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>>8694396 Old Thread

Time to get back to non-Halloween coords.

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Love this colorway

>> No.8702942

that looks great!

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>> No.8702957

Something feels really off. Something about her face and her legs.

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>> No.8702993

So happy the halloween thread is kill.

>> No.8702997

The shoes ruin it.

>> No.8702998

I feel like so many of these are just sub-par or nitpicky. Did Halloween fuck with peoples sense?

>> No.8703007

She looks so punchable and she looks like a girl from toddlers and tiaras.

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that face though

>> No.8703021

Another toddler & tiara here KEK

>> No.8703022

She's is fugly. Nasty face

>> No.8703026

This is the CoF thread, not ita.

>> No.8703029

Looks like green slime on her face

>> No.8703030

Her expression is so quirky that its charming.

>> No.8703031

Vendetta-Chan detected

>> No.8703032

I love it when all the browns go together so perfectly

>> No.8703034

Niggas be jealous of this coord, it's fuckin' beautiful.

>> No.8703038

yeah but where can i get that wig tho

>> No.8703041

they look so cute together, both of them look flawless. I like how he wore black and she wore white to contrast

>> No.8703045

The coords nice you nigga. We said her face isn't

>> No.8703095

What does that have to do with anything? I'm the person who started this thread. I just think a lot of the coords in CoF recently aren't great.

>> No.8703101

Let's see your coord you Fucking twat

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It was just an observation, shit.

>> No.8703115

is that supposed to be a picture on the left? shit has more shoop than a korean cosplayer.

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>> No.8703129

Holy shit, vendetta comment retracted. Good observation.

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Itas. Itas everywhere

>> No.8703155

Oh no, I think she looks cute! She just needs to smile and work on her make up, but I don't think she looks bad.

>> No.8703177

dress is gorgeous but something's up with the petticoat and it's weird poof distribution.

>> No.8703192

coord ruined.

That bow is not helping, go with something smaller. Flourescent bathroom lighting is not flattering and not the most desirable location, go for natural lighting instead.

Super cute for casual, the tights feel a little noisy, I might replace them with something a bit more calm like a flat cream that matches the blouse underneath.

feels very ageplay

>> No.8703226

Someone please tell this girl she really needs eye brows and not to put white on her waterline.

>> No.8703237

I love this coord, but man that face ruins it. I think it's just the problem of the photo being taken at an awkward time, she probably looks fine most of the time.

Another coord I love but the face ruins it... the eye makeup is awkward and makes her eyes look droopy.

Is there a term for when people do this weird flat-but-stiff bows in the hair like this? It looks so bad. It needs to be propped up by hair, or folded more so that it looks natural. I think she has potential, but needs to sort out her eyebrows and get a better place for photos, too...

This is hideous. Flat hair, frumpy cardigan (maybe unbutton a few and it'd be better?) clashy tights and wtf is the shoes? I feel like someone with better style could turn the basics of this into something cute.

>> No.8703238

I literally liked this and then I saw her face and unliked it. Why would you ruin a perfectly good coord with that godawful makeup?

>> No.8703254

What the hell. Go drink some tea and take a chill pill. Sorry your coord sucked.

>> No.8703263

Even the metal tones are contrasting, him with silver and her with gold. Nice attention to detail.

>> No.8703381

I really hope you're not that dumb, anon....

>> No.8703385

people often think the CoF thread is for shit-talking itas, so when >>8702998 commented (with a comment that can be read two ways*), >>8703026 thought the other anon meant way #2 rather than way #1.

*the wording is ambiguous depending on context.

>I feel like so many of these are just sub-par or nitpicky. Did Halloween fuck with peoples sense?

interpretation #1:

>I feel like so many of the coords posted to CoF, and subsequently shared here, are pretty meh. Did the costume festival make it hard for everyone to dress well?

interpretation #2:

>The coords you all are posting here are merely subpar, and therefore not worth discussing. Can you not tell the difference between a good and bad coord after Halloween?

given that we know newfags often mistake CoF for a specific type of ita thread, and the original anon's comment had wording that would fit what such a newfag would say, the second interpretation is not far off.

>> No.8703399

>flat stiff bow
Helicopter bows?

>> No.8703404

the fuck you mean? the hair is clearly 'real'

>> No.8703411

The point wasn't that the image was photoshopped, it's that they were comparing her to some random child-trophy.

Fucking dense ass gulls.

