/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

>>8461552
Hey, I hope you don't mind but I did a super quick draw over with my trackpad. Sry, wish I had my tablet on me argh. You still have a few anatomy issues. So her head could still do with being a bit smaller. I extended the forarms with my amazing photoshop skills, since the anatomy is a bit off. The arm on the right, I extended down a bit, as well as lengthened the forarm. The front-most knee could do with a little bit of definition (idk something as simple as a highlight to showcase the curve). Doing this will help with the foreshortening. The feet are a tad blunt. It would really add to this if you just went in and gave a little bit of shape to where the ankle curves into the foot. Think of how manga artists do that really well. Finally, I upped the saturation, added a low opacity multiply layer and color fixed it a bit towards purple (b/c Homura). I thought this would help with what I saw as muddy colors.

I have flux on right now so idk how this all looks on a screen w/o it. Do these few things and I honestly think this will be one of the most beautful prints I've seen in a while.