/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

>>9919985
>>9920107

I legit thought you meant “try hard” as in “trying hard to parody ita coord”. The wig is even the stereotypical wig all itas seem to aim for with their first coord, either spot-on for an ita-on-purpose coord or you need to slap yourself if you were serious with it.

Anyway, I gave it a shot improving the coord, but to be honest with you, this dress isn’t the best of Bodyline, and that’s not because it’s Bodyline. The trim makes the bodice look tubeish, and the chiffon actually seems to be a different mint than the print itself. If you aren’t completely stuck with it I’d suggest at least picking the sax blue colourway or another print.

Other than the wig, the rest of the coord itself doesn’t seem too horrible. I’d suggest getting backup socks because tights sometimes go sheer when worn, so the whites will no longer match. The print being already very busy, I’d suggest something with smaller berries anyway.

Additionally, for a coord involving mint (never really a standard colourway) and mostly taobao/offbrand, you’re also going to have to keep an eye on the colours. They don’t need to perfectly match each other, but you definitely want to look like you’re mostly wearing only red, pink and mint, and not like 50 shades of close-enough.jpg.

If you want to look a little bit less like it’s your first coord, I’d suggest going with a pink chiffon blouse, coloured blouses and chiffon are both more up-to-date than a basic white blouse. The basic white blouse is safer, though, less of a headache with making sure your pinks match, and easier to match with future jsks.