>> No.8703414

Haha, wait a minute, I am the dense one here. I like putting extra words into sentences; I thought it said "photo of her". We on the same page now, carry on.

>> No.8703628

Stop using waistbows as hair accesories 2k15

>> No.8703629

Lmao I remember when newbies with bodyline ops use that exact tactic

>> No.8703633

I did it when I got my first bodyline coord, took a few photos and then attached it back onto the dress

>> No.8703684

Anons, exhibit A>>8703629

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>> No.8703709

I'd like this with a wig, nicer glasses, and maybee some more pink near the bottom. It looks really cute with the cake in the photoset too

>> No.8703715

I don't care for the tights or shoes

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I almost like this but I don't care for the fandom elements or the earrings. But that's a nitpick.

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It looks like she has a dildo attached to her head

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I really like this.

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Why do people post unfinished coords?

>> No.8703818

Maybe for feedback on how to improve them before they're complete? This one looks pretty cute (I like the colors!) though it seems the JSK doesn't fit her bust too well. It might look better with a bolero on top.

>> No.8703829

What dress is that? I love it...or at least what I can see

>> No.8703848

Great now all I can see is a butt plug on her head since you said that. I don't like any of it. The flowers the shoes something seems off about how the skirt is resting cheap petti maybe, and too short too.

>> No.8703849

I don't know if there is a dress, but I found this.


>> No.8703883

That must be it, thank you anon! It's actually quite a hot mess...

>> No.8703914

Yikes. She made it a point to put a bunch of fucking pumpkins on her head but can't even be bothered to wear a real lolita skirt? If I passed her on the street I wouldn't have thought she was going for lolita at all.

>> No.8703977

slutty looking short dress with head dildo. yep. coord is ruined for me now.

>> No.8703999

ok isaki

>> No.8704002

this reminds me of 2004 mcr and i love it
i don't like the headchain, either. it's so awkward looking

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I have been laughing for 20 years

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Gonna dump a few recent coordinates that I liked.

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>> No.8704077

i would like it better if the blazer was fitted to her

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>> No.8704090

>white and red

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And that's it. I haven't been following these threads too closely and a lot of stuff I'd saved to dump were dupes, sorry about that.

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>> No.8704108

not that anon, but I laughed because the pose is hilariously unflattering

>> No.8704128

ivory x white--I cant stand the shoes with this. its so off.

>> No.8704130

take the flower crown off. instantly better

>> No.8704135

wtf. learn how to pose!!!!!! and coord better.

>> No.8704136

Why? Because it's a flower crown? Even though it's actually well made and fits the theme of the print?
okay, anon.

>> No.8704138

I think the flower crown looks super cute, and the print seems kinda foresty themed, right? Which fits with flowers for me...

>> No.8704139

I actually like the flower crown w/ this coord.

>> No.8704142

Because it's super big, elaborate and attention grabbing for such a casual coord.

Such a cutie. Perfect top to bottom.

>> No.8704145

sounds more like you wanna fixate on it because you want to shit on whatever's trendy.
...but what if I told you that shitting on trends is trendy, what will you do then?

>> No.8704150

I'm not that person who first complained, anon. I just gave you my opinion on why I think it's unbalanced. You can take that in and agree or disagree with it. Or you can get defensive and attack me personally.

>> No.8704172

There wasn't anything defensive about the post you're replying to, it's fair to be annoyed by the knee-jerk "I hate flower crowns and underskirts and everything else trendy right now" reaction because it's so prevalent in these threads (even when the hated accessory actually makes some degree of sense).

>> No.8704179

She always looks amazing and her shop is fantastic

>> No.8704183

Seconding this, I have a few LotV accessories and I plan on buying a JSK soon!

>> No.8704191

Ugh thirding, I freakin love everything she does, she's such an inspiration to me.

>> No.8704206


Yes, but she didn't say "she should get rid of the crown because it's trendy." She backed it up with her opinion why it shouldn't be in the coord (it makes it unbalanced, which I agree with). >>8704145's response makes it seem she was criticizing the crown for the sake of being trendy, which wasn't even mentioned in >>8704142.

I mean, it's fair to complain all around, but going 'hurr durr u just dun like trends' in response to an opinion that doesn't even mention the word 'trend' whatsoever is silly.

>> No.8704207

I'm glad I'm not the only gull
I have a sash (my favorite lolita accessory) and a veil, I'll be a long time customer of hers!

