/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

>>10123766
The shaded ones look so much better, I actually really love the way you colored them. I get preferring lighter/flat colors, but it's a good idea to keep in mind that printed products kill a lot of the saturation/contrast, so if it currently looks a bit too much for you it'll most likely look just right when printed. So remember to always order a couple of sample charms with different values of saturation/contrast first to see how it actually differs from your computer/tablet screen.
The proportions are also starting to look better, but still need some refining. Although I can personally attest that learning to draw chibis, despite their simplicity, will still take trial and error, so don't stress about it and just keep experimenting with different types of SD looks: not all chibis have to follow the "huge head, tiny body" look either if you don't feel like it works for you. Pic related: while the proportions are quite even and not ridiculously short and chubby, it's still recognizeable a chibi and extremely cute too.
Other than that, I'd still focus on making the linework a bit more polished: while leaving gaps in your linework is probably a stylistic choise it's always a fine line of whether it looks good and intentional or if it just looks rushed and unfinished. But I think you've lined the tip of the witch hat and the staff really nicely, so I think you'll do fine once you spend some time refining the style you want to go for.

Sorry for the wall of text, I just really like people who are able to take feedback. Good luck anon!