/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

>>7387767
>>7387980

okay, so i just wanted to say a few things;
1, you look fine, you're cute. 2, are you using a bodyline seifuku for a base? if so then thats fine, bodylines seifuku is actually pretty nice, but you need to make some changes;
first change in being with the ribbon that goes around the collar, theres only one stripe/ rbbon that goes around and its also thick. the second is with your tie, which is self explanitory. the last is the little white panel, i think its called a decency panel? i honestly dont even know what its called, but mako doesnt have one.
also your eye make up is fine imo, though mako has very open, alert eyes and they way that you're doing it, with it mostly being on the top lashline, makes your eyes look more sleek, rather than alert (if that makes sense) so maybe try different techniques out and stuff

i hope this helps you and any other mako cosplayers out