>> No.8704212

she looks like she has greyscale from game of thrones

>> No.8704247

What fandom is this? Oh god, is it a fandom skirt? I kind of like it...

>> No.8704257

God, I love this chick.

>> No.8704266

No it's not.

>> No.8704275

You have to be 18+ to use this website

>> No.8704303

This would be a lot better if she had chosen one shade of green. Not liking the mint and dark green together

>> No.8704335

No. I agree. It looks cheap

>> No.8704336

She's not even wanting concrit. All the really bad coords are like this. Conceded ita.

>> No.8704348

She is sooooo cute. I love the big lips + droopy eyes combo.

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I love how she's trying to lie about the length. It doesn't matter what angle it's taken from, that jsk does NOT reach the top of your knees girl. That bish is about 4 inches above, you ain't fooling noone.

I like her face too. I have lips like this too, naturally, so thin lipped-chans can take their salt elsewhere we can't help it. And I thought the slightly droopy eye is a lolita makeup thing. I think she's fabulous and cute.

>> No.8704409

The emerald looks so shoehorned in. It's terrible. What a shame, all the items are lovely but are better for two different outfits.

Glad to see she's getting recognition finally for her work.

>> No.8704437

Whatever is happening on her cheeks is entirely too distracting.

>> No.8704462

Someone says she does modeling and knows how to model apparently? She says she was just goofing around in the Taco Bell bathroom


>> No.8704475

Can't unsee

>> No.8704480

Modelling what? She doesn't have a models face, nor height or body. I model, none look like her even the ones with 'ugly' or more average faces.

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I really don't care for anything but the JSK in this coord.

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She has a better picture, which I'll post next

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>>8704528 was for >>8704480
Here's also the better picture she took, why didn't she post this one, and put the goofy ones in the comments?

>> No.8704533

This really isn't much better.

>> No.8704540

GOD I love her hair. Is it a wig? It looks so fluffy and thick. This girl is my pastor.

>> No.8704551

She's the redneck version of milkyfawn.

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I can only see this

>> No.8704566

That's not any better, not even shitting on her because the first one is obviously a joke, but a model she is not

>> No.8704569

She's got a nice face? Though it's not really ita, just unbalanced

>> No.8704627

This is almost as bad...

>> No.8704642

Is this a shoop? There's no way her lips are this big naturally.

>> No.8704663

is there something wrong with one of her eyes?

>> No.8704664

Lmao this is still really amateur and unflattering, that's hilarious

>> No.8704770

She's a Fucking loser.

>> No.8704771

Omfg it's a fat KATE!!!!! KEK

>> No.8704772

That's not kawaii. Mini skirt excuses

>> No.8704773

Can't unsee the Kate resemblance now. Just when we finally got rid of her

>> No.8704800

I love her face, I think it's incredibly cute and fits lolita very well.

>> No.8704855

Literally exactly what I was about to post before I clicked on this thread.

>> No.8704861

I was born with lips like that too. So it is possibly not shooped. Yes way.

>> No.8705094

I have that dress too, it's cut very short in both the torso and the skirt (compared to brand at least)

No need to lie about it, either buy an underskirt or just roll with it

>> No.8705099

I know her irl and she looks nothing like kate. She is super cute, while kate looks like a hag.

>> No.8705294

I think it's just that angle honestly. Maybe plus the facial expression.

>> No.8705331

its pretty, but it's really fucking boring. she just buys sets and wears them. nothing spectacular

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I'm sorry but her friend...really isn't too good at making hats.

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CoF is not a mori comm. Did she post there by mistake?

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I like how happy she looks!

>> No.8705349

that tiny random skull pin is cracking me up. why.

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Why post when you don't even have a proper coord shot?

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Ending dump and going to bed now.

>> No.8705353

This girl was a Cosplayer first and then went lolita very recently. Her coords have greatly improved from the ita shit she was doing but I agree with the comments above. Her makeup is almost too much and her smile reminds me of a cartoon. Her boyfriend usually takes her photos and I believe recently taking the coms photos but I believe quite a bit of shoop is used. Hopefully they will dial it back a bit. I know she is a seagull too so she probably is lurking.

>> No.8705373

>that pose
she's not in sweet. why?

>> No.8705377

this looks like some sort of mori/lolita crossover and it isn't very nice.

i think i have those exact leggings.....they're not for ouji.....

This is cute! not super lolita in my mind but i really like it~

Isn't one of the rules of cof that you need to have a full coord shot?

