/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

>>8703086
I like the way you arrange your collages in a clean and simple manner and I definitely think there’s a place for well thought out larme style collages, especially in light of the amount of irrelevant crap that crops up on tumblr.

I think the top collage is successful but desu the second is a little awakened looking, the dot tights look a bit busy to me and I think the sweater would look a bit odd over the dress since the sleeves of it are so long, not to mention it looks like white hearts on grey as opposed to cream/ pale ivory.

I think it's obvious you have coording skills, I just think it needs a bit of refining. I'd definitely recommend going though larme archives again for some inspiration, plus to help really fix how the style works and looks in your mind.

Also if you're able to, it might be nice to have some makeup looks in there as well since it's such a big part of the larme look.

Anyway, keep it up anon, I'd love to see what else you come up with.