We had three people in a row post ita outfits asking for concrit, yes, they were ita, no excuses, and before that we had a cow milking competition.
I expect nothing less from you in the coming posts before sage.
>>9817700
Thank you for your art, please don't be discouraged from drawing or posting but oh my god please get a life and stop defending yourself on the internet.
>>9818027
Do you take commissions?

>> No.9818203

>>9818199
I won’t be coming back to these threads lol.

>> No.9818205

>>9818203
bye
your art is wonderful
but your coord was not
grow up, move on.

>> No.9818211

>>9818199
I'd be willing to do commissions. As I mentioned before, I'm not all that good at people but I'd be happy to try (I'd also discount it a bit for that reason). Just message me on either my etsy or fb page @Foxandrosecrafts

>> No.9818269

>>9817457
>>9818199
Can everyone please stop lumping me in with everyone else? I’m >>9816203 and I didn’t ask for crit (I wouldn’t reject it, but I don’t want it here in the art thread), and I don’t typically nitpick or crit coords. I like looking at the art and getting coord inspo. Regardless, I just wanted to maybe get a picture drawn of my coord, and possibly draw some other people’s coords.


Also, >>9818027 do you have an insta? I would love to follow you on that platform. Your work is absolutely lovely.

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>>9816203
Sorry you got caught up in a shit show anon.I like your coord. Have a whiteboard drawing.

>> No.9818305

>>9818290
Wow, this is stunning!! Thank you so much!! This is stunning.

Like, I can’t get over how much detail you captured with so few lines AND on a whiteboard! That must’ve taken years of practice to nail down, and I’m super impressed.

>> No.9818310

>>9818305
Crap sorry I said stunning twice and basically repeated myself. I’m typing on mobile and not paying attention since I was busy freaking out over the art

>> No.9818347

>>9818269
please stop lumping me in with everyone else?
Sorry anon, that was unfair of me. Hope you stick around/improve/do you

>> No.9818445

>>9818027
This is amazing! I’m just starting embroidery and you are goals now.

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>>9798463

>> No.9818703

>>9798802
if you wore it daily youd look like a homeless frillmonster, a disgrace to lolita

>> No.9818704
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>>9818703
We were ALMOST back on track. Take your kind whom are unable to let a comment go unbantzd and
Stop
Shitting
Up
These
Threads

>> No.9818743

>>9818269
No I'm afraid I don't have an insta but I've been meaning to make one and now seems as good as time as any.

>>9818445
Thank you! I still consider myself a beginner but you'd be surprised at what you can do with even the most basic stitches.

If anyone else has any other forest, chocolate or space themed coords I'd love a bit more practice. I can also send you the hoop itself if you contact me through one of my pages ~

>> No.9818752

>>9818290
Do you have an Instagram? This is so cool.

>> No.9818792

>>9818290
Goddamn, you are new goals, senpai. Beautiful artwork

>> No.9818989
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9818989

>>9813067
Here you go, anon.

>> No.9819340

>>9818989
So dainty

>> No.9819358

>>9819340
Thanks!

>> No.9819368

>>9817082
Naryt but I would brush the curls out so they’re less like ringlets. It might also help to tighten the wig straps so it looks more secure and less like it’s swalling your head.

>> No.9819393
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9819393

>>9816985
I think a small flower/kanzashi style clip to place on the side of your hair would be nice. Personally I like how your hair is styled, it’s nice and “flowy” looking like the haori.

As for leg wear, I like the bare legs but something like these (pictured) in white or plain white socks that go up mid thigh would look nice with this if you can find some that are thin enough to your liking.

>> No.9819443

>>9812457
Sorry I didn't see this until now, thank you so much! It adorable

>> No.9820288

>>9818704

Next time redirect them to the coord help thread or the stupid questions thread, anon. Giving them an appropriate place to discuss their stuff works a little better than telling everybody to stfu.

>> No.9821306
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9821306

I would love to have someone draw this coord if they're interested!