I really don't care for her hair and she needs more poof I think

>> No.8705436

How do her arms look too short and her head looks too big??

>> No.8705457

A lot of cosplayers that migrate to or try out lolita almost always overdo it on the makeup (and fake looking wigs) because they're so used to it, since cons are more about photoshoots now than in-person interaction. It's one thing to be used to doing makeup to look good on camera but they have to realize that it's still a streetfashion, so photoshoot-ready makeup isn't really appropriate for what's generally daily fashion. Even event makeup is generally a little less OTT than camera-ready photoshoot makeup.

I feel like cosplayers that migrated to lolita before the cosplay community became the way it is these days don't have this problem as much because makeup was less photoshoot oriented in the earlier 2000's. You can see it when you look at old con photos.

>> No.8705496

That is the ugliest hat I've ever seen.

>> No.8705527

Looks like a bad picture to me. You can't possible know she's really fugly just from this pic

>> No.8705528

Damn, she is ugly as fuck.

>> No.8705546

She really needs to learn to pose for her substyle.

>> No.8705585

Lovely :)

>> No.8705594

i think it'd be cool and casual if the dress was tighter and she wore a bra.

>> No.8705598

Agreeing with another anon, it's really nothing spectacular. She bought a set and a common bag that matched perfectly and that's it.

>> No.8705703

Alison Hannigan? I missed you!

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Has she given up on the drake thing?

>> No.8705723

This whole thing looks like a fucking mess. What even is a silloutte? There is none here. I hope she didn't call this mess ouji

>> No.8705725

This is super adorable; that print is so great and she looks so happy and comfortable in it. The coord definitely needs work, but it at least fits and she she has an okay start.

>needs to add blouse, tights, better shoes, some more details on the arms like a bracelet or cute rings/nailpolish.

>> No.8705729

I really like this coord

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>> No.8705972

Jesus christ this hurts my eyes

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Honest question... does she have a mental disability or is she really that oblivious to how unattractive her coords/photos are?

>> No.8706028

Why do people do this with their pictures? The mirroring thing, I don't get it.

>> No.8706031

There must be something wrong with someone who genuinely thinks they look good like that. Even the fucking facial expression.

>> No.8706032

So that it fits into a square shape.

>> No.8706035

I dunno. She is slowly improving. And she's trying to mimic the poses that other girls use on CoF. I'd say she's aware of it, and genuinely wants to get better, and handles it better than most people (meaning, I haven't seen her dissolve into a rant about meanies and h8rs like the majority of people who get critiqued).

>> No.8706036

I still don't understand why she's pulling such a face, that's not flattering on anybody.

>> No.8706038

She's actually arguing about the critique she got on the photo as we speak.

>> No.8706039

Didn't see it. I retract that statement, then.

Some people are shit at facial expressions. I generally block my face out in photos because I look like someone pissed in my cereal if I don't smile, but my smile looks demented because GUMS GUMS GUMS!

>> No.8706043

I didn't know, if you know her, let her know that she doesn't need all of the shoop and the harsh make up! I'm sure she's adorable without the smoke and mirrors, her coords are cute.

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How does she fit?

>> No.8706172

She looks great. Don't be jelly anon.

>> No.8706177

She's cute but this just looks like a thrown together mess.

>> No.8706178

At first glance I thought this was cute but the more I stare at it the more everything is just kind of thrown together.

>> No.8706179

What is this pose

>> No.8706183

>my dream dress
>being on this girl
>with this pose

Being a lolita is nothing but suffering

>> No.8706185

Not jelly, legit curious.

>> No.8706186

I love this! I wish the shoes were lighter though.

Please tell me this is a replica being used like this....

>> No.8706189

Oh I don't know her personally at all but I follow her. I really think she's getting good concrit on cof and on her pages she's improved so much since the beginning was really bad... I don't feel comfortable giving her any but, I really think she is improving alot.

>> No.8706190

She isn't arguing it, I think she's asking questions to better understand. She's being very agreeable - any catty feeling (i.e. the "so you are saying I can't wear pink strawberry socks with a dress that has pink and strawberries on it?") comments are most likely a translation error.

>> No.8706208

Maybe a binder?

>> No.8706271

She states it's first edition. There was only one outfit I liked from that comma meet up.

>> No.8706275

I'm so confused.

>> No.8706278

I can't tell if she's being smug or wishing someone would punch her face.

