/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

hey guys! i just wanted to ask some stuff for my aoi cosplay.
first, are my shoes.. okay? they're honestly not as bright as the picture makes it seems, and i wanted to make sure they were close to canon as i could get.
also, i've looked at the aoi reference sheet and noticed that her hair clip is.. quite literally a paper clip, so would covering that in a kind of a better material (maybe a thin layer of clay) be okay?
i still have a few things i'm fixing, like my shorts & jacekt. i'm using a completely different jacket (this was just so i could get the overall look/feel), and also making the pants a little bit tighter, cause they're super loose.