/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

>>7048341
It's looking really great so far! These are just some little things I've notice, and most of it is probably because you're just trying it on, not wearing it to a con or something.

The whole thing needs to be ironed desperately
Your little fold at the waist thing looks really poofy? In an odd wrinkly way. Are you using a koshi himo or a date-jime? If not, they might help. You could probably just make some out of scrap material too.
The collar on what's susposed to be your juban looks odd, but I don't know if it's just the picture or what. I don't want to be condescending if you already know all this stuff, but this site (http://kidorakujapan.com/wear/women_kimono_kimono.html)) might help you with both of those things?
Your obiage looks a little awkward. Where do you have it tucked in? It should be right near the overlap of your kimono. Also remember that Hiyoko's obiage isn't tied and then tucked in to the obi, but rather one side (A) is tucked in, then the other (B) is pulled over where A is tucked in, then B is tucked in. I can show an image if that doesn't make sense.
The bow on your obijime looks doesn't look quite big enough, and it's fraying a lot. I know Hiyoko's is a little frayed at the ends, but you might want to knot it (if you haven't already, I can't tell) to prevent further fraying.
The you're pulling the sleeves makes everything pull in a really bad way. I can't tell if you sewed the sleeves all along the armscye or not, but if you did...don't.
Also >>7049718 can shut the fuck up, those shoes are fucking perfect. Pic related.
Like I said, you're doing great so far! Just keep up all the good work!