>> No.8706282

I checked her FB out of curiosity and it's all minion memes and bitstrips so she is probably either old or has mental problems.

>> No.8706303

I'm the one wearing the Musee Du Chocolat. Thanks for the feedback and I'll be sure to keep them in mind. I've only been in lolita for a year so my wardrobe is still small, so hopefully I'll be able to get more creative in the future as my wardrobe expands.

>> No.8706305

Love this.
She looks so sincerely happy, I like that.
I originally thought her shoes were too dark at the base but I think her hair actually balances it.

>> No.8706306

Oh this girl. She's trying to buy up every 'popular/dream dress' for ages now. Same girl who got her bf to get HL within the same household and got lynched on APUSA

>> No.8706310

oh god. that poor dress

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>> No.8706380

Even if she has a mental disability, she is still one of those lolitas who are seriously trying to improve and understand concrit even if it's a slow way. She still has to practice in facial expressions and posing but as long as she becomes good at coording in the end, she will look good and just need to learn how to pose.

>> No.8706387

I need to know how she made that bow on her waist because the original AP ones are shit.

>> No.8706391

She is pretty cute imo but just need to work on her smile and go into a better place for pictures.

>> No.8706393

the legs...i want those legs

>> No.8706400

Her face is very punchable, kek

>> No.8706401

She looks like she did the whole smoosh boobs under waist trick

>> No.8706406
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Otome is not casual loli.
There's a separate comm for otome anyways.

>> No.8706426

>random child-trophy
>not knowing jonbenet ramsey

>> No.8706465

Except it specifically states in the rules that CoF is for finished coords, not WIPs

>> No.8706466

What is wrong with the bodice? Why is that bow just plopped on there? This coord just looks so sad

>> No.8706469

Dear God she is fucking insufferable...

>inb4 you're jelly accusations (for everyone, because she bothers everyone)

Did anyone ever find out of she got officially booted via AP USA? I know it definitely doesn't matter with that whole MTO thing, but no one ever confirmed it. Either way, she can't coord for shit and looks just as obnoxious as she acts in every fucking photo. If she wasn't so challenged in English, she'd be acting just like Kate.

>> No.8706484

>tries whoring out awful video
>wants likes from strangers on a selfie


>> No.8706500

I don't think she got it cause she hasn't shown it off on her insta kek, looks like she bought the navy colourway off someone lol.

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Sorry if these have already been posted.

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dropped pic

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>> No.8706520

She is a dead ringer for kelly osbourne

>> No.8706523

The only good thing about this coord is the bag. Am I the only one who sees an overgrown poorly dressed ciel phantomhive wanna-be?

>> No.8706526

only fatty uggos cover their faces in coordinate shots. hella not cute

what is on her ankle

>> No.8706528

This needs more accessories. It's too plain.

>> No.8706532

do you know how many glue gun burns i sustained making that flower crown anon? check ya damn attitude.

>> No.8706538


My condolences that it turned out shit then.

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no one cares

>> No.8706546


Just saying it as it is. No number of hand sacrifices to the fire god will save your coord.

>> No.8706550 [DELETED] 

You wouldn't want to see this bitches ugly mug trust me.

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Anyway, back on topic.

>> No.8706559

My 300 lb brother has a Model Mayhem account too.

>> No.8706561

Haha seriously though, when did "I'm a model" become a colloquial term for "I think I'm attractive so I can judge"? We've got hideous, fat, and physically deformed women modeling these days. It means literally nothing.

>> No.8706573

The thing on her ankle is a bandage I think? She hurt her leg so that's why she doesn't have tights on.

>> No.8706598

fuck off, this is fine. what else do you think she needs?
>lace topped socks
>bows on shoes

>> No.8706624

I know you lurk here hospitality doll-chan. Please learn to take better pictures, your coord shots basically never do your outfits or your face any favours

>> No.8706631

She is corsetted for the gods, jfc

>> No.8706702

She didn't ask for concrit, but some ppl just can't help themselves! That's what CGL is for.

>> No.8706765

That's not even Jonbenet Ramsey tho.

>> No.8706769

Cute but I think the wristcuffs are on upside down...

>> No.8706803

I like how she is open to criticism and is growing in the fashion. If more girls were like her, we wouldn't be inundated in a sea of special snowflakes.

>> No.8706806

Vendettachan. Coord is fine, tons of people cover their faces. Why so mad?

>> No.8706925

That's me and I dont understand what you mean. If youre trying to say Im wearing a corset Im not.

