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new nitpick thread.

>> No.8164320
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I just ran across this and was pretty torn. It actually looks decent and I didn't want to post it to an ita thread. I've been seeing a rise in people doing African themed coords, and this is one of the best I've seen. I just wish she'd worn some sort of legwear.

>> No.8164345

>>8164320
for an african-themed coord I don't know if she should.
I quite like this.
>inb4 tumblr/hugbox/whatever the fuck

>> No.8164354

>>8164320
It does look bare, but I can't think of any legwear that wouldn't look uncomfortable. Tights, even sheer, would look over-dressed, I think. And socks wouldn't look good, either. Neither would thigh highs. So I think bare works in her favor, here. But that's just my opinion.

I think she looks pretty great. Is it homemade?

>> No.8164364
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>>8164320

My vote is for open toe heels, preferably with some busy design to match the busy pattern on her dress. Maybe with an anklet or two (I have no idea if anklets are African, sorry) to bring the design further up the bare leg.

Open toes specifically doesn't leave you wondering if she's supposed to be wearing tights or something.

>> No.8164366

>>8164320
I like this, even with bare legs, The colour combination is one of my favourites and if it was for the lion king (themed?), the lack of legwear bothers me even less.

>> No.8164440

>>8164320
I like this, but honestly it doesn't look lolita to me anymore. Cute, but not lolita.

>> No.8166375
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Tbh I'm thinking this is more ita than nitpick, but at least she's cute.

>> No.8168130
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8168130

I like this, but the white headbow doesn't work.

>> No.8168165

>>8168130
I have a mighty need for this purse.
Sauce?

>> No.8168178

>>8168130
what dress is that? I love it

>> No.8168190

>>8168130
that purse is stunning!

>> No.8168207
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>>8168178

IW emblem JSK, I think high waist version.

I always waver between wanting it and thinking the print is too random. It's a very beautiful print nonetheless.

>> No.8171817

>>8164320
I think it works, especially since this was a summer outfit in the south.

(OT, but motherfucker--how the hell did I miss The Lion King coming to ATL last year? Fuck.)

>> No.8171828

>>8168130
Would've worked better if the bow was like blackXwhite or burgundyXwhite
Really pretty other wise, and dat purse.
>>8166375
>50 shades of pink with a dress that has no pink

>> No.8174889

>>8164354
Yeesh, I feel old. She's lyrique86 on lj and I suppose recently, tumblr (man, I miss her d_l posts). Yes, she makes a lot of her own pieces. and they're fricking awesome.

Speaking of black lolitas...I've been watching a lot of lolita fashion transformation videos to pass the time and ran into this:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-EP-YSE7-6g
http://youtu.be/BtX17FqRWRw

I can't help feeling like Reina's transformation could have been way better. The process seems so lazy and I think that Reina would have looked better not in a jewel tone colors (muted/non-muted pastels, maybe?). Overall, I think Misako's bullshitting her way through the video and doesn't really know how to apply makeup, let alone know what suits certain skin tones,

>> No.8175595

>>8174889
yeah i'm pretty sure misako usually has a makeup artist do her stuff for shoots/shows. her normal makeup is super basic, but it suits her.

>> No.8176153
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>tea parties with gothic
>skewer headdresses
>fat

>> No.8176210

>>8176153
what's that print?

>> No.8176219

>>8168165
>>8168190
>>8171828


Looks like the purse was sold by a taobao seller once upon a time: Here's an EGL link that talks about the purse:

http://egl.livejournal.com/17191329.html

It's definitely no longer available unfortunately. Might be able to grab it used someplace.

>> No.8176225

>>8176210

I believe that print is some limited edition thing FanplusFrriend did around November?

>> No.8176265

>>8176153
>tea parties with gothic
Are you shitting me? When are you supposed to wear gothic? To a walk in the cemetery (sweet not allowed, classic must dress like a widow).

