/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

>>8901681
I think this dress and blouse look lovely together. Everything else is kind of meh, though. Is that the included headbow? I would ditch it, it's too big and it would look better with bangs. Same with the flower. I'd stick to maybe something like a low bun with some cute hair clips. Or a black hat would look nice.
There's nothing wrong with black shoes, but those don't look very lolita-appropriate, maybe try looking for some simple bodyline shoes like pic related. The shoes look a bit isolated because they are the only black object in the coord. To balance this out, maybe try using a black bag, hat, or bolero. Or all three.
Colorwise, it's probably impossible to match the grey-blue, so I would skip that. You could probably do a dusty pink blouse and shoes, if you wanted.
I don't know how to say this without sounding like an meanie elitist, but it's probably best to try to do some very basic and reliable coords before you get creative. I may be wrong, but it doesn't seem like you have many lolita-specific items, judging from your legwear, shoes, and headwear.

>>8114147
Would BL's SHOE300 be ok? They also have a heart shaped buckle and I think these are a BTSSB knock off but not sure of which design.