>> No.8706938

What wrist cuffs? I dont see any.

You must have a really tiny waist.

>> No.8706965

Then it is photoshop. The dip is too extreme to be natural

>> No.8706996

I sent a request to join this group weeks ago because I recently made a new fb just for lolita, and they still haven't accepted. Anyone else have this issue? It's not like my fb page is blank or something

>> No.8707001

Not trying to white knight but I've hung out with her at a con. She's just very petite, chill man. Plus a petti can accentuate your hips.

>> No.8707002


I'm rooting for this girl, I've been watching her improve and take concrit like a champ. She always listens to suggestions, and never gets bitchy.

I want her to become beautiful one day like the Princess Diaries or something.

>> No.8707009

I believe its just an optical illusion created by my super fluffy Bunny House petti. No PS or corset necessary.

>> No.8707019

lol, must not have wanted that ~*ultimate dream dress desu*~ anymore after it became available to more people. Had to hop on that navy so she can avoid removing her head from her ass.

>> No.8707020

As in actual fashion runways and shit

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>> No.8707027

God she has such an ugly face. She definitely needs a wig or to learn how to style her hair better (and a new haircut probably), learn to do makeup, and lose the glasses or get a mode lolita appropriate pair

>> No.8707057

She really needs to learn how to do her hair and makeup but she is getting so much better at coording I'm proud of her.

>> No.8707068

Fatty-chan? Are we looking at the same picture?

>> No.8707078

Aw, she's so cute.

>> No.8707083

She's clearly chunky, anon.
A necklace maybe? It looks so bare.

>> No.8707088

I'm glad to see this print coorded! I did find the caption to be kind of cringy, though.
I like the bag, but not much else.
wtf is even going on here?

>> No.8707106

She broke up a literal cat fight and took some damage

>> No.8707107

I find the gold bag a bit jarring
There isn't enough gold elsewhere to balance it out

>> No.8707115

It's not bare, you're just use to ott with a million tacky accessories, it looks fine, she doesn't look fat either, damn, y'all are seriously over the top today.

>> No.8707120

Fat Ciel

>> No.8707124

She's clearly not chunky at all, you salty cunt. And she doesn't need more shit slapped onto her either.

>> No.8707132

Hover loli

>> No.8707134

She said her necklace broke in the post. Is there a reason you're obsessed with being a shithead?

>> No.8707190

I fucking love those tights, where would I acquire such an item?

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Fucking perfect

>> No.8707212

This coordinate is super cute! I'm so glad to see she's improved so much

>> No.8707240

I have a few nitpiks, the cardigan, the hat, the watch especially.

she should fix her wristcuffs

>> No.8707251

What wrist cuffs?

>> No.8707253

She's improving! I'm so proud!
I wish she would get a better camera, but she's really working hard and it shows in her progress

>> No.8707255

Whatever is on the hand with the bag at the end of her sleeve. I believe it's a wrist cuff.

>> No.8707263

It depresses me that will never be this good :/

>> No.8707265

It looks like she's just wearing bracelets over the sleeves of her blouse. It looks kind of stupid imo.

>> No.8707284

This is stunning

Same here

>> No.8707285

Until you get below the hem, and take the photoshoot prop away. Really, it's just okay.

People are too fooled by what is really a 'good photoshoot shot' as opposed to a 'good coord'.

>> No.8707288

I like this! It's simple and cute, she looks really nice. Only nitpick are the wristcuffs.

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>> No.8707292

Sallllt. Maybe she just didn't like the face she was making in the photo. She's not fat.

>> No.8707297

Lol whatever "if you remove parts of the outfit it's not as good!" Well duh. u jelly.

>> No.8707304

Guys.. She's not wearing wristcuffs.

>> No.8707305

How is a fucking lantern prop part of the outfit.

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>> No.8707312

The shoes look like hooves

>> No.8707314

This is extremely cute. I don't usually like polkadots myself but I really like the contrast of the light+dark polkadots.

>> No.8707315

This is adorable: cute, cohesive and totally wearable.

>> No.8707316

A) It was a Halloween coord. B) It's a themed coord. C) It's part of the outfit as much as a bag would be.

Stay salty but you're wrong.

>> No.8707322

I know this is bait, but you probably weigh at least 1.5x her weight, like 2x. She looks close to underweight, lol. Whenever people say this, they're always people projecting their own insecurities. Doesn't it make you feel bad to call thin people whose size you will never reach fat?

