/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

>>8109151
Using yellow/brown tones for blush on pale skintones makes them look really sickly, and the blush is too strong. I also would advise against the white shine on top of the blush as well, it makes the nose, cheeks and knees look kind of like pimples. That's up to you though. Like someone else said, the combination of brown/black outlines is jarring in some places, and the hand looks very messy there. You should spend more time on your lines. I would also recommend getting rid of the white lines for his eyelashes (?), it looks strange and distracting.
His head is also placed a little too far back on his neck, so it kind of looks like his neck is going to snap from the weight of that melon. You gotta remember where the neck connects to the skull. This is a messy edit because I don't have my tablet right now, but hopefully you get the idea of the placement. The neck on your other one is fine though.