/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

Speaking of giving advice, I really want to nicely tell this girl all my issues with this but it's in P&L and I don't want to get ripped apart but...there's all these little nitpicks that come together and make this pretty bad. I know this girl is capable of making beautiful dresses, but this is sad.
>length looks awkward for a dress of that style
maybe it's just long on her and she intends to sell it? Which she really shouldn't right now...
>white portion of bodice is too empty
Again, it not only seems to be too big on her, but it's a huge blank space and it could use...idk some lacing? Bows? Something. I feel like the space is too wide for a row of bows, though.
>chest bow looks too big
>the center piece of the waist bow is too wide
makes the bow look droopy and wonky
>needs to add an extra row or two of shirring
right now, the space between the shirring is really wide and on a larger person, they poof out and it just looks like fat rolls. Adding another row in between each existing row would smooth that out much more nicely.