>> No.8707328

The ratty as wig, the tacky plastic horns and the shoes that don't match in colour or style need to go. So that leaves 4 items of clothing for a really mediocre coordinate at best.

>> No.8707330

>lolol salty salty salty
Unless she's using that lantern to find her way home Halloween night, a prop is not part of an outfit. It's part of a costume. A bag is an item you wear for a utilitarian purpose- to hold things. It's part of an outfit/coord.

Her tights are fine but the boots go with nothing, and her wig looks like a mess. It is far from a 'perfect' coord and the only reason it looks 'amazing' to you is because it's a good photo of a decent outfit on a pretty girl.

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You're a moron

>> No.8707348

The wig works for me? The front is tidy and the back looks like it was teased to look like that. Just because it's not your cup of tea doesn't make it a bad coord. It works as a whole. Lol Halloween coords are literally the only time costumey lolita coords are okay with me so idk why you're so upset about it.

>> No.8707365

I never said it was a bad coord. I said it wasn't a perfect coord and stated the reasons I think so, only one of which you've addressed, and clearly we don't agree on.

You keep saying I'm upset and salty, but it's a COF coord discussion thread and I'm discussing a posted coord. The only one who seems upset here is you.

>> No.8707385

I think we'll have to agree to disagree. I think it's a cute coord and the boots are a nitpick at best.

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>> No.8707392

Its her real hair

>> No.8707408

Those tights and shoes do not go with the coord but overall i think its ok

>> No.8707415

Lol what? She lists that it's a Lockshop wig.

Cute! The black and pink look well balanced.

>> No.8707440

Why does this have over 100 likes

are people licking her asshole because they think she's disabled or something?

>> No.8707445

I think a lot of people recognize the improvement and want to encourage her. She's like the poster child for gradual improvement.

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This looks a lot better than when she had that high waist skirt, but I can't figure out what is going on with her top area

>> No.8707454

I dunno it just seems like people are being like overly nice and it seems fake to me, like "wow you look so elegant and perfect and amazing" blah blah. It's just very patronizing.

>> No.8707456

reminds me of that chick from Mad Father

>> No.8707459

Yeah, the comments are the patronizing part, but acknowledging a post/effort by liking it will always seem a fair way to show encouragement, IMO.

>> No.8707471

This outfit is cute but her face in her COF photos randomly pisses me off so much, I don't know why.

can't work out what's wrong with the torso portion of this, but something is.

>> No.8707477

If this wasn't a Halloween coord my jimmies would have been rustled. Hate props and costume-y elements in fashion

>> No.8707483

Well for one the blouse doesn't fit and she looks like she's about to bust out, but the proportions are just all wrong. Generally the ideal balance of lolita silhouette goes

>large-medium head area
>small chest/waist area
>large again at the skirt
>small at the legs
>large-medium at the feet

So the fact that her torso area is equal in balance to her skirt while both dwarf her foot/head area makes her look like a huge solid block. If she had a bigger, voluminous wig/hair accessory and maybe some clunkier boots, I think it would help relieve the imbalance.

>> No.8707484

The coord itself is pretty solid if you block out her face, desu.

>> No.8707491

She's just got huge tits, but it's not the most unflattering coord she could have put together. You can still see her silhouette, so props to that for avoiding becoming a total blob like others have.

>> No.8707500


I think if she had a poofier petti it would have helped? She looks like she has tiny ankles/feet in proportion to the rest of her body though, so like >>8707483 said, boots would have been a better pick I think.

>> No.8707510

Good example of why you need to avoid ruffles if you have a large bust.

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jesus christ she looks possessed in the pic on the left.

>> No.8707546

she looks like a toad

>> No.8707558

That underskirt is so superfluous.
She reminds me of Umbridge somehow.

>> No.8707584

I actually think the opposite. I think it's unbalanced, but I feel like she needs to change her shoes or tights.

Unless the aim was specifically to be casual?

>> No.8707629

I saw this coord irl, and it looked terrible. She looks like an ageplayer in everything she wears.

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all i can think of when i see her smiling like that.

>> No.8707638

Jesus Christ that underskirt is awful.

>> No.8707648

I think it's actually on the wand (?) she is holding. The wand-thing she's holding kind of blends in, so that skull looks like it's just... Floating there.

The hat also doesn't really match, but eh

Take away the hat, skull, and weird choker-- I think it would look much better.