>> No.9821311

>>9818211
>Foxandrosecrafts

>> No.9821680
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9821680

This can't be explained easily but there was a meme a few years ago about a young girl luring older men into a van with the promise of classic rock cds and free beer and I've been giggling for a few days about a /cgl/ version of pic related

It doesn't translate too well from memetic into human words but I've been enjoying thinking about sweet lolitas pretending to be gothic lolitas and luring romantic and victorian goths under boxes with plastic bats or saying they have biographies of elspeth bathory in the back of their van and jfash girls peer pressuring a classic goth to wear a cravat

I would like to request a /cgl/ version of the "trust the loli" meme

>> No.9822171

>>9821680
>This can't be explained easily but there was a meme a few years ago about a young girl luring older men into a van with the promise of classic rock cds and free beer and I've been giggling for a few days about a /cgl/ version of pic related

>It doesn't translate too well from memetic into human words but I've been enjoying thinking about sweet lolitas pretending to be gothic lolitas and luring romantic and victorian goths under boxes with plastic bats or saying they have biographies of elspeth bathory in the back of their van and jfash girls peer pressuring a classic goth to wear a cravat

wHAAt the fuckare you smoking
Jesus christ
It should be illegal how autistic you are.

>> No.9822184

>>9821680
Would the sweet Lolita's pretending to be goths be wearing btssb stuff in black colorways?

>> No.9822188

>>9822184
Holy lantern too

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9822761

>>9816347
i think the other anons had valid critique points but the overall outfit was cute and had some nice colours so here's a drawing. i hope you don't mind that i edited the legwear, i dont think i can do your toes justice.

>> No.9822775

>>9819393
I just bought some socks like this over the weekend hoping they will work!
>>9822761
AND some little block pumps like this but white, so they probably won’t work until I get darker legwear. I’m still looking for better shoes.

Thank you so much anon, and this does help me visualize a better coord! In fact as I was thrifting for another purpose last week I was beginning to see how the contrast in thin underlayer and thicker haori outer layer looked bad to anons. So as much as I love the colors I put together, I’m going to be more open to switching the dress out for something else.

I love frogs omg I would love to incorporate them somehow, since it’s a spring coord. Maybe a brooch or in the kanzashi or something.

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>>9821306
I just got a new monitor and I haven't really calibrated the colors the way I like yet, sorry if it's inaccurate.

>> No.9823841

>>9823725
Omg I love it!!! Thanks anon!! Can I credit you somehow?

>> No.9823924
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Maybe not the most ideal photo since there's a shadow right over my face, but I'd love a drawing of my clown coordinate! Please pardon the badge.

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9824087

>>9823924

i had to do a lil thing of you before bed because you're adorable & i love clowns!!

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>>9823924
Sorry for the messy print and dress, anon. I shouldn't use those little pencils anymore.

>> No.9824333

>>9824087
>>9824314
Omgggg thank you both so much, these are lovely! You've really made my day!

>> No.9824632

>>9822171
>greentexts the entire post
They could easily say the same to you, anon.

>> No.9824761

>>9814826
sorry for the delay! but i would have to say bat?

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>>9816856

>> No.9825051

>>9824632
Gomenasorry, I was crossfaded at the time.

>> No.9827026

Can we get some new coords? I wanna draw something new that doesn’t have a ton of art already

>> No.9828392
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>>9823924
Sorry if this drawing seems a little rushed, I actually haven't drawn for a few days but I got a small rush of inspiration to draw your coordinate! :)

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>>9816856

>> No.9829214
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I recently got my DD and would really appreciate a drawing. Thank you all for the beautiful art so far.

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>>9814817

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>>9828392
Thank you, this is so cute! I love the big round ears in your style, they're so charming!
>>9829214
I love the colors in this dress!

>> No.9829550

>>9829291
Thank you so much anon! I love it

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>>9797261
Had been meaning to finish this since one since the thread started. I hope you like it! I loved this coord.