>>10819215
agree, but part of the problem is also the death of concrit culture so i'll give some.
>>10818739
terrible drag makeup, weird belt, almost looks like she used the belt to make a sack dress into a gathered shape but hard to tell, stretched out socks that don't fit, clashing mix of warm and cool pinks, headbow looks cheap and wrinkled.
>>10818740
amish silhouette doesn't read lolita, crusty looking normie faux fur coat, pilgrim hat, printed tights look weird with the moitie heels but that may be subjective
>>10818741
she's not skinny but idk about 'obese' kek. what's more ita is the gross sheer socks and pained expression on her face. reddish orange lipstick clashes. also subjective but those chiffon blouses almost always look cheap and ita.
>>10818771
burgundy is too dark to go with that jsk. pretty sure the jsk is axes femme which explains why it's a bit too short and a-line to read lolita, even for oldschool. the socks are terrible, just buy brand socks. use complexion makeup. dye your hair a neutral color or stick to blackxwhite. take coord pics in front of a less cluttered and ugly background. she has potential imo
>>10818919
get bangs. this set is just ugly but she didn't exactly coord it badly. it's the pose making her look slightly retarded, and is she in the backrooms?
>>10818920
jsk is like a foot too short. the 2edgy4u facial expression and pose makes her look old and angry.
>>10818938
get bangs. has the vibe of trying too hard to experiment before learning the basics. ugly normie shoes
>>10818940
don't love the textured blouse which also looks too small but otherwise alright
>>10818941
get bangs. jacket and tights are too normie and clash.
>>10818945
for the love of god get bangs. get more flattering glasses. coord-wise, just start over with something way simpler.
>>10818975
same as the above - start over with something simpler. you're not cosplaying. horror themed tattoos clash with sweet lolita, wear long sleeves next time.