These are so weirdly specific. I know we nit-pick here, but really? Maybe drop the peace sign, but it still fits. Very dolly.

>> No.8707654

I don't know where she's at but she looks way out of place.

>> No.8707678

She looks fucking amazing. But as >>8706624 mentioned, definitely in need of a better place for pictures. Hope she finds one because, honestly, I can never find good places for pictures myself.

>tfw no one to take pictures of you
>tfw you have a nice, giant mirror in your room
>tfw you look bad taking selfies in the mirror because of lighting + messy room background

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I feel like she tried to add too many things to this coord. It looks really messy

>> No.8707739

this would have been nice without those wing garters

>> No.8707745


I know I'm really late to the party in this dying thread, but you're both totally right. Unfortunately my house is small and poorly lit, so it's tough taking photos, especially when my boyfriend is the only one to help (he needs work, but is getting better). But still, no excuses, I'll keep this in mind and try to do much better with my next coord. Thank you both!

>> No.8707753

What the fuck. Yuck.

>> No.8707827

I really like their headpiece.

>> No.8707839

I saw this irl too and I can't say I agree with the "ageplayer" comment. I do think she could add more to her coords though since it seems like she'll buy a main piece but nothing else to coordinate it with. The head piece she wore was the choker to the OP, and it looks really tacky used as a head piece. Also, I feel like the make up is too harsh for lolita and looks sort of show-girl esque.

>> No.8707902

I love this!

>> No.8707956

I wish she would post on Lolita mentoring or put a sticker over her face

>> No.8707960

Nothing really goes together. It's pretty terrible overall

>> No.8708027

What outfit was that?

>> No.8708114

She looks like the blonde peppy princess from Princess and the Frog.

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This looks like a hot mess.

>> No.8708180

New thread!


>> No.8708508

Not with those shoes it isn't.

>> No.8708813

This is my coord, and I have since added full coordinates to my wardrobe instead of just main pieces. I only wore unfinished/rushed outfits for meetups and my personal fb, not for sharing online though thank you for the salt. I agree about the headpiece, but I was taking concrit and this was also a coord I made with what I already had on hand, I've already since ordered something more suitable in the mail. The makeup only looks so harsh because as you know if you saw me we were at an outdoor picnic meetup with harsh morning light.

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>> No.8708851

Where's that underskirt from though? I like the pink/white.

>> No.8709084

What the fuck is this

>> No.8709448

>so fat you have to wear garters on your knees

>> No.8709454

Why don't you address the people saying your coord is ageplay, too? Seems like that's the less constructive criticism in this boat and seems more deserving of your "thanks for the salt" comment.

>> No.8710230

I hate when people wear the waist bow on the head, it just looks stupid

>> No.8710386

Absolutely love old school coords.

>> No.8710668

because if people want to post stupid things and have untrue opinions I don't want to address it. Ill take actual con crit though. I said thanks for the salt because its obvious if they have seen my other outfits when I only wore them to small meetups with friends or for casual things around town and didn't call them finished coordinates , especially when If you are on my personal media you obviously could use some work as a lolita as well, because everyone in the comm has nitpicks and concrit.

>> No.8710763

What comm are you in?

>> No.8710805

Obviously you thought it was complete enough to post on CoF a month after you took the coord photo. That's considered sharing online. Why are you complaining?

>> No.8711391

> I don't mind even harsh con-crit from actually experienced lolita's with who have nice taste, but this was for a lowkey meetup in florida in the summer, and I've already stated that I would do things differently (wig, bow,tights), ? This was just the only good shot of my ouji's first full coordinate and a cute couples photo to be shared, I didn't think this coord was great by any means, but to nitpick it to death when I've already stated I would have changed things, and concrit my wardrobe and coord skills on my personal fb and for private meetups when I never outfit shared is where I stop caring about what you think.

>> No.8712279

You should really learn how to use greentext, it makes it really obvious to tell which posts are yours since you have no idea what you're doing when you use it. Maybe next time you try to imitate a person you should make sure your speech habits aren't the same, disorganized pattern.

>> No.8712934

Great idea with poor execution.
Incomplete yet cute as hell.
Am I the only one who feels that JSK should not have black frills?
Everything looks neat except for those shoes and that random gem on her face.

>> No.8712938

I... don't hate it...?
Looks like a work in progress and the theory behind this coord is kinda cute, but she NEEDS to style that hair or get a wig asap

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