>> No.8176268

>>8176265

Anon meant the shoes...

>> No.8176269

>>8176265
Tea parties are the name of the shoes, dumbass.

>> No.8176277

>>8176265
Lol. How long have you been here?

>> No.8176285

>>8176210
It's Fanplusfriend's Musical Palmer.

>> No.8176290
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>>8176268
Kek.

>> No.8176295

>>8164320
African attire usually doesn't include legwear

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Torn between a nitpick or ita. Those legwarmers though, and that belt. Eww.

>> No.8176418

>>8176412
I'd call this ita. The only lolita piece that's done well is the skirt, the rest is just crap that looks like it was thrown together.

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>>8176412
Yeezus, I thought this was Hildekitten for a second. Not your typical ita, but definitely ita. Non-lolita/normalfag accessories don't always work with lolita and neither do those colors together.

I adore this dress, but even though the skirt isn't poofy, I do wish that she had worn a head piece, maybe a hat to balance this out. Maybe different shoes?

>> No.8177029

>>8176876
She's cute and all, but besides the dress nothing really seems to work. The shoes have to go, they are not remotely lolita and I think this isn't a dress that can be worn in a casual way. I can't really tell what's going on with the blouse and shawl thing, but considering the cut of the dress, I can't imagine a shawl looking flattering. She also needs a different petticoat and a headdress and I wish she had incorporated an accent color like navy. Maybe this really was just a casual coord, but the dress is just too fancy for that.

>> No.8177643

>>8176876
What dress is this?

>> No.8177658
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>>8177643

>> No.8177678

>>8177643
AatP Tea Time Nostalgia

>> No.8177694

>>8176219

http://tw.taobao.com/item/12810946379.htm?spm=a1z3o.7406521.101.239.Y3oHn9&abtest=_AB-LR517-PV517_1271

>> No.8177757

>>8176412
if you can nitpick literally every part of the outfit, it's ita
>saggy beret
>bad hair
>no makeup
>dumb scarf
>deer merkin badge
>black bra showing through sweater
>ugly elastic belt
>cheap skirt about 6 inches too short
>wristcuffs
>thumb ring
>legwarmers
>black tights don't match black shoes

Also the whole color combo she chose is just terrible, so everything is clashing.

>> No.8177773

>>8177694
Dude, thank you so much. I'm not super skilled at searching for stuff like this yet.

>> No.8178061
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my first coord. Looking back on it, I should have worn tights, and made sure my wig wasn't slipping back. plus im fat.
but any other tips?

>> No.8178069

>>8178061
The work blouse doesn't really work, and your petticoat seems to be the wrong shape/too short.
There's not much of anything going to give crit on.
The shoes are awful too.

>> No.8178073

>>8178061
Yeah petti needs to be bigger/correct shape to balance out your fatness. Melikestea makes fabulous petti's with tons of poof, and she also has a tutorial online if you're handy with a needle and don't want to pay the price.

I'm sure you know the shoes are awful so I won't lecture you about that.

>> No.8178074

>>8178061
Oh god. Never wear those shoes again.
Is this bait?
Also iron/steam that tortured dress.

>> No.8178078

>>8178061
Disguise your vendetta a little better? I mean seriously, dat filename.

To answer the question genuinely though, APPROPRIATE SHOES
APPROPRIATE BLOUSE
IRON YOUR SHIT
and ACCESSORIZE

>> No.8178089

>>8178069
>>8178073
>>8178074
>>8178078
thanks guys. and dont worry- those shoes are long gone.

>> No.8178115

>>8168130
If she had worn a white blouse it would have been cute. Also
>purse
>>8178061
the only acceptable thing in this coord is the wig, and possibly the jsk (although it looks like a bad replica). Need a real blouse, real shoes and real leg wear. "Real" being actually lolita appropriate in this case. I am not going to call vendetta because I have called my own pictures similar names in the past, it is fine to laugh at and insult yourself....