/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

>>7627366
> Give you shoes a scrub, the black mark is off putting. A bit of elbow grease will sort that out.
> Nice basic coordinate, the colors go well.
>Natural hair? If so your hair is in great condition.
> Dress looks a bit tight on you, undo shirring ribbon a little if it has any?
> A pink bolero or cardigan would have looks great here.

Overall 8/10, a few changes here and there and it would be a perfectly fine coordinate. Good improvement, keep at it.